for Novocaine9/13/2018 c7 autumngold
Thank you for your incredible story! I'm amazed about how you've made the Harry Potter books so much better! I never thought Harry and Ginny made sense, especially the thought that they looked like his parents, gross. Thank you for giving Harry a partner who will let him realize his dreams. Fabulous story! Can't wait for more!
Thank you for your incredible story! I'm amazed about how you've made the Harry Potter books so much better! I never thought Harry and Ginny made sense, especially the thought that they looked like his parents, gross. Thank you for giving Harry a partner who will let him realize his dreams. Fabulous story! Can't wait for more!
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25Sorceress of Magic
Ooh serious daphne, I hope we get some ship cuteness at this event lol
25Sorceress of MagicOoh serious daphne, I hope we get some ship cuteness at this event lol
9/13/2018 c7 Lin
Excellent story! I’m really looking forward to the next update:)
Excellent story! I’m really looking forward to the next update:)
9/13/2018 c7 hubriswriter
The direction is well thought out and quite enjoyable to follow. Might I suggest just the occasional glimpse of the other characters life away from work. I'm sure most of your readers are applying preconceived lives to Fleur, Tracy, and Draco and that may differ significantly from your view. Not whole chapters, but a para or two might do.
Re HP and GW, the biblical 'when I was a child..." may apply to their 'relationship.' Can't wait to see how you tell it.
The direction is well thought out and quite enjoyable to follow. Might I suggest just the occasional glimpse of the other characters life away from work. I'm sure most of your readers are applying preconceived lives to Fleur, Tracy, and Draco and that may differ significantly from your view. Not whole chapters, but a para or two might do.
Re HP and GW, the biblical 'when I was a child..." may apply to their 'relationship.' Can't wait to see how you tell it.
9/13/2018 c7 3alix33
“The GSC consultants office”, not “They GSC consultants office”.
“compromised in any way”, not “compromised in anyway”.
I’m glad for Rosette that the meeting seems to have gone so well.
“fair bit left over”, not “fair bit leftover”.
AW! At Harry’s plea that the orphans get bought more and preferably new clothes.
“Worst comes to worst”, not “Worst comes to worse”.
3alix33“The GSC consultants office”, not “They GSC consultants office”.
“compromised in any way”, not “compromised in anyway”.
I’m glad for Rosette that the meeting seems to have gone so well.
“fair bit left over”, not “fair bit leftover”.
AW! At Harry’s plea that the orphans get bought more and preferably new clothes.
“Worst comes to worst”, not “Worst comes to worse”.
9/13/2018 c7 bowpow
The fact the Harry went to Daphne and not Hermione for relationship advise is quite the telling sign that Harry is beginning to trust her more than he thinks he does. I know that this is already going to be a Haphne pairing but still a great way to start!
The fact the Harry went to Daphne and not Hermione for relationship advise is quite the telling sign that Harry is beginning to trust her more than he thinks he does. I know that this is already going to be a Haphne pairing but still a great way to start!
9/13/2018 c7 1Thranduil Arryn
Things are flowing along nicely and I can finally see that Harry is moving away from Ginny and moving to Daphne. I like how you've made this a lot more mature on the relationship side and I hope the break up won't be too angsty, tears are expected just hope nothing too bad is going to follow.
1Thranduil ArrynThings are flowing along nicely and I can finally see that Harry is moving away from Ginny and moving to Daphne. I like how you've made this a lot more mature on the relationship side and I hope the break up won't be too angsty, tears are expected just hope nothing too bad is going to follow.
9/13/2018 c7 sunsethill
I'm enjoying seeing the diversity in the businesses that the group is working to support. But nothing will get Harry going like helping the orphans who so desperately need it. Andromeda is a good choice, I think. You illustrated nicely why Harry and Ginny just aren't going to make it, but it should be fun to see her reaction to having to plan an event. That sure would cut into Quidditch practice time. ;-)
I'm enjoying seeing the diversity in the businesses that the group is working to support. But nothing will get Harry going like helping the orphans who so desperately need it. Andromeda is a good choice, I think. You illustrated nicely why Harry and Ginny just aren't going to make it, but it should be fun to see her reaction to having to plan an event. That sure would cut into Quidditch practice time. ;-)
9/13/2018 c7 1The-Untempered-Schism666
I was excited the see the notification of your story pop up to the point I have an old fanfic half read on another tab loving your work and wishing for more
1The-Untempered-Schism666I was excited the see the notification of your story pop up to the point I have an old fanfic half read on another tab loving your work and wishing for more