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8/2/2018 c1 5plums
I like it so far.

I thought the info dump on all the individual families maybe didn’t belong in the opening chapter. Just felt like something that should’ve come up in a chapter or two. Like the time skips around the fall of voldie and the time it took Daphne to get her license maybe could have been used to show some other things.

Either way, looking forward to where you take this... just so long as Hermione doesn’t get overly self righteous about his methods, My gut instinct is that he’ll have to get quite dirty to properly do this.
8/2/2018 c1 flight.of.the.phoenix.86
very interesting...can't wait for more!

update soon!
8/2/2018 c1 Suse B
Interesting! I'm not sure I buy (from J.K. either) even capable students all the sudden able to do adult jobs with no real experience, but if I suspend that ...
8/2/2018 c1 2TheMonitor1079
Great start. Definitely looking forward to more.
8/2/2018 c1 trispectrum
An excellent start. Looking forward to seeing how your story continues to develop.
8/2/2018 c1 Guest
An incredible first chapter. Definitely can't wait to read more. One tiny inconsistency, the capitalization of "Borogoves". In some instances it is lowercase while in others it is capitalized (excluding the beginning of a sentence of course).
8/2/2018 c1 igorcarneiro17
I love it when i see a story different from all the cliches. Thank you and i am looking forward to keep reading.
8/2/2018 c1 HaphneFan4Lyf
A very promising start. Really liked the concept. A much realistic than many other stories I have read. Hoping for regular updates.
8/2/2018 c1 Guest
Awesome start
8/2/2018 c1 14Dorothea Greengrass
I like the premise of this story, and I'm curious to see how you'll continue it.
8/2/2018 c1 Guest
A fresh plot. *slams hand down the table* I LIKE IT!

Seriously though, I like idea of “turning Borogoves nack to humans.” This kind of story isn’t one I’ve read for this pairing. It started off looking like Harry was going to be an absurdly rich and OP character but I like how you managed to make it so that he doesn’t wield his immense political power in his own hands and use it to bully the government to implement his changes. Your way of Harry pulling the strings to make those who owe him fealty vote his way feels more realistic, more like real world dirty politics.
8/2/2018 c1 imagine and break boredom
fresh and new concept .harry/Daphne my fav couple
8/2/2018 c1 FrozenWave
I've only read about half of the first chapter so far, as I don't have the time to finish it right now, but I'm already very impressed with this story. Definitely going to be following this one!
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