for Novocaine4/15/2022 c12 snow in the darkness
despite how immature Ron sound, I actually understand where he came from. What happen to Ron is actually frequently happen to people after war. Racism
despite how immature Ron sound, I actually understand where he came from. What happen to Ron is actually frequently happen to people after war. Racism
4/15/2022 c9 snow in the darkness
damn I really like how mature and childish Ginny act and their breakup, it's just so human. Ginny is a good woman, and very loyal she followed Harry without question many times, but I can see the issues here, while in canon Harry take a normal life approach by being an auror and probably head auror in times but in this one Harry is basically some noble with so much power almost literally make him a king only not in name, and that fact will force him to dive deep into the life of politicians and nobles society at the same times and Ginny definitely cannot keep up with it and it's make sense
damn I really like how mature and childish Ginny act and their breakup, it's just so human. Ginny is a good woman, and very loyal she followed Harry without question many times, but I can see the issues here, while in canon Harry take a normal life approach by being an auror and probably head auror in times but in this one Harry is basically some noble with so much power almost literally make him a king only not in name, and that fact will force him to dive deep into the life of politicians and nobles society at the same times and Ginny definitely cannot keep up with it and it's make sense
4/13/2022 c25 jwhitey
This has been a super compelling story - very different from most I’ve read. Really looking forward to more!
This has been a super compelling story - very different from most I’ve read. Really looking forward to more!
4/1/2022 c25 Guest
Love the story the slow build .Now I have to wait To quote Inego Montoya I hate waiting even if it's for the six fingered man. Thanks
Love the story the slow build .Now I have to wait To quote Inego Montoya I hate waiting even if it's for the six fingered man. Thanks
3/30/2022 c12 mehwhatever
It's hard not to feel for Ron when you look at this from his perspective. He's been kept completely out of the loop, but is expected to be as understanding as those who have been working closely with the project the entire time. Hermione was right when she said he didn't know anything, but that wasn't his fault.
It's hard not to feel for Ron when you look at this from his perspective. He's been kept completely out of the loop, but is expected to be as understanding as those who have been working closely with the project the entire time. Hermione was right when she said he didn't know anything, but that wasn't his fault.
3/30/2022 c7 mehwhatever
The most magical thing about this whole story is how smoothly this business runs
The most magical thing about this whole story is how smoothly this business runs
3/28/2022 c13 Sharkugan
Hey, love the story so far. Amazing job, don’t why I can only get good fanfics in the middle of the night when I need to sleep haha. I was just wondering why not Prongs/Marauder Institute?
Hey, love the story so far. Amazing job, don’t why I can only get good fanfics in the middle of the night when I need to sleep haha. I was just wondering why not Prongs/Marauder Institute?
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3/11/2022 c1 
1lastgodofwar
I liked alot of this but not pumped with the way the story is moving. The first breach Nott did should have resulted in him losing everything. That he didnt told him he would get away with another. Its more a political story then a wizarding story now and while i love hearing about what harry does after hogwarts this goes from harry making a difference to showing harry should have just taken all the money but a small amount from the death eater familys told them they had to get jobs to keep being able to eat so they would have 0 time to plot anthing against him. Its just going a way that makes me lose interest now but i think it is a beautifully written story.
1lastgodofwarI liked alot of this but not pumped with the way the story is moving. The first breach Nott did should have resulted in him losing everything. That he didnt told him he would get away with another. Its more a political story then a wizarding story now and while i love hearing about what harry does after hogwarts this goes from harry making a difference to showing harry should have just taken all the money but a small amount from the death eater familys told them they had to get jobs to keep being able to eat so they would have 0 time to plot anthing against him. Its just going a way that makes me lose interest now but i think it is a beautifully written story.
3/4/2022 c2 Guest
I know it's early and the story is finished, but where is Luna?
I know it's early and the story is finished, but where is Luna?
3/3/2022 c25 12Village-Mystic
Glad that there's a part two! This was good stuff, but lots of plot still hanging.
12Village-MysticGlad that there's a part two! This was good stuff, but lots of plot still hanging.