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9/23/2018 c1 CaptainYellow
Indeed, Ginny was his best source of comfort.
I like how you wrote the progress of Harry's recovery; he goes from "curling up in a ball", then he's "sitting", and finally he's "standing". Similarly, his side of the bed is "cold", then "cooling", then "warm", and finally he is there with Ginny.
Only 463 words, no dialogues, but you managed to convey so much. Great job!
8/25/2018 c1 justanothermugglefan
Great little fic! There is something I love about one shots without dialogues.
8/2/2018 c1 24Tonirae
Oh, I just melted
8/2/2018 c1 scrappy8
great job

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