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8/30/2018 c14 Juddysbuddy
I love Seven's conversation with Tom about her parents and the Borg Queen. Tom is really great at listening to people and helping them when they ask. Tom was able to lead Seven to see that the Queen was probably lying to her without saying it first. Thank you for writing.
8/30/2018 c22 Juddysbuddy
I am so glad that you told Seven's story. I'm glad that she had her mother at first in Unimatrix Zero and had others to assist her through the years, including Axum.
8/27/2018 c22 80tmtcltb-kals
This was a really lovely glimpse into how the relationship between Seven and Axum came to be. I enjoy the fact that you gave us a glimpse of Icheb and the Doctor’s feelings on the relationship, as they gave us quite a bit of color. And the scenario that led to ask him being in the alpha quadrant was very plausible. Thank you for another wonderful story!
8/27/2018 c21 tmtcltb-kals
Icheb as March maker is adorable!
8/27/2018 c20 tmtcltb-kals
One thing that I really appreciate about your writing is that it makes me see the episodes in a different light. I definitely want to go back and watch these scenes again, as this story is making me appreciate how very difficult the entire situation was for Seven. To find a life she lost, and then to immediately lose it again. She really is a wonderful character to explore. And I agree with you about the lack of need for the outfits ;)
8/27/2018 c19 tmtcltb-kals
I can only imagine how unsettling that moment was for Seven. She already lost two lives (as a child and then as a Borg) and now is learning that she really lost another one. Yet there was no time to process anything.
8/27/2018 c18 tmtcltb-kals
That last line was so chilling and illustrative of the deep fear that must exist in Unimatrix Zero.
8/26/2018 c21 26Six of Twelve
Having Chakotay being a rebound relationship after Seven lost Axum I'd a great explanation!
8/25/2018 c22 72Beth6787
Beautifully done ! A perfect companion piece to Icheb’s story ‘Destiny’.
8/25/2018 c19 6TLWtlw
Great new chapter.
8/23/2018 c17 80tmtcltb-kals
It’s delightful to see Seven a little nervous about seeing Axum. I think it goes to show the death of her feelings for him that she is unable to keep her focus on the work
8/23/2018 c16 tmtcltb-kals
I knew that this incident was coming, but you really highlighted the emotions of the incident and the impact it had on Seven. It was also nice seeing her perspective on the incident now, given that we previously read about her thoughts when she spoke to ask Axum.
8/23/2018 c15 tmtcltb-kals
That entire situation with the Kadi was hysterical. I was laughing through that entire scene. As annoying as the Doctor was, I have to feel a little bad for him. Seven was completely oblivious to his true motives
8/23/2018 c14 tmtcltb-kals
I can certainly understand Seven’s anger towards her father, but even then I imagine seeing him with the queen was jarring. There is simply no way to see someone that you once loved in that position and be unaffected. I thought having her reach out and speak to Tom was brilliant. And, of course, it makes sense that would accidentally lead to her spying on Tom and B’Elanna
8/23/2018 c13 tmtcltb-kals
I wonder whether knowing that Erin wanted to leave, but was on successful in convincing her husband, would make Seven soften towards her mother.
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