for Legend5/9 c32 Guest
Aren't Alder and Diantha also generalists?
Aren't Alder and Diantha also generalists?
4/20 c8 Red
Meh af
Meh af
3/20 c18 kageknuser2710
I swear they are all being waaaay too hard on him. They keep forcing him into deep waters yet complain about his inexperience. Maybe give him a bit more than a month? hahahha poor kid
I swear they are all being waaaay too hard on him. They keep forcing him into deep waters yet complain about his inexperience. Maybe give him a bit more than a month? hahahha poor kid
2/17 c38 agustinvincenzo
Please could we get the next chapter that is the best pokemon fanfiction i ever reade please i need more
Please could we get the next chapter that is the best pokemon fanfiction i ever reade please i need more
2/11 c38 Guest
is there going to be a new chapter
is there going to be a new chapter
1/25 c1 Reborn A Phoenix
Yes, let's give a newbie trainer that almost died an aggressive and problematic Dragon type pokemon as a starter, what could possibly go wrong?
Yes, let's give a newbie trainer that almost died an aggressive and problematic Dragon type pokemon as a starter, what could possibly go wrong?
12/3/2024 c38 
1kaisonsheart
sad to see this story left to the dust. ive re-read it probly a dozen times, and the dissapointment of the hiatus never fails to make me frown.
the warning about the change of writing style seems to be redundant, story flow and cadence are still smooth and very easy to read. id love to see some of the smallerplot devices start to either conclude, or build into a twist of minor-events-turned-major; perhaps with some fun fluff sprinkled around and through.
either way best of wishes
1kaisonsheartsad to see this story left to the dust. ive re-read it probly a dozen times, and the dissapointment of the hiatus never fails to make me frown.
the warning about the change of writing style seems to be redundant, story flow and cadence are still smooth and very easy to read. id love to see some of the smallerplot devices start to either conclude, or build into a twist of minor-events-turned-major; perhaps with some fun fluff sprinkled around and through.
either way best of wishes
10/5/2024 c38 Guest
What happened?! Why haven't you returned? Hope all is okay
What happened?! Why haven't you returned? Hope all is okay
9/12/2024 c34 Pinkypi
it was pretty good your description of Suicune sucked though. xD I thought it was Suicune for 2 seconds but the horn description was off as was the mane. It's friggin purple. not silver or creamy white xD The "horns" aren't really horns so much as a crest of sorts and they do not go up then back that infers a curve. They stick pretty straight. I'm sitting here like did writer san make up a new pokemon?
it was pretty good your description of Suicune sucked though. xD I thought it was Suicune for 2 seconds but the horn description was off as was the mane. It's friggin purple. not silver or creamy white xD The "horns" aren't really horns so much as a crest of sorts and they do not go up then back that infers a curve. They stick pretty straight. I'm sitting here like did writer san make up a new pokemon?
9/11/2024 c4 Pinkypi
Pokemon has very similar breeding mechanics to the races of Tamriel. Where the mother usually wins out to what race the offspring will be. The first true exception to that was the Bretens who apparently came from a long line of interbreeding between elves and men. The first thought to my mind with a Charmander having it's primary typing being dragon and secondary typing as fire. Is a long line of female Charizards always breeding with a Dragon type culminating in the end result of Ash's current Charmander. It's still a fire type though. So even if this one is currently following the trend of its dragon attacks being stronger. I feel like if its genetics fully come online (shorthand for Bill's explanation). That it'd rather end up with both powerful dragon and fire attacks. Instead of favoring one over the other? That's my thought anyways based off your explanation tbh.
Pokemon has very similar breeding mechanics to the races of Tamriel. Where the mother usually wins out to what race the offspring will be. The first true exception to that was the Bretens who apparently came from a long line of interbreeding between elves and men. The first thought to my mind with a Charmander having it's primary typing being dragon and secondary typing as fire. Is a long line of female Charizards always breeding with a Dragon type culminating in the end result of Ash's current Charmander. It's still a fire type though. So even if this one is currently following the trend of its dragon attacks being stronger. I feel like if its genetics fully come online (shorthand for Bill's explanation). That it'd rather end up with both powerful dragon and fire attacks. Instead of favoring one over the other? That's my thought anyways based off your explanation tbh.
9/8/2024 c38 JSB1
Well, after reading all of this I can definitely tell you liked Age of Ultron. A bit too many quotes for my liking (especially with Mewtwo's dialogue), but you do you, I guess.
Well, after reading all of this I can definitely tell you liked Age of Ultron. A bit too many quotes for my liking (especially with Mewtwo's dialogue), but you do you, I guess.