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5/15 c6 Banjo the Fox
Eh, done.
5/15 c5 Banjo the Fox
Cute and well done.
5/15 c4 Banjo the Fox
Well done and amusing, always hated Brock sexualizing every woman and little girl he met.
5/15 c3 Banjo the Fox
Good read and all... I guess, just feels like it's gonna bash Misty.
5/15 c2 Banjo the Fox
Love it, nice touch having Pikachu show up.
5/14 c1 Banjo the Fox
Well done and rather unique plot. Slakoth was pretty... meh, but love the Scyther pick.
5/11 c7 Guest
Please update
5/6 c7 41Atomsk the Pirate King
Now this story has some interesting twists. Can’t wait to see more.
5/5 c1 Guest
None of Kanto's gyms were messed up besides Giovanni's.
5/3 c7 lonetigar20
Awesome can't wait for more ;)
5/2 c7 annoymous
your AN says that aj's gym is fake but i would like to point out that aj himself tells ash and the others that he isn't an official gym he only set it up in order to train his sandshrew and didin't leave until he has 100 wins
5/1 c7 6Yaw6113
Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciate it and enjoyed it a lot.
5/1 c7 Vonta01
The AN LMAO I’m crying
5/1 c1 biob1
Nice work
5/1 c7 God of Wind 200
honestly I'm disappointed that ash won't be getting all of his cannon pokemon but I love this story because you got rid of misty traveling with ash cuz she just seems to do os hold ash back and as for
A.J I don't think the league would have a problem with him at all outside of them telling him to make sure that everyone knows it's not an official Gym
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