for The Dragon Slayer7/1/2019 c1 Ashalim
Why did you do this to me?
I really want to expand this story but if only I can write. It hurt it hurt so bad, why did you do this to me oh the God Emperor of Penguin, why?
Why did you do this to me?
I really want to expand this story but if only I can write. It hurt it hurt so bad, why did you do this to me oh the God Emperor of Penguin, why?
1/19/2019 c1 A Fan
Hm. Oddly enough, this one just didn't seem to make me feel anything. I have read at least 20 similar fics that are as depressing as this and felt grief and injustice from those. This? I didn't feel a thing. It feels halfhearted and not really... real? Genuine? Hm. Did you, the Author, feel anything while writing this? If you did not, then that could explain it. I'm definitely not 'numb' to it as I just read another to confirm that theory. Maybe it's just that this is like REALLY ooc so I can't get good imagery in my head? Oh well. Good day.
Hm. Oddly enough, this one just didn't seem to make me feel anything. I have read at least 20 similar fics that are as depressing as this and felt grief and injustice from those. This? I didn't feel a thing. It feels halfhearted and not really... real? Genuine? Hm. Did you, the Author, feel anything while writing this? If you did not, then that could explain it. I'm definitely not 'numb' to it as I just read another to confirm that theory. Maybe it's just that this is like REALLY ooc so I can't get good imagery in my head? Oh well. Good day.
8/15/2018 c1 
25linkjames24
Depressing. But its Yangs! Shit. reading Jaune ask for Pyrrha was sad. Wow..Who ruined your day GEP?
25linkjames24Depressing. But its Yangs! Shit. reading Jaune ask for Pyrrha was sad. Wow..Who ruined your day GEP?
8/14/2018 c1 Scyheharvester
Huh, interesting. Though I’ve never imagined someone like Juane to be the drinking type though. But I guess it’s a way to make him forget about his partners death and make it seem she’s still with him.
Huh, interesting. Though I’ve never imagined someone like Juane to be the drinking type though. But I guess it’s a way to make him forget about his partners death and make it seem she’s still with him.
8/6/2018 c1 Guest
I take it you've read Imyoshi's Butter too?
Ahh, the ancient GEP technique of making extremely depressive fanfiction of fanfiction. Had been missing it.
I take it you've read Imyoshi's Butter too?
Ahh, the ancient GEP technique of making extremely depressive fanfiction of fanfiction. Had been missing it.
8/5/2018 c1 6SpookyNooodle
Well, at least your attitude matches the one from reddit. Not sure why you write so much stuff for Jaune if you dislike his character and those who like him though. Just do your own thing.
6SpookyNooodleWell, at least your attitude matches the one from reddit. Not sure why you write so much stuff for Jaune if you dislike his character and those who like him though. Just do your own thing.
8/4/2018 c1 6Mad Library Scientist
A bit dark, but Yang's daddy kink made it worthwhile. Maybe you should write a Taiyang/Yang story or stories in the future?
6Mad Library ScientistA bit dark, but Yang's daddy kink made it worthwhile. Maybe you should write a Taiyang/Yang story or stories in the future?