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1/1/2020 c3 Lawoi
Updated please
10/1/2018 c3 War O' The Willow
I'm officially invested, cannot wait to see where this goes! The only 'criticism' I have is that Bardock sounds too polite and reasonable. Given he's talking to people who saved him, and royalty to boot, it makes some sense, but I'm concerned he's more refined than he should be, given his attitude in the movie.

But Bardock being a concerned pragmatic dad is exactly what I wanted, and its what I got. Kudos!
9/11/2018 c1 2Markisaway
Loved the chapter! Rip to the god level lemon writing, fingers crossed to you caving once or twice. I can’t wait for more chapters! Keep it up
8/12/2018 c3 a guy
seems ok ,but wouldnt bardock a power level of 10,000 be able to knock him out quickly or its just he was holding back cause they needed black mantha alive and how old is bardock in your fic and more pls
8/12/2018 c3 17gemm1mt
Awesome man, please update soon.
8/12/2018 c3 Blake2020
Awesome I wonder since Bardock he fell unconscious and his saiyan pod travel to a different dimension or is this universe same as the dragon ball z canon universe as well or justice league universe and Now Bardock landing in the Ocean and awoken up and saved by Aquaman and his people and more Bardock looking for his sons and curious if their in this justice league universe or back in the dragon ball universe and by the way can Bardock learn the instant Transmission technique in this story and more train himself to be move powerful then the canon Bardock was as well and find his sons if their in this universe or the other as well. Keep up and pretty good as well.
8/12/2018 c3 twisterblake2015
So finally Bardock reach earth and met some underwater friends and made some new allies it seem to me and curious I wonder how powerful Bardock is now since his recover and is he about strong as Zarbon now maybe and probably not powerful enough to beat the Ginyu force yet since this Bardock not as powerful a the namek Goku was in the canon of a power-level 180 thousand. Intrigued for the next chapter and went Bardock meets superman and other justice heroes as well.
8/10/2018 c2 jexcel
Interesting Enough To read
8/9/2018 c2 cyber
i like this chapter keep it up
8/9/2018 c1 dragonfox123
Interesting chapter and plot and idea
8/9/2018 c2 kord
no harems, please!
8/9/2018 c2 a guy
i have not yet seen where is the dc part of this unless you're going for shared universe crossover thing. story is ok ,but how is this a crossover when we have seen only the dragon ball side only right now,
I would prefer him being sent into the dc universe type thing over the shared universe type thing but its your fic not mine so hop to see moreand bardock is more or less the same age as gok was when he married chichi i think which as 20 yrs old give or 2 yrs
8/8/2018 c2 Blake2020
Wonderful chapter and quite a while my friend since your story of The new face of Justice with Trunks ending by the way and this story is intriguing as well and
so I assume this is a small harem here BardockxKaraSuperGirlxKaraPowergirl from different dimension since both are similar in looks but way different form each other.
8/8/2018 c2 twisterblake2015
Good to see you as well man and yes this chapter surprising and quiet a different fate for Bardock this time here as well and wonder what new journey he will see went he gets to earth as well.
8/5/2018 c1 19Hero King Zeta 1991
Make more chapters because this story is awesome
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