for From Ruin11/7 c29 Guest
I really like your stories, keep up the good work! I’m sure you’ll do great with your own books!
I really like your stories, keep up the good work! I’m sure you’ll do great with your own books!
11/4 c29 JustinC100
Wow, what a powerful and heart-wrenching chapter! The emotional weight and complexity of Harry’s feelings were palpable throughout, and you did a phenomenal job weaving together the tension and heartbreak of his reunion with his mother, along with the pressure of his responsibilities. The narrative pulled me in, especially the vivid descriptions of Harry’s struggles and the turbulent storm of his magic mirroring his internal conflict.
The scene with Lily and Harry’s emotional turmoil was exceptionally moving. His reaction to the unexpected revelation and the way his magic reacted felt so real and heartbreaking, particularly his desire to distance himself from his mother for her safety, yet feeling the deep, unfulfilled longing for a family. The conversations with Nicolas and Perenelle added an extra layer of support and understanding that balanced out the heaviness of his burden.
Thank you for sharing this chapter and for being so transparent about the future of From Ruin and your writing plans. It’s absolutely understandable that you need to prioritize your financial well-being and original writing projects. The two-year break or the idea of using fanfiction as a palette cleanser between novels sounds like a solid strategy. Regardless of which path you choose, I hope your original works find the success they deserve!
I’ll be looking forward to the continuation of From Ruin whenever you are ready to return, and I wish you the best of luck with your novels and career goals. Your writing is a gift, and we appreciate the incredible stories you’ve created. Take care, and may inspiration continue to flow in your original works.
Wow, what a powerful and heart-wrenching chapter! The emotional weight and complexity of Harry’s feelings were palpable throughout, and you did a phenomenal job weaving together the tension and heartbreak of his reunion with his mother, along with the pressure of his responsibilities. The narrative pulled me in, especially the vivid descriptions of Harry’s struggles and the turbulent storm of his magic mirroring his internal conflict.
The scene with Lily and Harry’s emotional turmoil was exceptionally moving. His reaction to the unexpected revelation and the way his magic reacted felt so real and heartbreaking, particularly his desire to distance himself from his mother for her safety, yet feeling the deep, unfulfilled longing for a family. The conversations with Nicolas and Perenelle added an extra layer of support and understanding that balanced out the heaviness of his burden.
Thank you for sharing this chapter and for being so transparent about the future of From Ruin and your writing plans. It’s absolutely understandable that you need to prioritize your financial well-being and original writing projects. The two-year break or the idea of using fanfiction as a palette cleanser between novels sounds like a solid strategy. Regardless of which path you choose, I hope your original works find the success they deserve!
I’ll be looking forward to the continuation of From Ruin whenever you are ready to return, and I wish you the best of luck with your novels and career goals. Your writing is a gift, and we appreciate the incredible stories you’ve created. Take care, and may inspiration continue to flow in your original works.
11/3 c29 
5BarbedCaress
Nope.
These are not the actions of a man in his forties, who was tortured for decades and never knew his parents.
.
I jumped here from chapter 19 to see if the shackle was removed ( it was ) and if he caved to black mail ( he did ).
At this point Harry is Dumbledore's lapdog.
Nope
I'm done.
5BarbedCaressNope.
These are not the actions of a man in his forties, who was tortured for decades and never knew his parents.
.
I jumped here from chapter 19 to see if the shackle was removed ( it was ) and if he caved to black mail ( he did ).
At this point Harry is Dumbledore's lapdog.
Nope
I'm done.
11/3 c19 BarbedCaress
Never allow black mail.
It never ends.
Harry should remove the shackle.
And withdraw from school.
Dumbledore is his enemy and has made Harry vulnerable.
He is also torturing Nova for leverage.
If the Leader of the Light is willing to do this, then Harry should take his friends and family and let Tom have them.
They are not worth saving.
Never allow black mail.
It never ends.
Harry should remove the shackle.
And withdraw from school.
Dumbledore is his enemy and has made Harry vulnerable.
He is also torturing Nova for leverage.
If the Leader of the Light is willing to do this, then Harry should take his friends and family and let Tom have them.
They are not worth saving.
9/22 c20 oldpotato
Yeah this is ridiculous. Dumbledore abandons Perenelle in the crisis, body binds Ares so he couldn't help either and then shackles Nova. Yet somehow that still doesn't cross the line. Really shows you how much Harry actually cares for those around him if endangering their lives doesn't count as crossing the line.
Yeah this is ridiculous. Dumbledore abandons Perenelle in the crisis, body binds Ares so he couldn't help either and then shackles Nova. Yet somehow that still doesn't cross the line. Really shows you how much Harry actually cares for those around him if endangering their lives doesn't count as crossing the line.
7/25 c8 Grammar Fiend
You did not do a very good job in converting to past tense. There are still myriad present tense verbs throughout your work. Further proofreading is required. Also, pay more attention to your apostrophes.
You did not do a very good job in converting to past tense. There are still myriad present tense verbs throughout your work. Further proofreading is required. Also, pay more attention to your apostrophes.
6/16 c18 4Hadrian von Eveschatten
This story would be so much better if Harry's 90% less socially retarded and a doormat. Can he even pee without Malfoy holding his dick?
Since he's so emo, you should do the audience a favour and have him kill himself.
4Hadrian von EveschattenThis story would be so much better if Harry's 90% less socially retarded and a doormat. Can he even pee without Malfoy holding his dick?
Since he's so emo, you should do the audience a favour and have him kill himself.
6/16 c16 Hadrian von Eveschatten
This Harry is such a pathetic cuck. It doesn't matter how good his magical skills are when he just lets a bunch of nobodies push him around. The way he retardly conflates this timeline's characters with his original one's is ridiculous. And don't even get me started on Harry insistently cucking himself to the Weasel when Fleur is very much interested in Harry.
This Harry is such a pathetic cuck. It doesn't matter how good his magical skills are when he just lets a bunch of nobodies push him around. The way he retardly conflates this timeline's characters with his original one's is ridiculous. And don't even get me started on Harry insistently cucking himself to the Weasel when Fleur is very much interested in Harry.