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2/6 c1 81Tempest the SeaWing
This was so sad…
1/21 c3 71CanzetYote
"Bolt held her paw against his cheek with his own as more tears slid down his muzzle."

I have some questions regarding that scene:

1. When Bolt cried, did his tears specifically slide down:
A: The bridge of his muzzle and onto the tip of his nose as he hung his head
B: The side of his muzzle diagonally and onto his lower jaw and chin

2. Exactly how would Bolt react and what would he say to me if I hugged him, rubbed his back and licked those tears sliding down his muzzle with my tongue during the scene where he cried? Because every time I read that, I fantasize licking every last tear from Bolt's muzzle.

3. Dumb question but on a scale from 1 to 10 with 10 being the saltiest, how salty would Bolt's tears taste on my tongue if I licked them directly from his muzzle?

4. On a scale from 1 to 10 with 1 being freezing cold and 10 being scalding hot, how warm were those tears sliding down Bolt's muzzle?

I know these questions sound weird but please please PLEASE reply back!
8/29/2018 c1 8Evil-Copper
Honestly not bad. Perhaps it could have been a bit longer but not bad. Keep it up.

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