
3/23/2022 c3 Geenan907
Now this is a good story! I’m a Halo and agk fan so I’m a little psyched.
The confrontation between Master Chief and Esdeath was intense! I have a feeling Esdeath was testing the Chief throughout the fight to see his strengths and weaknesses, she should’ve never underestimated him.
It seems Esdeath might form a vendetta against Chief…now that just sounds terrifying to think about.
Now onto the Chief’s big escape!
Chief is damn good at interrogating someone when he needs to. (probably because his voice)
He sure does like his escapes loud and proud, like hell the SPNKR probably shook everyone’s teeth in the capital! And godDAMN! Run could’ve been ripped in half if Chief wasn’t focusing on driving.
And now the part where I feel a teeny bit empty because of the abrupt hiatus… maybe, possibly, hopefully, uh unlikely?
Now I’m not gonna go anywhere because stories like this? They’re files read MIA, they never die, and that’s why I’m going to follow & favorite, I’ll be the one of the first to read the continuation.
Now this is a good story! I’m a Halo and agk fan so I’m a little psyched.
The confrontation between Master Chief and Esdeath was intense! I have a feeling Esdeath was testing the Chief throughout the fight to see his strengths and weaknesses, she should’ve never underestimated him.
It seems Esdeath might form a vendetta against Chief…now that just sounds terrifying to think about.
Now onto the Chief’s big escape!
Chief is damn good at interrogating someone when he needs to. (probably because his voice)
He sure does like his escapes loud and proud, like hell the SPNKR probably shook everyone’s teeth in the capital! And godDAMN! Run could’ve been ripped in half if Chief wasn’t focusing on driving.
And now the part where I feel a teeny bit empty because of the abrupt hiatus… maybe, possibly, hopefully, uh unlikely?
Now I’m not gonna go anywhere because stories like this? They’re files read MIA, they never die, and that’s why I’m going to follow & favorite, I’ll be the one of the first to read the continuation.
1/14/2022 c3
112The Eschaton
Can I at least take inspiration from this story? I know you have seen this comment but unless you have something to tell about how to follow and favourite your story without reviewing, let me know, alright?

Can I at least take inspiration from this story? I know you have seen this comment but unless you have something to tell about how to follow and favourite your story without reviewing, let me know, alright?
11/5/2020 c3 No U
i love poop, makes me touch myself at night
i love poop, makes me touch myself at night
8/15/2020 c3 Guest
You going to update? This is really good.
You going to update? This is really good.
8/12/2020 c3 Guest
You still going to update? I hate to see this amazing story go to waste
You still going to update? I hate to see this amazing story go to waste
7/29/2020 c3 Guest
This is so Awesome. Your writing is very good and the interactions are well done. Please continue as I want to see what happens next.
This is so Awesome. Your writing is very good and the interactions are well done. Please continue as I want to see what happens next.
7/12/2020 c3 Guest
Great story so far. Please update as this is REALLY good.
Great story so far. Please update as this is REALLY good.
5/16/2020 c3 Guest
Amazing story. Writing is amazing and it's amazing how you put these two worlds together. Please continues the series because this is really good.
Amazing story. Writing is amazing and it's amazing how you put these two worlds together. Please continues the series because this is really good.
11/15/2019 c3 Mr. No Bo Dy
Hello, love what you have done so far, please continue!
Hello, love what you have done so far, please continue!