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9/1/2018 c1 131rebecca-in-blue
I think I was one of those "couple people" asking for something about Adam and Hannah, so I was really excited to see this story. This was a really fun followup to that great barn scene that the movie cut away from. I love the image of Adam and Millie both cracking up over the girls' stunt, and how you address the more practical worries about Adam having six sisters-in-law that he barely knew and where they would all live.

I just wish there were more to this; there's a lot to address - new wives, a new baby - and it feels rushed in some places. The language also feels a bit too modern at times (especially words like "couch" and "social event," and the repeated "gonna"s in the narration). But I'm being nitpicky. I hope to see more 7B47B fanfic from you!

P.S. I'm here reviewing you for the review-a-thon at the Caesar's Palace forum! Come drop by sometime, all fandoms welcome :)
8/23/2018 c1 3hopefullydying
Awwwwww. This is really sweet. Please write more!
8/11/2018 c1 13Countrylover99
So cute!

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