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9/3/2018 c9 Zelda-kun
I like how you’re connecting the world. I wouldn’t have pictured Holodrum being that close to Hyrule but I like it. It kinda makes sense I suppose. Good imagination. This chapter is nearly as good as last one. It’s very emotional and I also like this new character even though she’s trying too hard for link. I see the story is becoming like a love square or something. Not sure about that. I can’t wait to see zeldas reaction hopefully in next chapter? Cause it seems link is still as in love with her as ever. But is she the same? She is engaged and everything which worries me. Please update soon
9/3/2018 c8 Zelda-kun
I love this chapter too. It’s really strong emotionally. I got chills on that one sentence. You must know the one without me having to say. That nearly killed me I feel so bad for her that this keeps happening to them.
I’m slightly less confused now seeing that Impa was mistaken about the bloodlines thing but then it’s still an issue cause it messes up the balance? Or so they’re told right. Maybe they need to prove them wrong! I kinda like this Bronn guy but I hope she doesn’t get too attached to him. I’m already anxious to read more zelink but it seems that will take some chapters to get back into it. Good job I really enjoyed this one
9/3/2018 c7 Zelda-kun
I’m shocked at how cruel Zelda became in the end. Very similar to how she was in the past when she got angry. I wonder what link will do. Also I’m slightly confused on how it works. I assume you’ve taken artistic liberties? Cause I don’t think links bloodline is a thing. Just hers. Also are you implying that the child they had was evil as in like Ganon? Cause it had power instead of courage and wisdom? I’m very interesting I seeing how this continues but I am a bit confused honestly. Good job regardless, it was a very emotional chapter
9/3/2018 c6 Zelda-kun
Your descriptions in the smut are just soooo good. And they’re going to be apart now? I need more of this D: I think I need it more than theeem
9/3/2018 c5 Zelda-kun
Wanted to add, I noticed link calling her by her name without her having to ask. I like that cause it’s like he grew into it instead of being forced to do it
9/3/2018 c5 Zelda-kun
You have a way of slowly building up mystery. I felt my heart skip a few beats at some pints in this chapterC like when link realizes in the spring that they’re not gonna last much longer so he hold her tightly. That’s lovely. I’m also enjoying the cute flirty bits those make me smile. I feel this chapter a little rushed but I don’t know if that’s intentional. Looking forward to reading the rest
8/27/2018 c8 AzHasANewName1
Ah, I wondered if it was something along the lines of history getting distorted to a certain degree, but I had to express my concerns in case it wasn't lol

In any event, can't wait to see what happens and where you're going with this.
8/26/2018 c7 AzHasANewName1
Hold the phone, isn't the only requirement for the Hero one baring his soul? If it was by lineage (like the Goddess) then neither the Downfall timeline nor the Adult Link timeline (both in which the Hero of Time no longer existed) would have been able to carry on. The only two heroes confirmed to be blood related were the Hero of Time and the Hero of Twilight, the circumstances of that being unique to them. In fact, the Hero of Wind was confirmed not to be blood related to the Hero of Time.
8/26/2018 c7 midnaisbae
I don't know what Impa is smoking but it must be some hard shit, for her to come up with such accusations. The Links are never connected by blood except in the instance of Twilight Princess. They're supposed to represent the player so they're just random nobodies 9 out of 10. Ever wondered why they've always said 'blood of the Goddess' to Zelda yet never 'blood of the Hero' to Link? He was always the 'spirit of the Hero'. Hell, look at WW!Link, the living proof that Heroes aren't blood related. Alttp!Link most likely hooked up with his princess and the little Zelda, 100 or so years after, turned out normal, a triforce-bearing cutie even! It would be odd for the poster girl of the series to suddenly be forbidden to be "loved". Additionally, don't you think that her being the "default love interest" (fight me boi) is the very reason why Miyamoto and co. never made the Links related? Cause it'd be one big incest mess if they were.

Time to take the tin-foil hat off nan, you're going against Nintendo policy with these baseless prophecies of yers. Have Paya give her some tea and maybe listen to Kass' song if she's able. "The hero, the princess-hand in hand- Must bring the light back to this land."
8/26/2018 c6 Cjfalcon
Cute >~< looking forward to future chapters.
8/22/2018 c5 NC2001
Great story! I love reading Zelink tales. Those two belong together!
8/19/2018 c4 Guest
I like how Zelda was all shy about intimacy with link in the first half of the chapter and then basically attacked him later being all commanding and stuff. Me likey
8/19/2018 c3 Guest
I’m loving how link helps her all the time without her having to ask for it. the scene where she’s trying to be strong and not cry in the islands was lovely. I like how their relationship is growing. Kinda fast in some parts but I get what you’re going for I suppose. What with them being apart for so long and their love being so intense. I like it. Keep it up!
8/18/2018 c4 0rbital
Man I did not expect a lemon so soon but regardless this was great. So far I've been liking the story and the small conflicts the two have been facing. Can't wait for the next chapter.
8/16/2018 c1 11Arcmelos
Great chapter, keep up the good work!
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