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6/19/2021 c1 5AutumnKL
Despite of the datk nature of this poem, I do think it's got a humorous quality to it (in a good way). Maybe it's cause of how well the lines rhymed, but it's very easy to get through this short piece and enjoy it all the way.

The ending is very dark but I can see it happening, when the present generation of fighters such as Goku and Krillin and their offsprings all passed away as by then he would've nothing to go on aside from his reputation.

A pretty neat poem overall and while I think Roshi brought a lot of stuff onto himself, I also think his achievements get overlooked quite often.
9/5/2019 c1 realtasyyy
I love how you dug into one of the forgotten Dragon Ball characters I already love and made me love them even more. Your wording and rhymes are spot on and you told this poem's story efficiently.
And worst- Or best of all, he hit perfectly at what I always looked at Master Roshi as: Nothing more than just a ladies man. A lewd one, of course, but he just want .
Instantly favorited.
11/15/2018 c1 Popo
As sad as this is. It’s a VERY good poem
8/17/2018 c1 Cocoaeyes
So cute and so, so true! I wish there was a drawing to go along with this :)
8/14/2018 c1 16TLeah123
A bit of a dark ending but I liked it.
8/14/2018 c1 V 4 Vellian
This poem ain't all bad. I like it.

It explored something a bit deeper with the Turtle Hermit.

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