for The Hellcat's12/12/2018 c3 
2TheRazgrizDragon
Awesome and interesting story so far! I'm curious if Ravel is going to show up!
2TheRazgrizDragonAwesome and interesting story so far! I'm curious if Ravel is going to show up!
12/11/2018 c3 Devilscreed
One tip to drastically improve: research the body language of cats. You are very obviously using dogs as your basis for the tail movements of the nekoshou children and cats have a very different language than dogs. So different in fact, that it is the most common issue when those two species interact (e.g.: a dog misinterpreting a wagging tail as happiness when it actually is a sign of agitation).
Other than that the story is pretty well written so far and I'd like to see where it goes.
One tip to drastically improve: research the body language of cats. You are very obviously using dogs as your basis for the tail movements of the nekoshou children and cats have a very different language than dogs. So different in fact, that it is the most common issue when those two species interact (e.g.: a dog misinterpreting a wagging tail as happiness when it actually is a sign of agitation).
Other than that the story is pretty well written so far and I'd like to see where it goes.
12/8/2018 c3 Dragonsayianblue
This is a cool story. And riser being apart of the old satan faction neat. Also is issei, shirone and kuroka mother like an embassater from the youki faction since they are youki too. And is thier grandmother a member of yakasa council. Ethier nice stoey.
This is a cool story. And riser being apart of the old satan faction neat. Also is issei, shirone and kuroka mother like an embassater from the youki faction since they are youki too. And is thier grandmother a member of yakasa council. Ethier nice stoey.
12/9/2018 c3 1antifanboy
I hate your story, the way you portrayed a raiser shows that you are a child who only saw the anime and has never read the novel, because I ignore all the raiser development that made him an issei friend ... I'm disgusted pathetic writers like you.
1antifanboyI hate your story, the way you portrayed a raiser shows that you are a child who only saw the anime and has never read the novel, because I ignore all the raiser development that made him an issei friend ... I'm disgusted pathetic writers like you.
12/9/2018 c3 Morregen
Nice! Finally a new chapter. I am very happy. :)
I am excited for chapter 4. :)
Nice! Finally a new chapter. I am very happy. :)
I am excited for chapter 4. :)
9/17/2018 c2 Morregen
Your story is so unique... I love it. :)
I like that you are going yuri with Fujimai, that is not happening often and I really like the yuri genre. :)
Also I love that the older women like Venelana are in the (can I say harem?) and not the young girls like usually. :)
Your story is so unique... I love it. :)
I like that you are going yuri with Fujimai, that is not happening often and I really like the yuri genre. :)
Also I love that the older women like Venelana are in the (can I say harem?) and not the young girls like usually. :)
9/17/2018 c2 ichika aono
Ok I have to ask why do you type of cause instead of course. I like the idea of this story look forward to reading more.
Ok I have to ask why do you type of cause instead of course. I like the idea of this story look forward to reading more.
9/16/2018 c2 6wanderingboy
Laserbr0, remember that Nekomsta and Nekoshou have mating seasons. So, I would guess it would be nice to have a few female "friends" around to help you, but didn't want to risk a pregnancy.
6wanderingboyLaserbr0, remember that Nekomsta and Nekoshou have mating seasons. So, I would guess it would be nice to have a few female "friends" around to help you, but didn't want to risk a pregnancy.