12/3/2022 c4 1jamthacreator
This story is awesome, hope you are well author! Its be amazing to see this finished if you still plan on writing for it!
This story is awesome, hope you are well author! Its be amazing to see this finished if you still plan on writing for it!
1/5/2021 c1 CORSPE
wtf i dont understand
wtf i dont understand
12/10/2018 c2 THEBOSS2323454
When Kakashi said “your teammates are your most valuable assets”, we can all agree that with team 7 only one of their teammates is valuable/useful and that is Sasuke. I mean, Sakura is almost as useless as a kunai, shuriken, or naruto before he still the scroll of sealing
When Kakashi said “your teammates are your most valuable assets”, we can all agree that with team 7 only one of their teammates is valuable/useful and that is Sasuke. I mean, Sakura is almost as useless as a kunai, shuriken, or naruto before he still the scroll of sealing
9/16/2018 c1 arckane
Hopefully hes smart and actually like a nara otherwise what was the point of making him a nara in the first place
Hopefully hes smart and actually like a nara otherwise what was the point of making him a nara in the first place
9/15/2018 c4 GunBlade2024
Hi there
Very rare to see Kushina alive, but not Naruto's mother. Was an OC Naruto mother?
Also,does this mean that Uzu was not destroyed? I didn't read that in previous chapters (I think).
Anyway, keep up the good work!
Hi there
Very rare to see Kushina alive, but not Naruto's mother. Was an OC Naruto mother?
Also,does this mean that Uzu was not destroyed? I didn't read that in previous chapters (I think).
Anyway, keep up the good work!
9/14/2018 c4 Yami-daseith
Ok I am liking it I do think Naruto should have more chakra not stupid amounts like some authors do and say its the Kyuubi and his uzumaki blood, but like a jonnin because cannon Naruto could spam shadow clones as he mostly did because that’s all he could do really
Ok I am liking it I do think Naruto should have more chakra not stupid amounts like some authors do and say its the Kyuubi and his uzumaki blood, but like a jonnin because cannon Naruto could spam shadow clones as he mostly did because that’s all he could do really
8/27/2018 c3 GunBlade2024
Hi there
No idea about 'swimming duck', but keep the story as it is , and you can use what you like :-)
Keep up the good work!
Hi there
No idea about 'swimming duck', but keep the story as it is , and you can use what you like :-)
Keep up the good work!
8/27/2018 c3 Yami-daseith
I like it, though I don’t get why Naruto and Sasuke hate each other I mean seriously did something happen that you will reveal later or what. Anyway looking forward to what next.
I like it, though I don’t get why Naruto and Sasuke hate each other I mean seriously did something happen that you will reveal later or what. Anyway looking forward to what next.
8/19/2018 c2 Yami-daseith
Great Chapter though Naruto seemed more arrogant than lazy idk which you were trying to go for it is still good.
Great Chapter though Naruto seemed more arrogant than lazy idk which you were trying to go for it is still good.
8/19/2018 c1 Yami-daseith
I like it, but even though I get he is a kid and has been raised by himself if your going to make him a Narra make him a Narra or just leave him an Uzumaki and give him a shadow bloodline, I am not trying to flame or anything just saying commit to what you are trying to make the story so yeah Narra attributes hair, eyes, and IQ
I like it, but even though I get he is a kid and has been raised by himself if your going to make him a Narra make him a Narra or just leave him an Uzumaki and give him a shadow bloodline, I am not trying to flame or anything just saying commit to what you are trying to make the story so yeah Narra attributes hair, eyes, and IQ
8/17/2018 c1 illiterate newbie
Fantastic, been a while since a fic got me hooked to read more, great job so far.
Fantastic, been a while since a fic got me hooked to read more, great job so far.