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9/19/2020 c17 106AJRedRobin
Oh man, I would like to see this one continue i a larger context. Maybe Tim isn’t cloned from Jason, which it’s quite easy to assume, but maybe he’s cloned from the Drake’s own son who died recently, from neglect, and they decided to sell him. It would be interesting to read a much larger story on this topic, and to learn more.
9/16/2020 c20 104feathered moon wings
Bruce's like, yeah, Imma insert myself into this equation in the most unsubtle way possible.
And Tim is just ? short circuiting that ehoe deal.
Sorry for the short review but I'm DEAD tired. But I send you love :D
9/13/2020 c20 2ImJustBatman
Oh Tim, Tim, Tim. When will you learn? You'll never be alone when the bat is around~ Seriously, when you do angst, you'd angst super well (you do happy/other genres great as well) ! But the angst, is so good that you can almost taste the despair from Tim. I'm liking that you really had the whole rushed priest, celebrity cemetery becauseit makes the funeral worse than if they had a loving ceremony and a private area. In the public sense, your grief is on display for everyone and that really can really impact how you process your feelings from that. Good job as always!
9/12/2020 c19 4perish-the-thoughtless
Can every chapter be this long? Loved it
9/10/2020 c19 13Loftcat27
Enjoyed this chapter so much.
9/10/2020 c19 2ImJustBatman
This chapter had a very bittersweet tone to it and you did well with it! You didn't let it get too heavy or angsty overall but it wasn't too silly to negate the issues that Tim has to deal with. I actually read the other chapter that went with this and they flow very organically together; oftentimes with oneshots and with any continued chapters in them, there can be a bit of disjointedness with combining the two. You did this extremely well and it was very refreshing to be able to read two chapters like this! Keep up the amazing work!
9/10/2020 c19 104feathered moon wings
Uuuuugh, I love and hate this at the same time. I love it, but I feel there is SO much let unsaid. But I guess that's the point, neither Tim or Bruce are going to open up their hearts to the other just like that.

Aaaaaaa, I love your heartfelt writing, I feel like I tell you this all the time XD it might be getting old by now. All that fear of the west wing thing was VERY good. Like, Tim reaching panic attack because of the pace, levels of good.
And you write it so subtly too, which I really apreciate, but also kind of in the face? Fi that makes sense hehe.
The sleepless night and general warines of the place. *Cheff's Kiss*. Perfecton.

And Bruce, BRUCE, he's such a saint. He has so much love to give (,:

This was definitely not what I was expecting of a sequel to the Secretary!Tim arc but it was very nice none the less.
Anyway, thanks for the chapter, always a wonderful read with you :D
9/6/2020 c18 feathered moon wings
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA.

I die.

Lol, I hadn't read this when you posted it, I thought it was going to be more F-ed up with the warning and I was npt in the mood last time I comented.
As usual, your naration is wonderful, and you did that confusin perspective again, which I really really love!

Your Bruce and Tim are just (,: -Cheffs kiss- wonderful and perfect.

Ugh, love your stuff, hope to see more of you soon!
8/19/2020 c14 116Rookblonkorules
Awww, this was so sweet! I love the little bit about Tim being a time-capsule of a boy. That was a brilliant line! Also, when Tim asked who was picking him up and Bruce hesitated before answering- my heart cried a little at that. AND THEN AT THE END WHEN TIM CALLED BRUCE HIS DAD SKDFJGJDSKAL!
That brought the story around full circle and it was... so good, so pure. Yes, Tim, he's your dad.
Also, I really, really loved Bruce's awkwardness in this. He cares, he just isn't that great at the expressing your feelings bit.
This is one of the softest de-aging fics I've read and... there's actually a reason why he was de-aged. That made sense! It wasn't some random potion or powder or anything that he ate or drank, there was an actual reason! It was great!
8/16/2020 c18 2PandakaiLove
Heyyyy, this was seriously great. At first I was super confused, I thought that like Tim had been drugged or was dying or something but then, well... I eventually figured it out. Poor tim though, DC saw his normal life and thought 'not sad enough' and figured that since he didn't have a tragic backstory they'd make him a tragic life. It's just ufff. Poor guy. What I think happened after Tim found his dad? I don't know. I always figured that Bruce took him back to the batcave or something, or handed him off ot the police (though that's too cold ever for Bruce, so probably the first option). Idk, I think that Bruce wouldn't have wanted Tim to stay too long staring at his father's corpse. Anyways... one of the questions that's burning inside me right now is, are you going to finish any of the stories you started all that time ago? I'd just like to know if they're dead or somthing (they being 'a whistle in the night' (cause I'm burning with the need to knkow how that confrontation ends) and 'Genesis' (cause I want to know what the joker is planning)). They're all super great, and I'm dying iwth the need to know about how they end, however I can understand how your interest in said stories can be dead by now so I won't press you. Anywyas, this episode and story are great, Keep up the good work and stay safe!
Pandakailove
7/25/2020 c18 2ImJustBatman
I really loved the descriptions (as always) but for this chapter I really appreciated the transitions from flashbacks to the normal scene. The way you did it was very seamless and fit the whole psychological break Tim was having. Also, I love this Bruce, he's so protective of Tim and it's amazing! Keep up the good work!
7/19/2020 c17 104feathered moon wings
OH MY GOD YOU MONSTER THIS IS AMAZING.

fhsjsjwiddiejds I don't know what to think nut FAM IT BRUCE. It's just like you to let trauma consume you like that fffggg

Dick is lovely and this is all vet bittersweet. But with some undertones of what feels a bit like horror? There's always underlining tension, which is really great.

Aaaaaaa this fuc*ed with me. But it was good.
7/19/2020 c16 feathered moon wings
Oooooooh I absolutely adore how this was written. So SO much, I knew what you were trying to do from the start but every few paragraphs you made me doubt again "What if this REALLY is a bad guy?"
I was genuinely, very woried for Tim my poor baby.

Also, great Bruce here 10/10, would recommend. He's so soft and tender while still being Bruce "how to put my live into words" Wayne.

I feel like it's been so long since I read your stuff. I'm glad I'm acting up on this story. Tough I'm afraid of the next chapter cause I read it wasn't gonna end good XD
7/15/2020 c17 litche
I'm legit crying. So Tim is Jason's clone commissioned by Bruce after the death of Jason at 16 ? It's messed up and tragic and I love it ! Will Tim meet Alfred later ?
7/14/2020 c17 2ImJustBatman
My heart! I love how descriptive you are. I really felt like I could see and feel every part of this story. Plus I love kid Tim, so sweet~ Really enjoyed the ending there where it's both heartbreaking and mysterious. Good work!
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