for When There's Trouble12/19/2019 c2 
10hotxhotguy
Can there be more angst between TT and their past mentors? I really want Justice league of TT universe to really royally fuck up, which would make YJ Justice League want to murder them for their stupidity. Yes that includes the Flash.
10hotxhotguyCan there be more angst between TT and their past mentors? I really want Justice league of TT universe to really royally fuck up, which would make YJ Justice League want to murder them for their stupidity. Yes that includes the Flash.
8/8/2019 c2 1MidnightToDusk
So far I like where you're going with this and I can't wait for the next chapter although I am wondering why you decided to include Wonder Girl into the group.
Also, there's an app called Grammarly if you ever want help with your writing.
1MidnightToDuskSo far I like where you're going with this and I can't wait for the next chapter although I am wondering why you decided to include Wonder Girl into the group.
Also, there's an app called Grammarly if you ever want help with your writing.
8/6/2019 c2 Tips
Great work! I can definitely definitely see where you’ve improved both story-wise and grammar-wise, and I look forward to seeing what happens next!
But note- and it’s a minor thing in the long run- that you probably don’t have to go into too much detail describing the characters. Trust that your reader has seen these shows and probably knows what our heroes look like.
Great work! I can definitely definitely see where you’ve improved both story-wise and grammar-wise, and I look forward to seeing what happens next!
But note- and it’s a minor thing in the long run- that you probably don’t have to go into too much detail describing the characters. Trust that your reader has seen these shows and probably knows what our heroes look like.
6/29/2019 c1 MidnightToDusk
Hm, I have to say the premise looks promising and I'm excited to see what you have planned for next. I don't know when you'll ever update this again but I can't wait for the next chapter.
Hm, I have to say the premise looks promising and I'm excited to see what you have planned for next. I don't know when you'll ever update this again but I can't wait for the next chapter.
3/5/2019 c1 yuki
Glad to see donna being included.
Pls continue this story.
Glad to see donna being included.
Pls continue this story.
12/30/2018 c1 Guest
I just got around reading this reboot and I have to say: this is one beatiful fic! Can't wait to read the next chapter, if you decide to update this again, that is.
I just got around reading this reboot and I have to say: this is one beatiful fic! Can't wait to read the next chapter, if you decide to update this again, that is.
9/21/2018 c1 MysteriousCharacter
I hope you continue this, been looking forward to the next chapter dont want it to die its a good premise i want to see the story continue and eventually conclude too many good stories just die and its so sad cause they are good stories.
Dont let it die please.
I hope you continue this, been looking forward to the next chapter dont want it to die its a good premise i want to see the story continue and eventually conclude too many good stories just die and its so sad cause they are good stories.
Dont let it die please.
9/16/2018 c1 53KaeterinaRomanov
this has really good potential. I love these type of crossovers and I can't wait to see where you take yours. looking forward to the next chapter!
53KaeterinaRomanovthis has really good potential. I love these type of crossovers and I can't wait to see where you take yours. looking forward to the next chapter!
9/10/2018 c1 Tips
Here's a note- when it comes to exclamation points, less is more- only use them when strictly necessary. Use them too often and they lose effect. In the previous version of this story, you used them so many times that it often made it hard to take certain scenes seriously.
For example, in this chapter "driven to finish whatever mission he was tasked with!" doesn't need an exclamation point. It'd be more impactful without one.
Or in the old story, when Robin was telling at the Team that the Teen Titans were independent. The overuse of exclamation points made it hard to take him seriously.
Something to keep in mind.
Here's a note- when it comes to exclamation points, less is more- only use them when strictly necessary. Use them too often and they lose effect. In the previous version of this story, you used them so many times that it often made it hard to take certain scenes seriously.
For example, in this chapter "driven to finish whatever mission he was tasked with!" doesn't need an exclamation point. It'd be more impactful without one.
Or in the old story, when Robin was telling at the Team that the Teen Titans were independent. The overuse of exclamation points made it hard to take him seriously.
Something to keep in mind.
8/29/2018 c1 2PandakaiLove
this is a great story! i can't wait for the next chapter, though I do have one question that involves your last story and this one. What problem does Aqualad have with aquaman? I thought they got along pretty well!?
anyway please continue!
2PandakaiLovethis is a great story! i can't wait for the next chapter, though I do have one question that involves your last story and this one. What problem does Aqualad have with aquaman? I thought they got along pretty well!?
anyway please continue!
8/24/2018 c1 FlippyDippy
heya, this reboot is actually really good, i read the original one a while ago and saw it was updated, i read the authors note and decide to read the reboot, im just a bit confused, is slade even going to be in this. or are we looking at a different villain, also, if slade will be in this, is he going to have the same motivations or different, i get confused when it comes to reboots and the villains-
heya, this reboot is actually really good, i read the original one a while ago and saw it was updated, i read the authors note and decide to read the reboot, im just a bit confused, is slade even going to be in this. or are we looking at a different villain, also, if slade will be in this, is he going to have the same motivations or different, i get confused when it comes to reboots and the villains-