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9/18/2020 c3 1AnimeGodess1235
please update
9/9/2020 c3 A1B
please update
7/13/2020 c3 Duchess Mbambo
Continue writing Woman NOW
11/10/2019 c3 1yuutojaden
please continue
7/16/2019 c3 rfgf
5/2/2019 c1 Naruto Lover
I love when I clicked on this to read this again and saw it updated I was dancing around my room. I was just that happy.
4/15/2019 c1 3Lawrence H. Bain
I'm just going to point out the problems I noticed...
1...We saw no prompt for Naruto's line of thought... all we got was "I wish I knew Boruto future..." and BAM! Yeah no come on that can't even be thought of as halfassed...

2... Naruto is like 35 years old... while his personality is largely the same he is a lot more calm, controlled, and mature... he did not regress to his 12 year old state...

3... this chapter is filled with over reactions... meaning their reactions are blown out of proportions...

There are a few other problems but I'm not going to bother...

If I may make a suggestion... rewrite this when your writing storytelling skills have gotten better... no offense but I can tell just from this first chapter alone that this whole story won't be any good... which is disappointing as I had found myself rather excited...
4/15/2019 c1 22ZadArchie
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Critics United
4/10/2019 c3 ki9787
4/3/2019 c3 ericsofly2
Nice g
4/3/2019 c3 RaiUchiha2332
4/3/2019 c3 5NaruHinaF
Wow the bet was predictable!
4/1/2019 c3 5Dom2040
Great chapter!
4/1/2019 c3 Shiranai Atsune
Yey! A new update!
4/1/2019 c3 8Faeyre
Awww poor Naruto
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