for Heaven Looks a Lot Like You12/30/2019 c1 Guest
I have read a literal thousand stories on this site. Many of them the same variation of the same story over and over. Some are written well. Most very poorly. But this...this story goes above and beyond. The exposition of the story was excellent and the grammar phenomenal.
While your fanfiction is, in a word, fantastic; I cannot wait to read your own stories when it comes out in print. Brava to this amazing writer.
I have read a literal thousand stories on this site. Many of them the same variation of the same story over and over. Some are written well. Most very poorly. But this...this story goes above and beyond. The exposition of the story was excellent and the grammar phenomenal.
While your fanfiction is, in a word, fantastic; I cannot wait to read your own stories when it comes out in print. Brava to this amazing writer.
8/18/2019 c1 A. nony mouse
So... might want a trigger warning for the drug and rape scene. I sure hope that Sophia (and Viv, as an accomplice) can get prosecuted for their bad deeds. And to distribute it after that - hopefully, they'd get lots of jail time for it. I'm sure Mordred would also have gotten in trouble for his assault, right?
So... might want a trigger warning for the drug and rape scene. I sure hope that Sophia (and Viv, as an accomplice) can get prosecuted for their bad deeds. And to distribute it after that - hopefully, they'd get lots of jail time for it. I'm sure Mordred would also have gotten in trouble for his assault, right?
6/22/2019 c1 jubulleflo
This was a delight. I wouldn't mind seeing more of this! Honestly, I have only good things to say about your work. It's well-written: the chapters have a very dybamic pace, and nothing feels out of place or boring. And the synopsis is really amazing. It drags you in without spoiling the story, and I personally have a soft spot for synopsises that are rewritten parts of the actual story. It makes you go "! I know this!" when you get to the part the synopsis is from. Really, kudos and hats off and all the compliments ever, this is a must-read and honestly? Even without knowing the show, I would have loved this fanfiction. It's really a sign that it stands on it's own. I hope I come across more of your work soin! Good luck, I wish you lots of inspiration!
This was a delight. I wouldn't mind seeing more of this! Honestly, I have only good things to say about your work. It's well-written: the chapters have a very dybamic pace, and nothing feels out of place or boring. And the synopsis is really amazing. It drags you in without spoiling the story, and I personally have a soft spot for synopsises that are rewritten parts of the actual story. It makes you go "! I know this!" when you get to the part the synopsis is from. Really, kudos and hats off and all the compliments ever, this is a must-read and honestly? Even without knowing the show, I would have loved this fanfiction. It's really a sign that it stands on it's own. I hope I come across more of your work soin! Good luck, I wish you lots of inspiration!
5/28/2019 c1 
14levios
I liked the story. Your writing is perfect and the story is different and interesting. Though, I would like to know more in the end of the story. The angst is perfectly written and I love it, but if you extended the end or added another chapter I would love it more as I like when the end doesn't leave a sad feeling :)
14leviosI liked the story. Your writing is perfect and the story is different and interesting. Though, I would like to know more in the end of the story. The angst is perfectly written and I love it, but if you extended the end or added another chapter I would love it more as I like when the end doesn't leave a sad feeling :)
10/13/2018 c1 Guest
Wow. Great read.
Wow. Great read.
9/27/2018 c1 Guest
This was really good! I loved it!
This was really good! I loved it!