for Sea of Souls5/19 c1 
1tanakaL
I just can’t read this in public I’m smiling so hard trying not to laugh . This story is so good! On to the next chapter!
1tanakaLI just can’t read this in public I’m smiling so hard trying not to laugh . This story is so good! On to the next chapter!
5/3 c5 Una puerta
Jajaja ya tienen vecinos, se me escapó una lágrima por Luffy y los demás llorando por ver el Sol de nuevo ()
Jajaja ya tienen vecinos, se me escapó una lágrima por Luffy y los demás llorando por ver el Sol de nuevo ()
5/2 c2 Una puerta
Muchas Gracias por el capítulo Luffy siendo Luffy ayudando a encontrar sus cosas a los hermanos ()
Muchas Gracias por el capítulo Luffy siendo Luffy ayudando a encontrar sus cosas a los hermanos ()
5/1 c16 shijanni
Hey you said you had beta readers working on the next chapter of this like 5 months ago, what's going on?
Hey you said you had beta readers working on the next chapter of this like 5 months ago, what's going on?
4/22 c16 KHARAKI TAKAN
Another banger of a story.
Has been a great read.
Only thing I didn't like was the part with Oda and One Piece. Felt a bit disingenuous.
Another banger of a story.
Has been a great read.
Only thing I didn't like was the part with Oda and One Piece. Felt a bit disingenuous.
3/23 c16 WarlockWarwick
Looking forward to the next chapter, but I had a fun idea.
If Sanji sees Nemu being beaten by Mayuri, he might give the mad scientist a makeover of epic proportions.
Probably making him look like a doofus, despite actually being one of the smartest people in the Soul Society
Looking forward to the next chapter, but I had a fun idea.
If Sanji sees Nemu being beaten by Mayuri, he might give the mad scientist a makeover of epic proportions.
Probably making him look like a doofus, despite actually being one of the smartest people in the Soul Society
3/23 c6 1LuminouShadowAlt
This chapter while showing different perspectives ultimately didn't add anything to the story. I mean its know sereitei balances the tree world, and if the captains are hurt they would be healing. I mean if you skip the whole chapter and go to the next you still wont miss a thing when it comes to the story.
So imo I think this chapter would have better as an omake or interlude rather than a chapter since it was nowhere important when the plot progression was concerned.
1LuminouShadowAltThis chapter while showing different perspectives ultimately didn't add anything to the story. I mean its know sereitei balances the tree world, and if the captains are hurt they would be healing. I mean if you skip the whole chapter and go to the next you still wont miss a thing when it comes to the story.
So imo I think this chapter would have better as an omake or interlude rather than a chapter since it was nowhere important when the plot progression was concerned.
2/10 c16 Sophiamay
Hey there! I just have to say—I’m absolutely in awe of your writing talent. Your story really resonated with me, and I haven’t been able to stop thinking about it. I’d love to chat with you about it sometime!
I’m a digital artist with a passion for creating comics, and I’ve worked with many authors to turn their incredible stories into stunning visuals. I think your story would translate beautifully into this medium, and I’d be so excited to help make that happen.
If you’re interested, feel free to reach out to me on Discord (danban1247275) or Twitter ( mariegrey90). I’d love to connect and discuss the possibilities!
Hey there! I just have to say—I’m absolutely in awe of your writing talent. Your story really resonated with me, and I haven’t been able to stop thinking about it. I’d love to chat with you about it sometime!
I’m a digital artist with a passion for creating comics, and I’ve worked with many authors to turn their incredible stories into stunning visuals. I think your story would translate beautifully into this medium, and I’d be so excited to help make that happen.
If you’re interested, feel free to reach out to me on Discord (danban1247275) or Twitter ( mariegrey90). I’d love to connect and discuss the possibilities!
2/5 c16 No op nakama buff
you know, at first I thought next chapter could be some big battle, but at the same time... could be something silly like food fight with how luffy wordings is phrased at the end there.
you know, at first I thought next chapter could be some big battle, but at the same time... could be something silly like food fight with how luffy wordings is phrased at the end there.
2/4 c16 15Vanessa Masters
Poor kon, poor Mayor.
They have a lot to deal with.
And now the straw hats have to deal with being believe to be working for Aizen.
Intense!
15Vanessa MastersPoor kon, poor Mayor.
They have a lot to deal with.
And now the straw hats have to deal with being believe to be working for Aizen.
Intense!
2/2 c14 Oddballzebra
Including Oda in this was a stupid idea. Meta shit is just cringe. It ruins the story.
Including Oda in this was a stupid idea. Meta shit is just cringe. It ruins the story.