1/10 c15 Guest
Hope this story comes back its fire
Hope this story comes back its fire
1/6 c15 1Uber Ghidorah
Hope you continue with this story soon. Just got caught up and I've been waiting for next chapter.
Hope you continue with this story soon. Just got caught up and I've been waiting for next chapter.
1/1 c15 Guest
You're dispersing yourself too much, you should tell whatever story you want to tell from one or two main pov instead of 50 like you're doing now.
You're dispersing yourself too much, you should tell whatever story you want to tell from one or two main pov instead of 50 like you're doing now.
12/25/2023 c15 1MysticRising
Im so happy the recent chapters had more focus on the Bleach side of things! Its one of the biggest problem woth crossovers where one series or cast completely eclispes the others. Although I pity Ichigo so much for attracting the wrong attention.
One of the best parts is how the side characters are getting development. I always baffled me that Yuzu and Karin were also hybrids, but absolutely no mention of their potnetial development. Its really cool the implied Quincy powers Karin is developing.
I also think it's amazing how the whole town is becoming aware and the government is so horribly confused. It's hilarious and a realistic reaction. I can't wait for the whole town to somehow develop ass kicking power to rival gotei 13.
Im so happy the recent chapters had more focus on the Bleach side of things! Its one of the biggest problem woth crossovers where one series or cast completely eclispes the others. Although I pity Ichigo so much for attracting the wrong attention.
One of the best parts is how the side characters are getting development. I always baffled me that Yuzu and Karin were also hybrids, but absolutely no mention of their potnetial development. Its really cool the implied Quincy powers Karin is developing.
I also think it's amazing how the whole town is becoming aware and the government is so horribly confused. It's hilarious and a realistic reaction. I can't wait for the whole town to somehow develop ass kicking power to rival gotei 13.
12/12/2023 c15 Guest
This just put a smile on my face
This just put a smile on my face
12/2/2023 c15 Guest
Just a thought but the prototype hogyoku is it gonna develop sentience and have luffy characteristics and be like luffy own child
Just a thought but the prototype hogyoku is it gonna develop sentience and have luffy characteristics and be like luffy own child
11/17/2023 c15 Auxillium
"when did I fall into the assumption that I'd be doing it all on my own" ur subtext is so correct bestie
"when did I fall into the assumption that I'd be doing it all on my own" ur subtext is so correct bestie
11/7/2023 c11 KnyFan
Will Nel have the Straw hats Jolly roger as a new tattoo on her back to replace the "3" from the time she was a ethpada
?
Not really revelant to the story, i just found the idea nice
As always, i will wait till your next update, keep the good work
Will Nel have the Straw hats Jolly roger as a new tattoo on her back to replace the "3" from the time she was a ethpada
?
Not really revelant to the story, i just found the idea nice
As always, i will wait till your next update, keep the good work
11/2/2023 c15 KnyFan
Nice story, the characters are well characterized to the originals
Also, not sure if you already answered that question but will the straw hats rememboring their memories, will make them regain their former abilities in particular for king of hell zoro and gear 5 for luffy, i just find a shame they don't have the real powers for now but perhaps you will do something about that, that's you history after all
Good luck with it, hope you will update soon
Nice story, the characters are well characterized to the originals
Also, not sure if you already answered that question but will the straw hats rememboring their memories, will make them regain their former abilities in particular for king of hell zoro and gear 5 for luffy, i just find a shame they don't have the real powers for now but perhaps you will do something about that, that's you history after all
Good luck with it, hope you will update soon