for Sea of Souls8/23/2019 c6 
3Rusty Thebanite
I am delighted with the fact that you're keeping Ganju in the forefront a bit longer (Crabby Cousins unite!) and also pleased you're keeping the interesting fiddly bits of Ichigo's character around because the whole dang story became depressingly bland about halfway through and Ichigo was the worst offender. On a different but related note, it just proved how much more engaging One Piece is that I was still waiting for the Straw Hats to get back into the picture despite how entertaining this chapter was. :) I would like to suggest, however, that regardless of what you do with the Straw Hats it would be glorious to see more of the "basic" hollows. Kubo's early monster designs were some of the best in fiction.
3Rusty ThebaniteI am delighted with the fact that you're keeping Ganju in the forefront a bit longer (Crabby Cousins unite!) and also pleased you're keeping the interesting fiddly bits of Ichigo's character around because the whole dang story became depressingly bland about halfway through and Ichigo was the worst offender. On a different but related note, it just proved how much more engaging One Piece is that I was still waiting for the Straw Hats to get back into the picture despite how entertaining this chapter was. :) I would like to suggest, however, that regardless of what you do with the Straw Hats it would be glorious to see more of the "basic" hollows. Kubo's early monster designs were some of the best in fiction.
8/23/2019 c3 ZonZus
HE ATE THE HYOUGOKU!
OH MY GOD, THAT IS SO LUFFY! LMAO
Oh man that's going piss off Aiken something fierce. Now this is an awesome Fanfiction keep up and continue please.
HE ATE THE HYOUGOKU!
OH MY GOD, THAT IS SO LUFFY! LMAO
Oh man that's going piss off Aiken something fierce. Now this is an awesome Fanfiction keep up and continue please.
8/23/2019 c6 2PandakaiLove
Hey! amazing story you've written, it's rare to find fanfictions that have some level of creativity (and if they do they posses horrible grammar that makes it almost impossible to enjoy) and good writing so I0m glad I found your story! I must say that the various point of views from different characters is quite fascinating, most authors don't bother to do multiple point of views and if they do they're normally limited to 4 or 5 and not more, another pleasant surprise in your story! Anyway, it seems that with the way this AU is going, the serentei is hard pressed to defeat Aizen without the help of the straw hats, at least in my point of view. In canon they hadn't suffered these many cassualties and the captains hadn't been so hurt so I'm kind of curious about how the inevitable confrontation between the three forces will end. Also, is it bad of me to want the straw hats to show their power and beat a lot of their opponents? Anyway, I've read about your comments about Luffy's strenghts, but what about Zoro's and Starrk's? I can more or less guess at what level our favourite mosshead is at (I'd put him at Kenpachi's level or higher) but I have no idea on Starrk's part. Is he as strong as he was in canon or is he weaker? The same question goes for Halibel as well since the training sessions were of other people and not her. Anyway, will the next episode be about the straw hat's and the confrontation/discovery about them on serentei's and Aizen's part? I can't help but feel that Aizen would think of Luffy as a secrete mastermind and not realise until much later that it's just lady luck being on Luffy's part and him being an infuriatingly creative idiot. Anyway, do you have an update shceduele or do you just update when you can? I liked this chapter a lot, and I hope that the next ones are the same quality (or better, though I don't know how you'd do that), in conclusion. Good job and Keep up the good work!
2PandakaiLoveHey! amazing story you've written, it's rare to find fanfictions that have some level of creativity (and if they do they posses horrible grammar that makes it almost impossible to enjoy) and good writing so I0m glad I found your story! I must say that the various point of views from different characters is quite fascinating, most authors don't bother to do multiple point of views and if they do they're normally limited to 4 or 5 and not more, another pleasant surprise in your story! Anyway, it seems that with the way this AU is going, the serentei is hard pressed to defeat Aizen without the help of the straw hats, at least in my point of view. In canon they hadn't suffered these many cassualties and the captains hadn't been so hurt so I'm kind of curious about how the inevitable confrontation between the three forces will end. Also, is it bad of me to want the straw hats to show their power and beat a lot of their opponents? Anyway, I've read about your comments about Luffy's strenghts, but what about Zoro's and Starrk's? I can more or less guess at what level our favourite mosshead is at (I'd put him at Kenpachi's level or higher) but I have no idea on Starrk's part. Is he as strong as he was in canon or is he weaker? The same question goes for Halibel as well since the training sessions were of other people and not her. Anyway, will the next episode be about the straw hat's and the confrontation/discovery about them on serentei's and Aizen's part? I can't help but feel that Aizen would think of Luffy as a secrete mastermind and not realise until much later that it's just lady luck being on Luffy's part and him being an infuriatingly creative idiot. Anyway, do you have an update shceduele or do you just update when you can? I liked this chapter a lot, and I hope that the next ones are the same quality (or better, though I don't know how you'd do that), in conclusion. Good job and Keep up the good work!
8/22/2019 c6 1Adoltin
Not gonna lie, I didn’t understand a thing from this chapter. Then again I’ve never read Bleach. I’m going to assume it was just as good as the rest however.
1AdoltinNot gonna lie, I didn’t understand a thing from this chapter. Then again I’ve never read Bleach. I’m going to assume it was just as good as the rest however.
8/22/2019 c1 Kyotokiki
DUDE
I LOVW THIS
SOOOOOOOOO FUCKING MUCH
YOU DONT EVEN KNOW
I NEVER KNEW I NEEDED THIS TILL NOW
THWYRE GONNA CAUSE EVERYONE SOOOOO MANY FUCKING HEADACHES AND MIGRAINES ITS GONNA BE GREAT
EVERYONES PISSED
THEY CANT DO WHAT THEIR JOB IS
AND POOR JINBEI
HES A FUCKING HELSMAN THATS ALSO FISHMAN BUT HES STUCK IN A DESERT
SANJI DONT GOT A KITCHEN OR FOOD TO COOK
BROOK DOESNT HAVE INSTRUMENTS TO PLAY MUSIC
EVERYONES JUST PIIIIISED THEY CANT DO THEIR JOB
IMAGINE IF A SHINIGAMI SAW SANJI AS A HOLLOW EAT ONE, PAUSE TWAR OFF HIS MASK AND THE THE NINE OTHERS THAT WERE JUST HANGING AROUND DOING THE SAME
THEYD THINK THEYE HALLUCINATION AND HAVE A CORONARY. AAAH
DUDE
I LOVW THIS
SOOOOOOOOO FUCKING MUCH
YOU DONT EVEN KNOW
I NEVER KNEW I NEEDED THIS TILL NOW
THWYRE GONNA CAUSE EVERYONE SOOOOO MANY FUCKING HEADACHES AND MIGRAINES ITS GONNA BE GREAT
EVERYONES PISSED
THEY CANT DO WHAT THEIR JOB IS
AND POOR JINBEI
HES A FUCKING HELSMAN THATS ALSO FISHMAN BUT HES STUCK IN A DESERT
SANJI DONT GOT A KITCHEN OR FOOD TO COOK
BROOK DOESNT HAVE INSTRUMENTS TO PLAY MUSIC
EVERYONES JUST PIIIIISED THEY CANT DO THEIR JOB
IMAGINE IF A SHINIGAMI SAW SANJI AS A HOLLOW EAT ONE, PAUSE TWAR OFF HIS MASK AND THE THE NINE OTHERS THAT WERE JUST HANGING AROUND DOING THE SAME
THEYD THINK THEYE HALLUCINATION AND HAVE A CORONARY. AAAH
8/22/2019 c6 Guest
Well I'm glad you like my orginal ideas of the zanpaktou arc and the strawhats, you seem to turn it even more than I though cus I was going with the zanpaktou of the strawhats being the ones to join but now you made it more interesting with the others possibly wanna join to gain something that luffy is all about freedom, and yeah kenpachi would be an obstacle for zoro but hey nothing venture nothing gain plus if zoro does hook up with unonohana the in a way kenpachi gains a rival and soaring partner in zoro looking forward to the next chapter back one our loveable strawhats and there neighbors the vizored I'm kinda looking forward to seeing those interactions oh in particular masahiro and luffy can you say best friends right off the bat
Oh by the by call me Nobody Styles if that helps
Well I'm glad you like my orginal ideas of the zanpaktou arc and the strawhats, you seem to turn it even more than I though cus I was going with the zanpaktou of the strawhats being the ones to join but now you made it more interesting with the others possibly wanna join to gain something that luffy is all about freedom, and yeah kenpachi would be an obstacle for zoro but hey nothing venture nothing gain plus if zoro does hook up with unonohana the in a way kenpachi gains a rival and soaring partner in zoro looking forward to the next chapter back one our loveable strawhats and there neighbors the vizored I'm kinda looking forward to seeing those interactions oh in particular masahiro and luffy can you say best friends right off the bat
Oh by the by call me Nobody Styles if that helps
8/22/2019 c6 26Thunder-Death
Oh. It's good to learn people's point of view on the recent events, how they cope with it, how they see it. I can't wait for the next chapter to see the Mugiwara, I was hoping to see them in this chapter (well they weren't).. Anyways, it's a good chapter. I'm looking forward the next chapters !
26Thunder-DeathOh. It's good to learn people's point of view on the recent events, how they cope with it, how they see it. I can't wait for the next chapter to see the Mugiwara, I was hoping to see them in this chapter (well they weren't).. Anyways, it's a good chapter. I'm looking forward the next chapters !
8/22/2019 c6 1Lucky Guard
Great chapter but I really wanted to see urahara and the vizards being completely confused by the straw hat pirates.
1Lucky GuardGreat chapter but I really wanted to see urahara and the vizards being completely confused by the straw hat pirates.
8/22/2019 c6 9Emrys Akayuki
I suppose Orihime might have to stick around to fix up some of the worst injuries, missing limbs and near death and stuff, she would if they asked her, if not, they can always make replacements, or Urahara can, anyway.
9Emrys AkayukiI suppose Orihime might have to stick around to fix up some of the worst injuries, missing limbs and near death and stuff, she would if they asked her, if not, they can always make replacements, or Urahara can, anyway.
8/22/2019 c6 2shubhendu dutta
I don't know how I feel about this. One the one hand new chapter :), on the other no one piece character :(.
2shubhendu duttaI don't know how I feel about this. One the one hand new chapter :), on the other no one piece character :(.