for Sea of Souls12/22/2018 c4 
2Creation Teller
You put “why didya not thay so” it should be thay tho. Just noticed that error in the lisp
2Creation TellerYou put “why didya not thay so” it should be thay tho. Just noticed that error in the lisp
12/19/2018 c5 sharingankakashi007
Enjoyed that vey much
Coffee is better thn tea
End of story
Aizen's reaction to that was hilarious
The strawhats are messing up everyone's plans huh
Soo interesting
They live right next to the Vizards
Hope Urahara recognizes that they can be allies
Am almost 80 % sure the soul society
Is gonma go nuts and try to hunt them to death as soon as they hear about them
Liked the POVs
Really curious about what's gonna happen next
Their reaction to the Sun was great
Nami with the weather
Looking forward to more
Enjoyed that vey much
Coffee is better thn tea
End of story
Aizen's reaction to that was hilarious
The strawhats are messing up everyone's plans huh
Soo interesting
They live right next to the Vizards
Hope Urahara recognizes that they can be allies
Am almost 80 % sure the soul society
Is gonma go nuts and try to hunt them to death as soon as they hear about them
Liked the POVs
Really curious about what's gonna happen next
Their reaction to the Sun was great
Nami with the weather
Looking forward to more
12/15/2018 c5 Guest
I don't think you're really taking into consideration of what it means for OP characters to have their powers and abilities combined with Bleach capabilities.
Their power level should skyrocket.
I don't think you're really taking into consideration of what it means for OP characters to have their powers and abilities combined with Bleach capabilities.
Their power level should skyrocket.
12/12/2018 c5 Guest
Hmm why does it feel that when adult nel shows up lillynette us gonna be more pissed at her especially when adult nel may want to be with luffy hmm also I would love to see other arrancar join the straw hats plus that menoly and loly being fangirls of luffy sounds funny not to use I'm mean a lot of people say that luffy has a royal harem with vivi rebecca shirahoshi and Hancock so I'd guess adult nel lillynette menoly and loly might do it I'd guess can't wait to see the straw hats meet the soul reapers why do I get the feeling captain unohana and zoro are gonna hook up you know the medical captain who has a bloodthirsty side to her and zoro as for other hook ups that could be up in the air and why not canon would love to see the straw hats deal with the bounts and the zanpakto rebellion and who knows maybe there zanpaktos join in if you do go for it well hope for more
Hmm why does it feel that when adult nel shows up lillynette us gonna be more pissed at her especially when adult nel may want to be with luffy hmm also I would love to see other arrancar join the straw hats plus that menoly and loly being fangirls of luffy sounds funny not to use I'm mean a lot of people say that luffy has a royal harem with vivi rebecca shirahoshi and Hancock so I'd guess adult nel lillynette menoly and loly might do it I'd guess can't wait to see the straw hats meet the soul reapers why do I get the feeling captain unohana and zoro are gonna hook up you know the medical captain who has a bloodthirsty side to her and zoro as for other hook ups that could be up in the air and why not canon would love to see the straw hats deal with the bounts and the zanpakto rebellion and who knows maybe there zanpaktos join in if you do go for it well hope for more
12/10/2018 c5 64mellra
Boy oh boy! Things are probably going to escalate quickly since the Straw Hats are within spitting distance of the Vizard! Granted, both Urahara and Shinji are fairly level headed individuals, so they'd probably wish to hang back and observe at first to see what the Arrancar do, only stepping in if they prove hostel. That said, some of the more hotheaded protectors of Karakura Town may have trouble holding themselves back (I'm looking at YOU Hiyori and you too Jinta!) Hopefully things won't go too pear shaped, but knowing the Straw Hats it's more a matter of when then if. Can't wait to see more!
64mellraBoy oh boy! Things are probably going to escalate quickly since the Straw Hats are within spitting distance of the Vizard! Granted, both Urahara and Shinji are fairly level headed individuals, so they'd probably wish to hang back and observe at first to see what the Arrancar do, only stepping in if they prove hostel. That said, some of the more hotheaded protectors of Karakura Town may have trouble holding themselves back (I'm looking at YOU Hiyori and you too Jinta!) Hopefully things won't go too pear shaped, but knowing the Straw Hats it's more a matter of when then if. Can't wait to see more!
12/9/2018 c5 Guest
I read your comment about “Aizen going off the deep end”, and I’m remind of a Fate/Zero Fic I read a couple years back, where all of the servents summoned where characters from various anime (with the exception of Saber and Assassin, but I’ll get to him, who was still Artoria) I can’t remeber the name of the story, but I remember the servants, Rider: Kamina from Gurren Lagann, Lancer: Shinji Ikari from Evangelion, Caster: Sasuke from Naruto, Berserker: Grimmjow from Bleach, Archer: Vash from Trigun, and (this is the relevant one), Assassin: Deadpool. Needless to say, over the course of the story, Kirei goes even crazier as he’s slowly “infected” by Wade’s particular brand of Madness (specifically his Awareness of the fourth wall and everything beyond it), and I can’t help but wonder if Aizen with “suffer” a similar fate.
I read your comment about “Aizen going off the deep end”, and I’m remind of a Fate/Zero Fic I read a couple years back, where all of the servents summoned where characters from various anime (with the exception of Saber and Assassin, but I’ll get to him, who was still Artoria) I can’t remeber the name of the story, but I remember the servants, Rider: Kamina from Gurren Lagann, Lancer: Shinji Ikari from Evangelion, Caster: Sasuke from Naruto, Berserker: Grimmjow from Bleach, Archer: Vash from Trigun, and (this is the relevant one), Assassin: Deadpool. Needless to say, over the course of the story, Kirei goes even crazier as he’s slowly “infected” by Wade’s particular brand of Madness (specifically his Awareness of the fourth wall and everything beyond it), and I can’t help but wonder if Aizen with “suffer” a similar fate.
12/8/2018 c5 HUNTER202002
Hay mate great chapter! And I really like the comedy scene very one piece. And 20-30% of luffy winning might be true but it's LUFFY were talking about here he has crazy luck remember the gold movie? And oh yes you should make a omake of the Straw hats in control of huche mundo. (I'm spelling it wrong aren't I? _) the characters are spot on! Plus. The return of soul king! (Brook. Not the shinigami god) and can't wait for luffy and co to stumble upon ichigo's sisters. XD well any way I think that's all- oh wait I have a very important question...*dramatic pause* ...are there gonna be ships!? Please tell me there is?! And can't wait for the next chapter. Any way this is hunter out! (﹏)
Hay mate great chapter! And I really like the comedy scene very one piece. And 20-30% of luffy winning might be true but it's LUFFY were talking about here he has crazy luck remember the gold movie? And oh yes you should make a omake of the Straw hats in control of huche mundo. (I'm spelling it wrong aren't I? _) the characters are spot on! Plus. The return of soul king! (Brook. Not the shinigami god) and can't wait for luffy and co to stumble upon ichigo's sisters. XD well any way I think that's all- oh wait I have a very important question...*dramatic pause* ...are there gonna be ships!? Please tell me there is?! And can't wait for the next chapter. Any way this is hunter out! (﹏)
12/8/2018 c5 1Lobisomen616
They moved in across from the Visoreds...
BAH-HAHAHAHAHA! You should make a spin-off or something dedicated to the back and forth sitcom shenanigans that are bound to ensue.
1Lobisomen616They moved in across from the Visoreds...
BAH-HAHAHAHAHA! You should make a spin-off or something dedicated to the back and forth sitcom shenanigans that are bound to ensue.
12/8/2018 c5 26Cyricist001
Hahaha, the Visoreds as the neighbors? Interesting. What are the chances of Shinji coming to ask for sugar from Luffy?
26Cyricist001Hahaha, the Visoreds as the neighbors? Interesting. What are the chances of Shinji coming to ask for sugar from Luffy?
12/7/2018 c5 musizlover2008
I just realise that Mayuri is voiced by the same guy who did the voice of Caesar Clown, talk about coincidence. You could use that. Also, if you planned to, that some of the Straw Hats go to Karakura High School either as students or teachers? Plus, I would like to imagine the Straw Hats and new friends in some casual clothes like in some of those colour spreads in the One Piece manga.
I just realise that Mayuri is voiced by the same guy who did the voice of Caesar Clown, talk about coincidence. You could use that. Also, if you planned to, that some of the Straw Hats go to Karakura High School either as students or teachers? Plus, I would like to imagine the Straw Hats and new friends in some casual clothes like in some of those colour spreads in the One Piece manga.
12/7/2018 c5 5MadelVer
Ah yes! New wonderful neighbors, two groups full of absolute madness meeting! And they're just next-warehouse neighbors! More time to meet and greet! All in all, it's amazing and I loved that part when you pointed out Kisuke acting live a certain wizard (Snape. Snaaape. Severus Snape, DUMBLEDORE!) I couldn't help roll my eyes on that one!
5MadelVerAh yes! New wonderful neighbors, two groups full of absolute madness meeting! And they're just next-warehouse neighbors! More time to meet and greet! All in all, it's amazing and I loved that part when you pointed out Kisuke acting live a certain wizard (Snape. Snaaape. Severus Snape, DUMBLEDORE!) I couldn't help roll my eyes on that one!