for Sea of Souls10/27/2018 c3 Midnight49
D... did... no that didn’t just happen... DID LUFFY JUST ATE THE HOGYOKU!? Well rip who ever fights the straw hats now!
D... did... no that didn’t just happen... DID LUFFY JUST ATE THE HOGYOKU!? Well rip who ever fights the straw hats now!
10/26/2018 c1 Midnight49
You got inspired by “The Vasto of White”? Man you’ve got to admit it’s a crazy story especially the Hueco Mundo arc! I wasn’t expecting all that to happen. Parcasious did hint to it subtlety. I mean come on I was expecting something and went off in one directions because of the way he left hints but I went the wrong directions and made something even crazier than what I was expecting! I got high hopes for this story!
You got inspired by “The Vasto of White”? Man you’ve got to admit it’s a crazy story especially the Hueco Mundo arc! I wasn’t expecting all that to happen. Parcasious did hint to it subtlety. I mean come on I was expecting something and went off in one directions because of the way he left hints but I went the wrong directions and made something even crazier than what I was expecting! I got high hopes for this story!
10/26/2018 c3 Guest
Eheeheeheehee, I loved this chapter! Oh I can't wait to see how it progresses from here! I hope you update soon!
Eheeheeheehee, I loved this chapter! Oh I can't wait to see how it progresses from here! I hope you update soon!
10/25/2018 c3 Dr. No Good
AA very good story and a very good chapter.
You know for a possible bunch of enemy's you could make a group of Arrancar who would end up in the One Piece World and go on a rampage to gain the Tile of Pirate King. Or have a Bunch of Pirates end up in the Bleach World and they gain powers much like Orihime and Sado and go back to the One Piece World and end up being nobodies to nightmares.
AA very good story and a very good chapter.
You know for a possible bunch of enemy's you could make a group of Arrancar who would end up in the One Piece World and go on a rampage to gain the Tile of Pirate King. Or have a Bunch of Pirates end up in the Bleach World and they gain powers much like Orihime and Sado and go back to the One Piece World and end up being nobodies to nightmares.
10/24/2018 c3 Creation Teller
Hi, back again for some more ideas on things for the story. For Choppers form I think I have a more acurate idea for his form now, there is a cool piece of artwork of him if his devil fruit was awakened and it he knew armament haki, My idea is that he has that form, but with a more human face of him grow up as a young man, thoughts? Also another idea for Charolette to join, during his major fight, Luffy sees him and remembers Bon Clay a little bit, and before the final blow is stuck, Luffy saves him and they escape. Charolette would not know it was him and the others who robbed Los Noches so they would get along I think. After Charolette returns to Los Noches, he will most likely be punished and questioned for his failure and meeting strange Hollows, this would lead him to seeing an even crueler side to his masters than his is used ( in regards to being the one they target). Also quick note could you change the fact that Orihime gets kidnapped in that way and is psychologically attacked in the fact that she is allowing herself to be imprisoned, helping her enemies, and that she is forced to ware the Arrancar uniform. So please change this and eventually the thing in the fullbringer arc where ichigo's friends have there memories altered and nearly have their minds completely destroyed, I never even liked the part in One Piece where Sugar's power erased the peoples memories of their loved ones, I always hated that thing, cruelest thing a person can do(Memories are precious, and that fate is to cruel for both sides, the regret and lose is too great)
x-(. x-( x-(
On a more up beat note got an idea for Starrk and Lilynette's resurrections. Now that they got more skill and energy flowing through them I thought that Lilynette should get her own form. Starrk would still have his wolf and gun resurrection but without the risk of Lilynette being lost, Lilynette's resurrection would increase her to Starrk's age and give her the same fighting skills as he does when in his normal state. good idea? Also I know the bird kid is in the afterlife, I meant if the Straw Hats ever do get to go to Soul Society, they should help him as a nice little side story and a call back to the early episodes of the show. Also, nice on the next chapters title, got it awhile after thinking about it "funny :-) Also I know the Hollows who are with or will join with the Straw Hats are not really "good" but they are more reasonable than most of the others, and they at least want a better life for themselves and friends. That is what all the Straw Hats want freedom and a better and more fun existence, soon I know things want always be good and things will stay the same before they get better, but they will try there damn hardest to make their lives for their friends easier and better, and for their goals and dreams as of now to come true. Hope this helps. Bye :-).
Hi, back again for some more ideas on things for the story. For Choppers form I think I have a more acurate idea for his form now, there is a cool piece of artwork of him if his devil fruit was awakened and it he knew armament haki, My idea is that he has that form, but with a more human face of him grow up as a young man, thoughts? Also another idea for Charolette to join, during his major fight, Luffy sees him and remembers Bon Clay a little bit, and before the final blow is stuck, Luffy saves him and they escape. Charolette would not know it was him and the others who robbed Los Noches so they would get along I think. After Charolette returns to Los Noches, he will most likely be punished and questioned for his failure and meeting strange Hollows, this would lead him to seeing an even crueler side to his masters than his is used ( in regards to being the one they target). Also quick note could you change the fact that Orihime gets kidnapped in that way and is psychologically attacked in the fact that she is allowing herself to be imprisoned, helping her enemies, and that she is forced to ware the Arrancar uniform. So please change this and eventually the thing in the fullbringer arc where ichigo's friends have there memories altered and nearly have their minds completely destroyed, I never even liked the part in One Piece where Sugar's power erased the peoples memories of their loved ones, I always hated that thing, cruelest thing a person can do(Memories are precious, and that fate is to cruel for both sides, the regret and lose is too great)
x-(. x-( x-(
On a more up beat note got an idea for Starrk and Lilynette's resurrections. Now that they got more skill and energy flowing through them I thought that Lilynette should get her own form. Starrk would still have his wolf and gun resurrection but without the risk of Lilynette being lost, Lilynette's resurrection would increase her to Starrk's age and give her the same fighting skills as he does when in his normal state. good idea? Also I know the bird kid is in the afterlife, I meant if the Straw Hats ever do get to go to Soul Society, they should help him as a nice little side story and a call back to the early episodes of the show. Also, nice on the next chapters title, got it awhile after thinking about it "funny :-) Also I know the Hollows who are with or will join with the Straw Hats are not really "good" but they are more reasonable than most of the others, and they at least want a better life for themselves and friends. That is what all the Straw Hats want freedom and a better and more fun existence, soon I know things want always be good and things will stay the same before they get better, but they will try there damn hardest to make their lives for their friends easier and better, and for their goals and dreams as of now to come true. Hope this helps. Bye :-).
10/24/2018 c3 sharingankakashi007
Hahaha
Horrible terrible and the very worst day
He lost his Hogyokyu too
But the guy still has Urahara's right?
And can't believe this
Lol
Probably Yamamoto is murdering the fuck out of him
Hahaha
And he's escaping only thanks to his illusions
Now they could be more prepared
And F You Aizen
Everything did not go as planned
The most hilarious part is Hogyokyu candy LoL
Hahaha
Horrible terrible and the very worst day
He lost his Hogyokyu too
But the guy still has Urahara's right?
And can't believe this
Lol
Probably Yamamoto is murdering the fuck out of him
Hahaha
And he's escaping only thanks to his illusions
Now they could be more prepared
And F You Aizen
Everything did not go as planned
The most hilarious part is Hogyokyu candy LoL
10/24/2018 c3 
64mellra
Wow! There's a LOT of things I'd like to say about this chapter, all of them good. Though I think I'll start off with correcting one small thing you might have missed. Wonderweiss wasn't "created", or at least turned into an Arrancar when Aizen was showing how the Hogyoku works. Meaning he wouldn't be present anyway when Aizen returned from Soul Society.
Now on to the positive stuff. For starters, the character interaction was spot on in my opinion, from the Straw Hats antics to how the others react to said antics. It was hilarious on how Lilynette had to repress her tomboy side when Franky talked about making himself into a cyborg, along with showing the similarities between Zoro and Sanji with Appachi and Mila Rose. And it was an interesting take on Pesche and Dondochaka's mental states. When you had Nel keep Zoro from wandering off, it made me think of an opposite Zaraki and Yachiru.
Now as for Aizen...whoo boy is he going to be steamed! Granted, I'm sure he had contingencies in place should his initial escape plan fail, but he is NOT going to be happy he had to use them (though Tosen is more likely going to be the one to vocalize Aizen's displeasure). I wonder what is going to peeve him the most? The fact that his dramatic exit from Soul Society was ruined and he had to use his backup plan? The fact that his army was robbed blind and his elites couldn't do a thing about it because of his own orders? Or, worst of all, they're out of tea!
Amazing work as always and I can't wait to see more!
64mellraWow! There's a LOT of things I'd like to say about this chapter, all of them good. Though I think I'll start off with correcting one small thing you might have missed. Wonderweiss wasn't "created", or at least turned into an Arrancar when Aizen was showing how the Hogyoku works. Meaning he wouldn't be present anyway when Aizen returned from Soul Society.
Now on to the positive stuff. For starters, the character interaction was spot on in my opinion, from the Straw Hats antics to how the others react to said antics. It was hilarious on how Lilynette had to repress her tomboy side when Franky talked about making himself into a cyborg, along with showing the similarities between Zoro and Sanji with Appachi and Mila Rose. And it was an interesting take on Pesche and Dondochaka's mental states. When you had Nel keep Zoro from wandering off, it made me think of an opposite Zaraki and Yachiru.
Now as for Aizen...whoo boy is he going to be steamed! Granted, I'm sure he had contingencies in place should his initial escape plan fail, but he is NOT going to be happy he had to use them (though Tosen is more likely going to be the one to vocalize Aizen's displeasure). I wonder what is going to peeve him the most? The fact that his dramatic exit from Soul Society was ruined and he had to use his backup plan? The fact that his army was robbed blind and his elites couldn't do a thing about it because of his own orders? Or, worst of all, they're out of tea!
Amazing work as always and I can't wait to see more!
10/24/2018 c3 Matt
So can't wait!
So can't wait!
10/24/2018 c3 8Clearwing Yuta
Wait, so the hogyouku Luffy ate was the one Aizen originally made himself? So for now he only has the one he stole from Rukia/Urahara? Or there is no more hogyouku?
8Clearwing YutaWait, so the hogyouku Luffy ate was the one Aizen originally made himself? So for now he only has the one he stole from Rukia/Urahara? Or there is no more hogyouku?