for Sea of Souls12/7/2018 c5 zeyreele
Ya know, once the misunderstandings get cleared up, robin and franky would have a blast with urahara. The man is like a wonderful in-between with their personalities, mixed in with his own special blend of crazy.
Ya know, once the misunderstandings get cleared up, robin and franky would have a blast with urahara. The man is like a wonderful in-between with their personalities, mixed in with his own special blend of crazy.
12/6/2018 c5 Matt
Loving the craziness, keep up the good wor- I mean amazing work!
Loving the craziness, keep up the good wor- I mean amazing work!
12/6/2018 c5 
3doraemax
Hahaha... truly an interesting new neighbour to the Visored. I have to wonder though, whether after all these time, is their natural inclination to go and fight any high-class hollow that appear...or are they 'mellow' enough that they want to 'observe' first.
Or perhaps Luffy and Co. will do the neighbourly thing and drop by to say hi first...hihi.
Anyway, as arrancar...i wonder on the Strawhats resurrection. Considering the diversity of Shikai/Bankai abilities.. It's interesting, Nami might end up with a very powerful ability to control the weather. Luffy...well, perhaps he will have the 'awaken' rubber ability...scary thought. Chopper might have something to do with healing...or his original multiple transformation thingy. Robin might be the only one with an ability similar to her original ability. And i have no idea as to the rest. huhu. And this does not include secundo etapa thingy...
truly looking forward to what you have in mind
3doraemaxHahaha... truly an interesting new neighbour to the Visored. I have to wonder though, whether after all these time, is their natural inclination to go and fight any high-class hollow that appear...or are they 'mellow' enough that they want to 'observe' first.
Or perhaps Luffy and Co. will do the neighbourly thing and drop by to say hi first...hihi.
Anyway, as arrancar...i wonder on the Strawhats resurrection. Considering the diversity of Shikai/Bankai abilities.. It's interesting, Nami might end up with a very powerful ability to control the weather. Luffy...well, perhaps he will have the 'awaken' rubber ability...scary thought. Chopper might have something to do with healing...or his original multiple transformation thingy. Robin might be the only one with an ability similar to her original ability. And i have no idea as to the rest. huhu. And this does not include secundo etapa thingy...
truly looking forward to what you have in mind
12/6/2018 c5 6King of Fans
Good chapter
I wonder how Aizen will react when he learns his actions in soul society alowed the peaple that ruined his day and literally took his entire kitchen not have to worry about soul reapers few a Little while.
Giveing luffy a sword it definitely sounds like a good idea on paper. However, why do I imagen it backfiring, like what happened at wano.
Ok luffy as Nel's new big brother you need to perfect her and make sure there is no repeats of what happened with Ace, and sabo.
I wonder what would happen first the strew hats realizing they need to do a better job at hiding their energy, or Karin and every other spiritually aware person getting use to it. Probly the fist one.
Glad to hear I am not the only one who thinks the same way about Don Kanonji.
Why do I see luffy and chopper becoming fans of him and believing the majority of what he says.
Wall ussop and Kanonji fall for each other's tall tales, wall trying to intimidate each other.
It fills me with joy seeing Nami, Robin, and franky livening there what they love doing the most.
Lastly I look foreword to see that Uruahara's dumbfounded face will look like when he meats luffy.
Proble something a cat will killed to get a picture of.
6King of FansGood chapter
I wonder how Aizen will react when he learns his actions in soul society alowed the peaple that ruined his day and literally took his entire kitchen not have to worry about soul reapers few a Little while.
Giveing luffy a sword it definitely sounds like a good idea on paper. However, why do I imagen it backfiring, like what happened at wano.
Ok luffy as Nel's new big brother you need to perfect her and make sure there is no repeats of what happened with Ace, and sabo.
I wonder what would happen first the strew hats realizing they need to do a better job at hiding their energy, or Karin and every other spiritually aware person getting use to it. Probly the fist one.
Glad to hear I am not the only one who thinks the same way about Don Kanonji.
Why do I see luffy and chopper becoming fans of him and believing the majority of what he says.
Wall ussop and Kanonji fall for each other's tall tales, wall trying to intimidate each other.
It fills me with joy seeing Nami, Robin, and franky livening there what they love doing the most.
Lastly I look foreword to see that Uruahara's dumbfounded face will look like when he meats luffy.
Proble something a cat will killed to get a picture of.
12/6/2018 c5 Guest
this is nice... all the reactions are really nice although i would have wanted to see more interaction between non-strawhats and the strawhat group. good job! :D
this is nice... all the reactions are really nice although i would have wanted to see more interaction between non-strawhats and the strawhat group. good job! :D
12/6/2018 c5 Guest
One huge thing to keep in mind about the OP characters is that they are physically stronger than Bleach characters by nature.
I forgot if you did but make sure the OP characters keep their haki abilities.
One huge thing to keep in mind about the OP characters is that they are physically stronger than Bleach characters by nature.
I forgot if you did but make sure the OP characters keep their haki abilities.
12/6/2018 c4 Leaf1337
I like how you kept Aizen's quick planning nature to adapt in the heat of things during the first part of the chapter. It shows that while his long term plans are godly, what he can make on the fly is no less deadly.
Although what really shined was the latter parts as the trio saw the state of their HQ and, my favorite part, is when Aizen discovered his missing Hogyoku and how everyone looked at Gin, thinking, "You're his favorite. You go."
I like how you kept Aizen's quick planning nature to adapt in the heat of things during the first part of the chapter. It shows that while his long term plans are godly, what he can make on the fly is no less deadly.
Although what really shined was the latter parts as the trio saw the state of their HQ and, my favorite part, is when Aizen discovered his missing Hogyoku and how everyone looked at Gin, thinking, "You're his favorite. You go."
12/6/2018 c5 Agent Frank
Every chapter just makes me so excited for the next one. I can't wait for their meeting with the Visoreds!
Every chapter just makes me so excited for the next one. I can't wait for their meeting with the Visoreds!
12/6/2018 c5 2Creation Teller
BEAUTIFUL chapter! I got so much to say! The interactions and the development was spectacular. Starrk and Halibel's evolution as characters since joining the Straw Hats and them opening up and becoming family with the rest. The ending scene was very touching as was Nel's asking that they become brothers and sisters to her. Apacci getting flustered from Chopper and Lilynette getting jealous of Nel for being with Luffy like that was super cute. Loved the small scenes like Sanji getting a cigarette, them walking on a couple "doing it", and them looking in the wrong direction. Loved the small comments in () I imagine those scenes with those and it fits with Bleach's unique sense of comedy. It's funny how Urahara thinks Halibel's girls are in charge because they can't control or hide their spirit energy that well. Can't wait to see his reaction to when he finds out that 6 of them are Vasto Lordes. Also that shows just how good their concealing of their powers are, not even Urahara could see their spirit energy with all his tech. Loved how the Visoreds are now their neighbors, I can just see Rose listening to Brook play music and admiring or wanting to play along with the beat. Also this can open so many doors for interactions. Also I think the Straw Hats will find them sooner than later, with Luffy being so observant of reitsu and the fact that they have to leave for supplies and their own personal items they want he will find them and the two groups will meet.
Also I thought about this and it seems like a huge opportunity or at least an interesting thought. Don Kanonji and Orihime are probably the most unique characters out of all of Bleach. While others gained their powers by being shinigami, hollows, or Quincies, the other two got their powers from somewhere else. Orihime got hers from her fairies and Don Kanonji got his fom his own massive (for a human) spirit energy. Imagine if he became a shinigami or a hollow, if he already had that amount of reitsu as a human, just imagine if he became a being that can use reitsu and gain a massive amount of it (he would be come an awesome fighter) reason for this is that I like his code, he may act goofy but his determination to his beliefs, his friends, and the kids is unquestionable. Also, about that Arrancar Menoly and Loly, I can see them (if only Menoly) helping and joining the Straw Hats. Menoly was the more rational and reasonable of the two and was not as crazy as her friend. I can see them both becoming all fan girl over Luffy (kinda like a cross between a groupie and Hancock). That would annoy Lilynette even more X-)P
Well that's all for now, awesome work.
2Creation TellerBEAUTIFUL chapter! I got so much to say! The interactions and the development was spectacular. Starrk and Halibel's evolution as characters since joining the Straw Hats and them opening up and becoming family with the rest. The ending scene was very touching as was Nel's asking that they become brothers and sisters to her. Apacci getting flustered from Chopper and Lilynette getting jealous of Nel for being with Luffy like that was super cute. Loved the small scenes like Sanji getting a cigarette, them walking on a couple "doing it", and them looking in the wrong direction. Loved the small comments in () I imagine those scenes with those and it fits with Bleach's unique sense of comedy. It's funny how Urahara thinks Halibel's girls are in charge because they can't control or hide their spirit energy that well. Can't wait to see his reaction to when he finds out that 6 of them are Vasto Lordes. Also that shows just how good their concealing of their powers are, not even Urahara could see their spirit energy with all his tech. Loved how the Visoreds are now their neighbors, I can just see Rose listening to Brook play music and admiring or wanting to play along with the beat. Also this can open so many doors for interactions. Also I think the Straw Hats will find them sooner than later, with Luffy being so observant of reitsu and the fact that they have to leave for supplies and their own personal items they want he will find them and the two groups will meet.
Also I thought about this and it seems like a huge opportunity or at least an interesting thought. Don Kanonji and Orihime are probably the most unique characters out of all of Bleach. While others gained their powers by being shinigami, hollows, or Quincies, the other two got their powers from somewhere else. Orihime got hers from her fairies and Don Kanonji got his fom his own massive (for a human) spirit energy. Imagine if he became a shinigami or a hollow, if he already had that amount of reitsu as a human, just imagine if he became a being that can use reitsu and gain a massive amount of it (he would be come an awesome fighter) reason for this is that I like his code, he may act goofy but his determination to his beliefs, his friends, and the kids is unquestionable. Also, about that Arrancar Menoly and Loly, I can see them (if only Menoly) helping and joining the Straw Hats. Menoly was the more rational and reasonable of the two and was not as crazy as her friend. I can see them both becoming all fan girl over Luffy (kinda like a cross between a groupie and Hancock). That would annoy Lilynette even more X-)P
Well that's all for now, awesome work.
12/6/2018 c5 3Cataquack Warrior
Something's occurred to me: isn't this around the time that the Bount arc kicks off? Since the affair started out in Karakura Town, it could be interesting if Luffy and the others throw a wrench into that whole invasion like they do with everything else. Plus, there's the possibility that a Bount or two might end up joining the pirates, which could be pretty neat, especially with the possibilities of what could be done with the Dolls.
3Cataquack WarriorSomething's occurred to me: isn't this around the time that the Bount arc kicks off? Since the affair started out in Karakura Town, it could be interesting if Luffy and the others throw a wrench into that whole invasion like they do with everything else. Plus, there's the possibility that a Bount or two might end up joining the pirates, which could be pretty neat, especially with the possibilities of what could be done with the Dolls.