for Sea of Souls11/15/2018 c4 Excalibur98
thanks for the chapter! was this chapter the shortest c hi after you've written?
thanks for the chapter! was this chapter the shortest c hi after you've written?
11/15/2018 c4 Crimson Fox19
Everything, from the character's personalities and actions, even Gin's weird way of speech is incredibly accurate. I admit that for a moment I was worried that Luffy would end up being extremely overpowered and would end up easily beating everyone, but after reading the notes I know the story won't end up like that and I truly appreciate it. I love this so much I get super desperate for the updates lol, keep up the amazing job cause it's amazing.
Everything, from the character's personalities and actions, even Gin's weird way of speech is incredibly accurate. I admit that for a moment I was worried that Luffy would end up being extremely overpowered and would end up easily beating everyone, but after reading the notes I know the story won't end up like that and I truly appreciate it. I love this so much I get super desperate for the updates lol, keep up the amazing job cause it's amazing.
11/15/2018 c4 
2Creation Teller
Hi, Awesome Chapter! The Title got a little cut off. Incredible work with the fight, perfect way for Aizen to get away after getting stuck in soul society. Hope none of those injures are permanent on the captains, we need Kenpachi for more awesome fights. It is always funny to see a super bad guy lose his cool and temper after his plans are thrown down the drain and he ends up injured and a major part of his plan has gone to hell. Can't wait for the next chapter. Straw Hats and crew getting a new home and maybe have some adventures and make some "friends" ;-)
Interested on what Gin is going to do and what'll happen to him.
Glad Aizen blew up Mayuri's place. Also what will happen to Nemu. Cause once Chopper sees how Mayuri treats, talks to, and experiments on her, even though she is his "daughter" Chopper is going to destroy him like he did Hogsback. (P.S. I hope Mayuri and Byakuyu both get destroyed). Sorry if you like Byakuya, but I really don't like him. He makes a promise to kill the only family he has left, that his wife begged on her death bed to find and keep safe. And he made this promise to DEAD PEOPLE, promises like that are virtually worthless or not needed, they can't promise back and it won't make you feel better. Again sorry, I don't like Byakuya, don't like him, don't like Mayuri, and I don't like Rukia's sister (she deserved to die and was right that she did not deserve to be called sister or have a happy life). lot of hate for those characters (and the fullbringers in general), so no offense if you like them.
Well anyway great story so far and I hope the next chapter comes out soon. Again Awesome! Bye.
2Creation TellerHi, Awesome Chapter! The Title got a little cut off. Incredible work with the fight, perfect way for Aizen to get away after getting stuck in soul society. Hope none of those injures are permanent on the captains, we need Kenpachi for more awesome fights. It is always funny to see a super bad guy lose his cool and temper after his plans are thrown down the drain and he ends up injured and a major part of his plan has gone to hell. Can't wait for the next chapter. Straw Hats and crew getting a new home and maybe have some adventures and make some "friends" ;-)
Interested on what Gin is going to do and what'll happen to him.
Glad Aizen blew up Mayuri's place. Also what will happen to Nemu. Cause once Chopper sees how Mayuri treats, talks to, and experiments on her, even though she is his "daughter" Chopper is going to destroy him like he did Hogsback. (P.S. I hope Mayuri and Byakuyu both get destroyed). Sorry if you like Byakuya, but I really don't like him. He makes a promise to kill the only family he has left, that his wife begged on her death bed to find and keep safe. And he made this promise to DEAD PEOPLE, promises like that are virtually worthless or not needed, they can't promise back and it won't make you feel better. Again sorry, I don't like Byakuya, don't like him, don't like Mayuri, and I don't like Rukia's sister (she deserved to die and was right that she did not deserve to be called sister or have a happy life). lot of hate for those characters (and the fullbringers in general), so no offense if you like them.
Well anyway great story so far and I hope the next chapter comes out soon. Again Awesome! Bye.
11/15/2018 c4 3OnePieceChaldea
Damn, just damn. Even when taken off guard like that, Aizen still manages to cripple most of his enemies one after the other either with Kyoka Suigetsu or just his pure strength and skills alone. Reminds me and definitely the reader why he’s the bonafide Big Bad of Bleach before Ywhach and his Vandenreich came into the picture. But even with crippling or disabling most of his enemies, he, Gin, and Tousen still got pretty fucked up by Yoruichi, Kyoraku, and definitely Yamamoto. God damn Yamamoto is still an utter beast of a man, even when carrying injuries like that in a series where everyone and their sister lose limbs, vital organs, and pride like every other week.
Now the Fact Aizen feels genuine adrenaline from such an harrowing experience just says a lot about his messed up psyche.
But I think someone said the true winners of this Day were the Straw Hats since they left Aizen with nothing at Las Noches but broken safes and a rapidly thinning temper. Cannot wait for him to find out who stole his Hogyoku and why they stole it in the first place. I’m guessing Urahara’s going to be laughing his ass off once he finds out what the Straw Hats have done if they ever allow him to learn about their excursion into Las Noches...
Cannot wait for the next chapter and to see how the Straw Hats affect the future events now that they’re arriving in Ichigo’s turf...
See You later! :)
3OnePieceChaldeaDamn, just damn. Even when taken off guard like that, Aizen still manages to cripple most of his enemies one after the other either with Kyoka Suigetsu or just his pure strength and skills alone. Reminds me and definitely the reader why he’s the bonafide Big Bad of Bleach before Ywhach and his Vandenreich came into the picture. But even with crippling or disabling most of his enemies, he, Gin, and Tousen still got pretty fucked up by Yoruichi, Kyoraku, and definitely Yamamoto. God damn Yamamoto is still an utter beast of a man, even when carrying injuries like that in a series where everyone and their sister lose limbs, vital organs, and pride like every other week.
Now the Fact Aizen feels genuine adrenaline from such an harrowing experience just says a lot about his messed up psyche.
But I think someone said the true winners of this Day were the Straw Hats since they left Aizen with nothing at Las Noches but broken safes and a rapidly thinning temper. Cannot wait for him to find out who stole his Hogyoku and why they stole it in the first place. I’m guessing Urahara’s going to be laughing his ass off once he finds out what the Straw Hats have done if they ever allow him to learn about their excursion into Las Noches...
Cannot wait for the next chapter and to see how the Straw Hats affect the future events now that they’re arriving in Ichigo’s turf...
See You later! :)
11/15/2018 c4 TheB
Geez, Aizen is a monster, lol. On the backfoot and under assault of half the captainscommander and he still manages to cripple all of them. (too bad Orihime will have them up again in a jiffy, so the MVP will go to her :D)
A thousand years worth of tea along with everything and the kitchen sink stolen, heh.
Yeah, I highly doubt Aizen will actually figure them truly out. There's no way he'd be able to follow Luffy's trains of thought. (probably because rarely has those)
Geez, Aizen is a monster, lol. On the backfoot and under assault of half the captainscommander and he still manages to cripple all of them. (too bad Orihime will have them up again in a jiffy, so the MVP will go to her :D)
A thousand years worth of tea along with everything and the kitchen sink stolen, heh.
Yeah, I highly doubt Aizen will actually figure them truly out. There's no way he'd be able to follow Luffy's trains of thought. (probably because rarely has those)
11/15/2018 c4 64mellra
Well that just proves Murphy right. Aizen is going to need to up his game if he wants to try and match the Straw Hats level of unpredictability. Granted, him basically taking on and walking away from the entire 13 Court Guards is quite an accomplishment. Though now they'll be more on guard the next time they fight. And it's a good thing for Yoruichi and Kenpachi that Orihime can basically heal lost limbs. Can't wait to see more!
64mellraWell that just proves Murphy right. Aizen is going to need to up his game if he wants to try and match the Straw Hats level of unpredictability. Granted, him basically taking on and walking away from the entire 13 Court Guards is quite an accomplishment. Though now they'll be more on guard the next time they fight. And it's a good thing for Yoruichi and Kenpachi that Orihime can basically heal lost limbs. Can't wait to see more!
11/15/2018 c4 6Lightningblade49
Luffy & Co the true winners in this and probably Kisuke when he finds them Luffy is likely to return his marble for food probably after it's done giving his group a little tune up.
Going to assume that 20% will jump to an even 50/50 now after Hyogokyu.
6Lightningblade49Luffy & Co the true winners in this and probably Kisuke when he finds them Luffy is likely to return his marble for food probably after it's done giving his group a little tune up.
Going to assume that 20% will jump to an even 50/50 now after Hyogokyu.
11/15/2018 c1 Obstrocity
While I appreciate the chapter, I am going to stop reading this. A chapter focused entirely on what was happening in Soul Society wasn't really what I wanted, I read for the MCs, not everyone else. That however is not the reason I am going to give this one up, no, it was the author's notes at the bottom where you pretty much shit on Luffy's strength. Twenty percent against either of them? Really? Yamamoto I could understand if it was more like fifty percent, but you are vastly overestimating Aizen, unless you just plan to make him OP as hell in your story. That's all I had to say, and remember, paragraph breaks are for scrubs. #walloftextforlife
While I appreciate the chapter, I am going to stop reading this. A chapter focused entirely on what was happening in Soul Society wasn't really what I wanted, I read for the MCs, not everyone else. That however is not the reason I am going to give this one up, no, it was the author's notes at the bottom where you pretty much shit on Luffy's strength. Twenty percent against either of them? Really? Yamamoto I could understand if it was more like fifty percent, but you are vastly overestimating Aizen, unless you just plan to make him OP as hell in your story. That's all I had to say, and remember, paragraph breaks are for scrubs. #walloftextforlife
11/15/2018 c4 DraconeKing
My goodness, this was absolutely wonderful! I mean, nothing has gone right for Aizen. It really is so funny to see him thinking of all the very sensible reasons someone might invade and steal all this stuff and, nope. It's cause the Straw Hollow Alliance were a bunch of tribal-garbed loonies. I mean, really now? All of this, for pants and pantry, basically. I love it!
My goodness, this was absolutely wonderful! I mean, nothing has gone right for Aizen. It really is so funny to see him thinking of all the very sensible reasons someone might invade and steal all this stuff and, nope. It's cause the Straw Hollow Alliance were a bunch of tribal-garbed loonies. I mean, really now? All of this, for pants and pantry, basically. I love it!
11/15/2018 c4 scl04
It was awesome to read how Aizen has reacted to all of these new unfortunate events that have transpired XD, like honestly I don't remember a lot about Bleach but I think that he was the most disoriented here than ever before (good luck trying to predict the Straw Hatd XD).
I'm really curious to know what will happen now with Ichigo and the rest as well as the Straw Hats and their friends. Bye!.
P.S: It's true that Yamamoto was a beast... but we're talking about Luffy's luck here so he loses XD).
It was awesome to read how Aizen has reacted to all of these new unfortunate events that have transpired XD, like honestly I don't remember a lot about Bleach but I think that he was the most disoriented here than ever before (good luck trying to predict the Straw Hatd XD).
I'm really curious to know what will happen now with Ichigo and the rest as well as the Straw Hats and their friends. Bye!.
P.S: It's true that Yamamoto was a beast... but we're talking about Luffy's luck here so he loses XD).
11/15/2018 c4 Greer123
Great job writing the fight in this chapter. I cannot wait till the next chapter of your story. Hope you are doing well.
Great job writing the fight in this chapter. I cannot wait till the next chapter of your story. Hope you are doing well.
11/15/2018 c4 3pie480
Can Aizen’s illusions fool machines? Are Luffy’s instincts good enough to “see” through Aizen’s illusions? I can’t wait to read more. Thank you for the wonderful chapter! Please update again soon!
3pie480Can Aizen’s illusions fool machines? Are Luffy’s instincts good enough to “see” through Aizen’s illusions? I can’t wait to read more. Thank you for the wonderful chapter! Please update again soon!
11/15/2018 c4 Kiri Kaitou Clover
I’m dying here poor poor Aizen his day is wrecked and he had no TEA!
I’m dying here poor poor Aizen his day is wrecked and he had no TEA!