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6Lightningblade49
Luffy & Co the true winners in this and probably Kisuke when he finds them Luffy is likely to return his marble for food probably after it's done giving his group a little tune up.
Going to assume that 20% will jump to an even 50/50 now after Hyogokyu.
6Lightningblade49Luffy & Co the true winners in this and probably Kisuke when he finds them Luffy is likely to return his marble for food probably after it's done giving his group a little tune up.
Going to assume that 20% will jump to an even 50/50 now after Hyogokyu.
11/15/2018 c1 Obstrocity
While I appreciate the chapter, I am going to stop reading this. A chapter focused entirely on what was happening in Soul Society wasn't really what I wanted, I read for the MCs, not everyone else. That however is not the reason I am going to give this one up, no, it was the author's notes at the bottom where you pretty much shit on Luffy's strength. Twenty percent against either of them? Really? Yamamoto I could understand if it was more like fifty percent, but you are vastly overestimating Aizen, unless you just plan to make him OP as hell in your story. That's all I had to say, and remember, paragraph breaks are for scrubs. #walloftextforlife
While I appreciate the chapter, I am going to stop reading this. A chapter focused entirely on what was happening in Soul Society wasn't really what I wanted, I read for the MCs, not everyone else. That however is not the reason I am going to give this one up, no, it was the author's notes at the bottom where you pretty much shit on Luffy's strength. Twenty percent against either of them? Really? Yamamoto I could understand if it was more like fifty percent, but you are vastly overestimating Aizen, unless you just plan to make him OP as hell in your story. That's all I had to say, and remember, paragraph breaks are for scrubs. #walloftextforlife
11/15/2018 c4 DraconeKing
My goodness, this was absolutely wonderful! I mean, nothing has gone right for Aizen. It really is so funny to see him thinking of all the very sensible reasons someone might invade and steal all this stuff and, nope. It's cause the Straw Hollow Alliance were a bunch of tribal-garbed loonies. I mean, really now? All of this, for pants and pantry, basically. I love it!
My goodness, this was absolutely wonderful! I mean, nothing has gone right for Aizen. It really is so funny to see him thinking of all the very sensible reasons someone might invade and steal all this stuff and, nope. It's cause the Straw Hollow Alliance were a bunch of tribal-garbed loonies. I mean, really now? All of this, for pants and pantry, basically. I love it!
11/15/2018 c4 scl04
It was awesome to read how Aizen has reacted to all of these new unfortunate events that have transpired XD, like honestly I don't remember a lot about Bleach but I think that he was the most disoriented here than ever before (good luck trying to predict the Straw Hatd XD).
I'm really curious to know what will happen now with Ichigo and the rest as well as the Straw Hats and their friends. Bye!.
P.S: It's true that Yamamoto was a beast... but we're talking about Luffy's luck here so he loses XD).
It was awesome to read how Aizen has reacted to all of these new unfortunate events that have transpired XD, like honestly I don't remember a lot about Bleach but I think that he was the most disoriented here than ever before (good luck trying to predict the Straw Hatd XD).
I'm really curious to know what will happen now with Ichigo and the rest as well as the Straw Hats and their friends. Bye!.
P.S: It's true that Yamamoto was a beast... but we're talking about Luffy's luck here so he loses XD).
11/15/2018 c4 Greer123
Great job writing the fight in this chapter. I cannot wait till the next chapter of your story. Hope you are doing well.
Great job writing the fight in this chapter. I cannot wait till the next chapter of your story. Hope you are doing well.
11/15/2018 c4 3pie480
Can Aizen’s illusions fool machines? Are Luffy’s instincts good enough to “see” through Aizen’s illusions? I can’t wait to read more. Thank you for the wonderful chapter! Please update again soon!
3pie480Can Aizen’s illusions fool machines? Are Luffy’s instincts good enough to “see” through Aizen’s illusions? I can’t wait to read more. Thank you for the wonderful chapter! Please update again soon!
11/15/2018 c4 Kiri Kaitou Clover
I’m dying here poor poor Aizen his day is wrecked and he had no TEA!
I’m dying here poor poor Aizen his day is wrecked and he had no TEA!
11/15/2018 c4 nightmaster000
Another brilliant chapter, as we that this most certainly just isn't Aizen's day.
Another brilliant chapter, as we that this most certainly just isn't Aizen's day.
11/15/2018 c4 sharingankakashi007
20% chance even with eating the Hogyokyu
Yeah Aizen really is a monster
He did all of that with his Shikai
Am actually glad to see Aizen starting to shake off the dust
Yeah he has been complacent from the beginning of the series
I do wonder what it would be like if Aizen never played around with them
He pretty much doesn't need the Hogyokyu as long as he uses Kyoka well
But comparing him to Yamamoto is still like comparing an ant to the boot
With his freaking Bankai
I don't see Aizen beating him alone ever
Only reason he stood a chance was cos Yama-jiji was always holding back
With no one around
If Aizen ever fight Yamamoto
All he can do is run like all hell is after him
Luffy vs either of them
Well should see more of where his freaking growth leads him
Then compare, 20% is an optimistic view LoL
20% chance even with eating the Hogyokyu
Yeah Aizen really is a monster
He did all of that with his Shikai
Am actually glad to see Aizen starting to shake off the dust
Yeah he has been complacent from the beginning of the series
I do wonder what it would be like if Aizen never played around with them
He pretty much doesn't need the Hogyokyu as long as he uses Kyoka well
But comparing him to Yamamoto is still like comparing an ant to the boot
With his freaking Bankai
I don't see Aizen beating him alone ever
Only reason he stood a chance was cos Yama-jiji was always holding back
With no one around
If Aizen ever fight Yamamoto
All he can do is run like all hell is after him
Luffy vs either of them
Well should see more of where his freaking growth leads him
Then compare, 20% is an optimistic view LoL
11/15/2018 c4 KyonSmith13
Excellent chapter. Aizen's getaway comes across as very close to how Kubo might've written it had he already fully planned out Aizen's character and wasn't focusing as much on hyping him up. Are we sure Worm's Eidolon isn't an Aizen expy? The parallels are uncanny.
Speaking of, does Luffy's ability to hear the Voice of All Things also allow him to hear Zanpakutou spirits? It might be interesting if he somehow manages to BSOD Aizen by blurting out that all he (Aizen) really wants is worthy opponents.
Also, love how you portrayed Aizen's need for his tea-chan. It's pretty clear that his tea is his one-armed man, his character arc, his sweet Mulan Szechuan teriyaki sauce. And that he's going to get it, even if it takes him nine seasons to do so.
Excellent chapter. Aizen's getaway comes across as very close to how Kubo might've written it had he already fully planned out Aizen's character and wasn't focusing as much on hyping him up. Are we sure Worm's Eidolon isn't an Aizen expy? The parallels are uncanny.
Speaking of, does Luffy's ability to hear the Voice of All Things also allow him to hear Zanpakutou spirits? It might be interesting if he somehow manages to BSOD Aizen by blurting out that all he (Aizen) really wants is worthy opponents.
Also, love how you portrayed Aizen's need for his tea-chan. It's pretty clear that his tea is his one-armed man, his character arc, his sweet Mulan Szechuan teriyaki sauce. And that he's going to get it, even if it takes him nine seasons to do so.
11/15/2018 c4 26Cyricist001
"We have only a 30% chance of defeating Kaido." Law
Kaido proceeds to casually one shot Luffy in his strongest form without trying to defend himself from attacks.
I don't know about you, but I'll abstain from believing percentages of Luffy wining in fights.
26Cyricist001"We have only a 30% chance of defeating Kaido." Law
Kaido proceeds to casually one shot Luffy in his strongest form without trying to defend himself from attacks.
I don't know about you, but I'll abstain from believing percentages of Luffy wining in fights.