for Sea of Souls11/15/2018 c4 nightmaster000
Another brilliant chapter, as we that this most certainly just isn't Aizen's day.
Another brilliant chapter, as we that this most certainly just isn't Aizen's day.
11/15/2018 c4 sharingankakashi007
20% chance even with eating the Hogyokyu
Yeah Aizen really is a monster
He did all of that with his Shikai
Am actually glad to see Aizen starting to shake off the dust
Yeah he has been complacent from the beginning of the series
I do wonder what it would be like if Aizen never played around with them
He pretty much doesn't need the Hogyokyu as long as he uses Kyoka well
But comparing him to Yamamoto is still like comparing an ant to the boot
With his freaking Bankai
I don't see Aizen beating him alone ever
Only reason he stood a chance was cos Yama-jiji was always holding back
With no one around
If Aizen ever fight Yamamoto
All he can do is run like all hell is after him
Luffy vs either of them
Well should see more of where his freaking growth leads him
Then compare, 20% is an optimistic view LoL
20% chance even with eating the Hogyokyu
Yeah Aizen really is a monster
He did all of that with his Shikai
Am actually glad to see Aizen starting to shake off the dust
Yeah he has been complacent from the beginning of the series
I do wonder what it would be like if Aizen never played around with them
He pretty much doesn't need the Hogyokyu as long as he uses Kyoka well
But comparing him to Yamamoto is still like comparing an ant to the boot
With his freaking Bankai
I don't see Aizen beating him alone ever
Only reason he stood a chance was cos Yama-jiji was always holding back
With no one around
If Aizen ever fight Yamamoto
All he can do is run like all hell is after him
Luffy vs either of them
Well should see more of where his freaking growth leads him
Then compare, 20% is an optimistic view LoL
11/15/2018 c4 KyonSmith13
Excellent chapter. Aizen's getaway comes across as very close to how Kubo might've written it had he already fully planned out Aizen's character and wasn't focusing as much on hyping him up. Are we sure Worm's Eidolon isn't an Aizen expy? The parallels are uncanny.
Speaking of, does Luffy's ability to hear the Voice of All Things also allow him to hear Zanpakutou spirits? It might be interesting if he somehow manages to BSOD Aizen by blurting out that all he (Aizen) really wants is worthy opponents.
Also, love how you portrayed Aizen's need for his tea-chan. It's pretty clear that his tea is his one-armed man, his character arc, his sweet Mulan Szechuan teriyaki sauce. And that he's going to get it, even if it takes him nine seasons to do so.
Excellent chapter. Aizen's getaway comes across as very close to how Kubo might've written it had he already fully planned out Aizen's character and wasn't focusing as much on hyping him up. Are we sure Worm's Eidolon isn't an Aizen expy? The parallels are uncanny.
Speaking of, does Luffy's ability to hear the Voice of All Things also allow him to hear Zanpakutou spirits? It might be interesting if he somehow manages to BSOD Aizen by blurting out that all he (Aizen) really wants is worthy opponents.
Also, love how you portrayed Aizen's need for his tea-chan. It's pretty clear that his tea is his one-armed man, his character arc, his sweet Mulan Szechuan teriyaki sauce. And that he's going to get it, even if it takes him nine seasons to do so.
11/15/2018 c4 
26Cyricist001
"We have only a 30% chance of defeating Kaido." Law
Kaido proceeds to casually one shot Luffy in his strongest form without trying to defend himself from attacks.
I don't know about you, but I'll abstain from believing percentages of Luffy wining in fights.
26Cyricist001"We have only a 30% chance of defeating Kaido." Law
Kaido proceeds to casually one shot Luffy in his strongest form without trying to defend himself from attacks.
I don't know about you, but I'll abstain from believing percentages of Luffy wining in fights.
11/15/2018 c4 musizlover2008
Aizen, wow, he was caught offguard and barely manages to fight off the Soul Reaper Captains while trying to get some breathing room to get back to Las Noches. I knew he was ticked off. He made his grand debute as the villain only to have his red carpet swiped from under his feet and tripping him in a humiliating manner. Hope Orihime can heal the critically wounded Soul Reapers, a few of them lost their limbs and i'am sure she can restore them, like when she restored Grimmjow's arm from nothing.
Aizen, wow, he was caught offguard and barely manages to fight off the Soul Reaper Captains while trying to get some breathing room to get back to Las Noches. I knew he was ticked off. He made his grand debute as the villain only to have his red carpet swiped from under his feet and tripping him in a humiliating manner. Hope Orihime can heal the critically wounded Soul Reapers, a few of them lost their limbs and i'am sure she can restore them, like when she restored Grimmjow's arm from nothing.
11/15/2018 c4 3Rusty Thebanite
That title instantly got me fired up to see some good old-fashioned comeuppance headed a douchebag's way. :) Gin's commentary is a riot as well. I'll be honest...I had forgotten that Luffy ate the Hogyoku. :P
3Rusty ThebaniteThat title instantly got me fired up to see some good old-fashioned comeuppance headed a douchebag's way. :) Gin's commentary is a riot as well. I'll be honest...I had forgotten that Luffy ate the Hogyoku. :P
11/13/2018 c1 2Creation Teller
Hi, back again with more ideas.
First shouldn't Luffy also be immune to Lightning based spells because of his ex-rubber powers?
Also if Arrancar did gain the abilities of Shinigami, theoretically, could they gain the ability to use a few kido spells and hando spells. Also concerning Lilynette is she going to be like Nel was to Ichigo? Also is Nel going has a puppy crush on Ichigo or Luffy? Remembered the blushing scene and got curious, might be reading to into this, but was curious.
Also could Kisuke make Gigai's for the Arrancar (mainly Luffy's group) so you can use the human versions of the pictures made by MasterQwertster and have human versions of the others? or did you already think of that?
Anyway, thats all I wanted to say Bye.
2Creation TellerHi, back again with more ideas.
First shouldn't Luffy also be immune to Lightning based spells because of his ex-rubber powers?
Also if Arrancar did gain the abilities of Shinigami, theoretically, could they gain the ability to use a few kido spells and hando spells. Also concerning Lilynette is she going to be like Nel was to Ichigo? Also is Nel going has a puppy crush on Ichigo or Luffy? Remembered the blushing scene and got curious, might be reading to into this, but was curious.
Also could Kisuke make Gigai's for the Arrancar (mainly Luffy's group) so you can use the human versions of the pictures made by MasterQwertster and have human versions of the others? or did you already think of that?
Anyway, thats all I wanted to say Bye.
11/8/2018 c3 4Greatazuredragon
Bwahahaha! Oh this chapter was awesome! The SH running amok on Las Noches while the Espada could do nothing due to the orders of their mighty leader (even if truth be told, who would expect such a scenario and prepare for it?) was good; they completely ruining Aizen's dramatic exit was better; but Luffy EATING Aizen's half of the hogyokou took the cake! XD
Awesome work, will be looking forward to Aizen having a conniption on the next chapter!
4GreatazuredragonBwahahaha! Oh this chapter was awesome! The SH running amok on Las Noches while the Espada could do nothing due to the orders of their mighty leader (even if truth be told, who would expect such a scenario and prepare for it?) was good; they completely ruining Aizen's dramatic exit was better; but Luffy EATING Aizen's half of the hogyokou took the cake! XD
Awesome work, will be looking forward to Aizen having a conniption on the next chapter!
11/7/2018 c3 Creation Teller
Hi, just to hear to say somethings. Sorry for being so into the whole shipping thing, guess it's just the inner anime fan in me. And the things don't have to be big, it can be just minor things like brief interactions, how the characters act towards there "interests", and brief moments to show it is their, like how Apacci blushes towards Chopper. Just wanted to say that. and to finish my thought on how Charrlotte joins the SHP group, after the interaction between them as described in my other review Charlotte is witness to his masters more violent nature and finds it not "beautiful". They attack and injure him, but he manages to open a portal and runs away. They don't go after him as they think he will die from his wounds. The Straw Hats find him and heal him up. After asking them why they helped him, Luffy says "We're friends right" (the same thing he said to Usopp), Charolette tears up and thanks them for their kindness. After he heals and calms down he bows before Luffy and swears his friendship and loyalty to him. Well thats all I wanted to say, excited for next chapter, Bye.
Hi, just to hear to say somethings. Sorry for being so into the whole shipping thing, guess it's just the inner anime fan in me. And the things don't have to be big, it can be just minor things like brief interactions, how the characters act towards there "interests", and brief moments to show it is their, like how Apacci blushes towards Chopper. Just wanted to say that. and to finish my thought on how Charrlotte joins the SHP group, after the interaction between them as described in my other review Charlotte is witness to his masters more violent nature and finds it not "beautiful". They attack and injure him, but he manages to open a portal and runs away. They don't go after him as they think he will die from his wounds. The Straw Hats find him and heal him up. After asking them why they helped him, Luffy says "We're friends right" (the same thing he said to Usopp), Charolette tears up and thanks them for their kindness. After he heals and calms down he bows before Luffy and swears his friendship and loyalty to him. Well thats all I wanted to say, excited for next chapter, Bye.
11/6/2018 c3 Guest
Can’t wait to hear hat and clogs reaction
Can’t wait to hear hat and clogs reaction
11/6/2018 c3 Creation Teller
Adding to last two reviews. 2 very important things story arcs and a 2 Ways for the SHP to enter the Soul Society. First up is as stated in previous review the Straw Hats are called to handle dealing with Rouge Arrancar that escaped into Soul Society after Aizen's betrayal. Heres how it could work. Few days after the major fights everyone is still healing when they get reports of Hollows and Arrancars being spotted all over Soul Society, with a majority of Soul Societies major hitters still not at full strength the Head captain makes a major decision get the Straw Hats to help. They would do this as they are low on strong hitters who are not still injured or at full strength, they do know is that Hollows heal a lot faster then them in Hueco Mundo and they know the Straw Hats don't like Aizen or his lackeys. So an "enemy of my enemy is my friend" situation arises and the Soul Reapers will give the Straw Hats lots of Reitsu to keep them full and sane and leave them be along with any Hollows who don't cause trouble under there watch. This could lead to an opportunity for OC or know Arrancar to join the SHP after they are devastated by Aizen's betrayal and left with no leader or goal, which Luffy and the others can give them. Also change of plans for the anime only arcs change to the duplicate Soul Reaper Arc. I realize the Zanpakto rebellion is very (I don't know the right word) (a cross between strange, emotional, and to much mind control and the swords back-stabbing their wielders). The Duplicate Arc would work better as it can allow the SHP to fight "Soul Reapers" that they hadn't fought before. It could also give them a chance to root out some of the corruption in the Soul Reapers, and the 46 pillars or whatever they are called. Well those are my thoughts, Bye.
Adding to last two reviews. 2 very important things story arcs and a 2 Ways for the SHP to enter the Soul Society. First up is as stated in previous review the Straw Hats are called to handle dealing with Rouge Arrancar that escaped into Soul Society after Aizen's betrayal. Heres how it could work. Few days after the major fights everyone is still healing when they get reports of Hollows and Arrancars being spotted all over Soul Society, with a majority of Soul Societies major hitters still not at full strength the Head captain makes a major decision get the Straw Hats to help. They would do this as they are low on strong hitters who are not still injured or at full strength, they do know is that Hollows heal a lot faster then them in Hueco Mundo and they know the Straw Hats don't like Aizen or his lackeys. So an "enemy of my enemy is my friend" situation arises and the Soul Reapers will give the Straw Hats lots of Reitsu to keep them full and sane and leave them be along with any Hollows who don't cause trouble under there watch. This could lead to an opportunity for OC or know Arrancar to join the SHP after they are devastated by Aizen's betrayal and left with no leader or goal, which Luffy and the others can give them. Also change of plans for the anime only arcs change to the duplicate Soul Reaper Arc. I realize the Zanpakto rebellion is very (I don't know the right word) (a cross between strange, emotional, and to much mind control and the swords back-stabbing their wielders). The Duplicate Arc would work better as it can allow the SHP to fight "Soul Reapers" that they hadn't fought before. It could also give them a chance to root out some of the corruption in the Soul Reapers, and the 46 pillars or whatever they are called. Well those are my thoughts, Bye.