for Sea of Souls11/6/2018 c3 Creation Teller
Adding to last two reviews. 2 very important things story arcs and a 2 Ways for the SHP to enter the Soul Society. First up is as stated in previous review the Straw Hats are called to handle dealing with Rouge Arrancar that escaped into Soul Society after Aizen's betrayal. Heres how it could work. Few days after the major fights everyone is still healing when they get reports of Hollows and Arrancars being spotted all over Soul Society, with a majority of Soul Societies major hitters still not at full strength the Head captain makes a major decision get the Straw Hats to help. They would do this as they are low on strong hitters who are not still injured or at full strength, they do know is that Hollows heal a lot faster then them in Hueco Mundo and they know the Straw Hats don't like Aizen or his lackeys. So an "enemy of my enemy is my friend" situation arises and the Soul Reapers will give the Straw Hats lots of Reitsu to keep them full and sane and leave them be along with any Hollows who don't cause trouble under there watch. This could lead to an opportunity for OC or know Arrancar to join the SHP after they are devastated by Aizen's betrayal and left with no leader or goal, which Luffy and the others can give them. Also change of plans for the anime only arcs change to the duplicate Soul Reaper Arc. I realize the Zanpakto rebellion is very (I don't know the right word) (a cross between strange, emotional, and to much mind control and the swords back-stabbing their wielders). The Duplicate Arc would work better as it can allow the SHP to fight "Soul Reapers" that they hadn't fought before. It could also give them a chance to root out some of the corruption in the Soul Reapers, and the 46 pillars or whatever they are called. Well those are my thoughts, Bye.
Adding to last two reviews. 2 very important things story arcs and a 2 Ways for the SHP to enter the Soul Society. First up is as stated in previous review the Straw Hats are called to handle dealing with Rouge Arrancar that escaped into Soul Society after Aizen's betrayal. Heres how it could work. Few days after the major fights everyone is still healing when they get reports of Hollows and Arrancars being spotted all over Soul Society, with a majority of Soul Societies major hitters still not at full strength the Head captain makes a major decision get the Straw Hats to help. They would do this as they are low on strong hitters who are not still injured or at full strength, they do know is that Hollows heal a lot faster then them in Hueco Mundo and they know the Straw Hats don't like Aizen or his lackeys. So an "enemy of my enemy is my friend" situation arises and the Soul Reapers will give the Straw Hats lots of Reitsu to keep them full and sane and leave them be along with any Hollows who don't cause trouble under there watch. This could lead to an opportunity for OC or know Arrancar to join the SHP after they are devastated by Aizen's betrayal and left with no leader or goal, which Luffy and the others can give them. Also change of plans for the anime only arcs change to the duplicate Soul Reaper Arc. I realize the Zanpakto rebellion is very (I don't know the right word) (a cross between strange, emotional, and to much mind control and the swords back-stabbing their wielders). The Duplicate Arc would work better as it can allow the SHP to fight "Soul Reapers" that they hadn't fought before. It could also give them a chance to root out some of the corruption in the Soul Reapers, and the 46 pillars or whatever they are called. Well those are my thoughts, Bye.
11/6/2018 c3 Creation Teller
Hi, got some more ideas for this story. I think the first major people that the Straw Hats should meet should be, the Visored, Ichigo's sisters, or Ichigo's friends (Chad and Orihime). Also for pairings I think it would be funny if he got together with one of these girls. Rangiku, Yoruichi, Isane, or Lisa of the Visored. Each has someone that cares for them and would hate/be annoyed with Sanji because of it and make for some funny interactions. Shunsui for Lisa, Toshiro or maybe Gin(?) for Rangiku, Sui-Feng for Yoruichi, or Kiyone for Isane.
Reasons for each
1: Rangiku, someone that flirtatious and hot would be obvious attraction for Sanji, but he would also see what it also on the inside, a strong woman with very complicated and conflicting emotions caused by certain events and people. All in all they could work well together.
2: Yoruichi, similar reasons she is flirtatious and very attractive. Though she migt be a slow burn it could still work. She is more open to others like Ichigo and the Visored and other unique cases, also they are both of nobility, she was to be a noble and Sanji was once a prince. They could relate and understand each others situations, if Sanji regains his memories of that time.
3: Lisa, Both are not like the others of their groups. Lisa is a outcasted Shinigami and Sanji is a more peaceful (logical) Hollow/Arrancar. They might understand and relate to each other about surviving harsh enviorments and fear of being hunted. Also it just be funny for her super chill ex-captain to lose his cool over someone he cares for in a relation with a Hollow. X-)
4: Isane, they would help each other in turn. Isane it obviously very insecure in many areas including her height and femininity, Sanji could help with that. He could (after his pervert moments pass) help her be more confidint in herself, he would do this being the super gentleman that he his and that could lead to Isane gaining feelings for him. She would in turn help him by helping get his memories back and maybe changing Soul Society. She could use her healing Ritsu on his mind to draw out his memories and maybe teach him and Chopper different minor or healing spells, leading to a thankful and love struck Sanji.
Whichever I think all of these have a shot. Now on to other bussness.
Been reading some of the stories you liked and one bleach story describes the afterlife perfectly. "Ichigo Awakens" has a great description of Sould Society and Bleach's afterlife as a whole. You either go to Hueco Mundo as a hollow devouring souls, to hell and experience eternal torment, or go to Soul Society, a poor and rural version of Feudal Japan, where your either living in poor districts resorting to stealing, scavenging, or running a small bussiness or farm, or you serve the higher ups and end up in servitude, to either the nobles or as Shinigami "slaves" to the law, hated of several of the common people, and with a very high chance of death. There is no "heaven" the living world is the best place out of all of these. I want the SHP to notice this fact and try to help change Huceo Mundo and Soul Society.
Hi, got some more ideas for this story. I think the first major people that the Straw Hats should meet should be, the Visored, Ichigo's sisters, or Ichigo's friends (Chad and Orihime). Also for pairings I think it would be funny if he got together with one of these girls. Rangiku, Yoruichi, Isane, or Lisa of the Visored. Each has someone that cares for them and would hate/be annoyed with Sanji because of it and make for some funny interactions. Shunsui for Lisa, Toshiro or maybe Gin(?) for Rangiku, Sui-Feng for Yoruichi, or Kiyone for Isane.
Reasons for each
1: Rangiku, someone that flirtatious and hot would be obvious attraction for Sanji, but he would also see what it also on the inside, a strong woman with very complicated and conflicting emotions caused by certain events and people. All in all they could work well together.
2: Yoruichi, similar reasons she is flirtatious and very attractive. Though she migt be a slow burn it could still work. She is more open to others like Ichigo and the Visored and other unique cases, also they are both of nobility, she was to be a noble and Sanji was once a prince. They could relate and understand each others situations, if Sanji regains his memories of that time.
3: Lisa, Both are not like the others of their groups. Lisa is a outcasted Shinigami and Sanji is a more peaceful (logical) Hollow/Arrancar. They might understand and relate to each other about surviving harsh enviorments and fear of being hunted. Also it just be funny for her super chill ex-captain to lose his cool over someone he cares for in a relation with a Hollow. X-)
4: Isane, they would help each other in turn. Isane it obviously very insecure in many areas including her height and femininity, Sanji could help with that. He could (after his pervert moments pass) help her be more confidint in herself, he would do this being the super gentleman that he his and that could lead to Isane gaining feelings for him. She would in turn help him by helping get his memories back and maybe changing Soul Society. She could use her healing Ritsu on his mind to draw out his memories and maybe teach him and Chopper different minor or healing spells, leading to a thankful and love struck Sanji.
Whichever I think all of these have a shot. Now on to other bussness.
Been reading some of the stories you liked and one bleach story describes the afterlife perfectly. "Ichigo Awakens" has a great description of Sould Society and Bleach's afterlife as a whole. You either go to Hueco Mundo as a hollow devouring souls, to hell and experience eternal torment, or go to Soul Society, a poor and rural version of Feudal Japan, where your either living in poor districts resorting to stealing, scavenging, or running a small bussiness or farm, or you serve the higher ups and end up in servitude, to either the nobles or as Shinigami "slaves" to the law, hated of several of the common people, and with a very high chance of death. There is no "heaven" the living world is the best place out of all of these. I want the SHP to notice this fact and try to help change Huceo Mundo and Soul Society.
11/1/2018 c3 
7Crossovernaru
Oh man this was worth the wait. It is finally good to see the straw hats remembering important aspects of themselves. I am especially curious to see how Bleach characters will react to Franky’s upcoming cyborg transformation, especially Orihime.
By the way, I can see how Zoro would have the weakest Cero ability among his comrades, but wouldn’t he be able to compensate by channeling the Cero through his blades creating razor sharp energy blasts? While I was expecting more conflict as they invaded Aizen’s base, this was also a good outcome.
The best part about this chapter was the suspense you left towards the end. First off Aizen’s means of escape has just been destroyed, leaving him stranded. In addition, Luffy ate what I assume is the Hogyokou, causing an unknown pulse of energy to be released through him and his allies.
I am curious to see what happens next. After all if you plan to make Aizen a true villain for your story, I highly doubt something like this would stop him. I am certain (hopefully) that he has prepared a contingency for this type of situation. In any case, one thing is for sure, this has caused a massive delay in his plans.
I am also eager to see how other characters will react to them, especially Orihime. Keep up the good work and looking forward to the next update.
7CrossovernaruOh man this was worth the wait. It is finally good to see the straw hats remembering important aspects of themselves. I am especially curious to see how Bleach characters will react to Franky’s upcoming cyborg transformation, especially Orihime.
By the way, I can see how Zoro would have the weakest Cero ability among his comrades, but wouldn’t he be able to compensate by channeling the Cero through his blades creating razor sharp energy blasts? While I was expecting more conflict as they invaded Aizen’s base, this was also a good outcome.
The best part about this chapter was the suspense you left towards the end. First off Aizen’s means of escape has just been destroyed, leaving him stranded. In addition, Luffy ate what I assume is the Hogyokou, causing an unknown pulse of energy to be released through him and his allies.
I am curious to see what happens next. After all if you plan to make Aizen a true villain for your story, I highly doubt something like this would stop him. I am certain (hopefully) that he has prepared a contingency for this type of situation. In any case, one thing is for sure, this has caused a massive delay in his plans.
I am also eager to see how other characters will react to them, especially Orihime. Keep up the good work and looking forward to the next update.
10/31/2018 c3 TheB
Holy shit, that ending was awesome. :D Great story!
Yeah, I kinda guessed that Luffy sensed Aizen's Hougyoku, but it did not expect him to swallow it, heh. Can't wait to see Urahara's (eventual?) reaction to that.
Holy shit, that ending was awesome. :D Great story!
Yeah, I kinda guessed that Luffy sensed Aizen's Hougyoku, but it did not expect him to swallow it, heh. Can't wait to see Urahara's (eventual?) reaction to that.
10/31/2018 c3 scl04
I have to say that the idea is quite interesting, it threw mw off a little that the Straw Hats died but at least they're still together (it was really heartwaiming how all of them stuck together even if they didn't remember who they were :D).
I'm not really that much of a fan of Bleach even if I enjoyed it at that time but I'll follow your story to see how this develops, it has also been funny as hell after all ;).
I have to say that the idea is quite interesting, it threw mw off a little that the Straw Hats died but at least they're still together (it was really heartwaiming how all of them stuck together even if they didn't remember who they were :D).
I'm not really that much of a fan of Bleach even if I enjoyed it at that time but I'll follow your story to see how this develops, it has also been funny as hell after all ;).
10/30/2018 c3 Dr. No Good
I could see Arturo Plateado taking over what is left of Aizen's army and trying to take over the One Piece World. He would make a very powerful foe for the hats
I could see Arturo Plateado taking over what is left of Aizen's army and trying to take over the One Piece World. He would make a very powerful foe for the hats
10/28/2018 c3 Leaf1337
Well.
I feel like that you got the wacky cartoon yet serious nature of OP down to a tee. The two best part that symbolized that was Luffy letting Jimbe return fire and later him eating the Hogyoku.
Both are very much two sides of Luffy thats is done well here.
Can't wait to see them cause more chaos in their wake
Well.
I feel like that you got the wacky cartoon yet serious nature of OP down to a tee. The two best part that symbolized that was Luffy letting Jimbe return fire and later him eating the Hogyoku.
Both are very much two sides of Luffy thats is done well here.
Can't wait to see them cause more chaos in their wake
10/28/2018 c3 5MadelVer
Oooh~ Interesting... Very Interesting... Can't wait to see what will happen next... hmm...
5MadelVerOooh~ Interesting... Very Interesting... Can't wait to see what will happen next... hmm...
10/27/2018 c3 Guest
So, something you might not know;
The original Soul King was a God, the last God, because the people that would become the Nobles of the Soul Society murdered all of the others.
Naturally killing most of the Gods of the world caused horrific things to happen everywhere, until a "solution" was devised, this solution was to mutilate the last living God on both a physical and spiritual level and keep it around as "The Soul King" to keep the situation from deteriorating further.
...Yes, this means that the Soul King is Bleach's YHWH and that Ywach is literally Jesus Christ.
So, something you might not know;
The original Soul King was a God, the last God, because the people that would become the Nobles of the Soul Society murdered all of the others.
Naturally killing most of the Gods of the world caused horrific things to happen everywhere, until a "solution" was devised, this solution was to mutilate the last living God on both a physical and spiritual level and keep it around as "The Soul King" to keep the situation from deteriorating further.
...Yes, this means that the Soul King is Bleach's YHWH and that Ywach is literally Jesus Christ.
10/27/2018 c3 HUNTER020020
Oh my goddess...what if ace is in the soul society. And he's a soul reaper.
Anyway love the chapter. Love the character very spot on and.
AHAHAHAHAA! XD luffy ate the stone!
Oh my goddess...what if ace is in the soul society. And he's a soul reaper.
Anyway love the chapter. Love the character very spot on and.
AHAHAHAHAA! XD luffy ate the stone!
10/27/2018 c3 Midnight49
D... did... no that didn’t just happen... DID LUFFY JUST ATE THE HOGYOKU!? Well rip who ever fights the straw hats now!
D... did... no that didn’t just happen... DID LUFFY JUST ATE THE HOGYOKU!? Well rip who ever fights the straw hats now!