
9/19/2018 c1 Creation Teller
Hi cool idea for a story. I'm not a huge Bleach reader or watcher, but I've seen enough to understand and maybe give ideas for the story. Now for the ideas, if you are not already planning on doing these then I guess I just guessed luck. Anyway One thing is that you might want to say where in the Bleach universe this story is, what chapter or volume from the manga is it at, or what episode or between what episodes is the story currently at. Also are you following the manga, anime, or both? Cause the anime as some extra arcs and it stops before the final arcs in the manga. If you can answer those it would clear things up for the readers I think. Also a previous review made some good points about the Straw Hats making friends with some of the other espada and their fractions. Like coyote, Tier Harribel, and Nel and their fractions as stated. I looked at the pictures from deviant art and really like the ones of Brook and Chopper, their now fully human-(ish). Final thoughts I think it would be funny if some of the girl hollows gain crushes on the guys from the crew(brook and chopper included). It would be like Hancock and Pudding and all sorts of wacky love scenes. Also about their powers, will they get their original ones back along with their new hollow ones? I think Usopp should be able to use multiple different ceros, including very long range ones. Chopper's zanpakuto it should have multiple froms like him and maybe for his huge monster point his physical form should change into like a young adult or teenager. Sorry for writing so much just had a lot to say, can't wait to see their looks and powers. Hope you update your stories soon. Keep writing :)
Hi cool idea for a story. I'm not a huge Bleach reader or watcher, but I've seen enough to understand and maybe give ideas for the story. Now for the ideas, if you are not already planning on doing these then I guess I just guessed luck. Anyway One thing is that you might want to say where in the Bleach universe this story is, what chapter or volume from the manga is it at, or what episode or between what episodes is the story currently at. Also are you following the manga, anime, or both? Cause the anime as some extra arcs and it stops before the final arcs in the manga. If you can answer those it would clear things up for the readers I think. Also a previous review made some good points about the Straw Hats making friends with some of the other espada and their fractions. Like coyote, Tier Harribel, and Nel and their fractions as stated. I looked at the pictures from deviant art and really like the ones of Brook and Chopper, their now fully human-(ish). Final thoughts I think it would be funny if some of the girl hollows gain crushes on the guys from the crew(brook and chopper included). It would be like Hancock and Pudding and all sorts of wacky love scenes. Also about their powers, will they get their original ones back along with their new hollow ones? I think Usopp should be able to use multiple different ceros, including very long range ones. Chopper's zanpakuto it should have multiple froms like him and maybe for his huge monster point his physical form should change into like a young adult or teenager. Sorry for writing so much just had a lot to say, can't wait to see their looks and powers. Hope you update your stories soon. Keep writing :)
9/5/2018 c1 Guest
This is going to be awesome! Keep up thegood work! I hope you'll updatesoon! I can't wait.
This is going to be awesome! Keep up thegood work! I hope you'll updatesoon! I can't wait.
9/2/2018 c1 Odette
Please tell me their will eventually be a Soul King joke because both bleach and one piece have them an I really need this.
Please tell me their will eventually be a Soul King joke because both bleach and one piece have them an I really need this.
8/31/2018 c1 spiritedfaraway
I cannot wait to see how the straw hats completely upend everything! This is such a great start!
I cannot wait to see how the straw hats completely upend everything! This is such a great start!
8/26/2018 c1
3OnePieceChaldea
Got to say I never thought I would see you put another crossover out especially one with a very rigid universe such as Bleach. I would’ve done something like this myself but the Bleach Universe doesn’t offer enough freedom in locations for the Straw Hats to reasonably go let alone the fact it’s a series based in the afterlife.
But that’s why I love it when Crossovers feature something like this, them being Hollows instead of regular soul reapers. The Straw Hats wouldn’t fit in a rigid or militarized environment such as Soul Society as I would seriously be disappointed if you don’t have Robin comment on the Soul Reaper’s atrocities to maintain the universal balance or Luffy comment on how Soul Society’s similarities with the Goa Kingdom with how the Rukongai where the normal souls end up is just a less trash filled version of the Gray Terminal.
I mean obviously Aizen and Ywhach are definitely worse in terms of evil but Soul Society aren’t saints themselves when you see the Rukongai as well as how some of their members act.
It’s this kind of culture clash I’ve grown to love whenever I actually find characters in crossovers interacting with each other.
Back to the main topic at hand, I agree Luffy wouldn’t aim to be King of the Hollows or fall in line as a mere Espada to and his crew are far too free spirited and and independent to fall into the same kind of Hive mentality that Arrancar fall into when they’re apart of Aizen’s army, at least the weaker ones. I would love to see how the Straw Hats would interact with the more benevolent members of Aizen’s army like Starrk or Harribel since I’ve always pictured the Straw Hats at least becoming friends with those two and their Fraccions due to their beliefs in Strong Bonds and caring for their friends. The rest would be interesting too due to the Hollow Mindset of following the Strongest is challenged by the Straw Hat Pirates Iron clad bonds despite their new Hollow natures. Not to mention the idea of the Crew running into Nel and her friends out in the desert near Las Noches...
I’ll keep an eye out for this story because I cannot wait to see the Straw Hats mess up whatever Long term plans that Aizen, Urahara, or Ywhach have been cooking with their mere presence.
See Ya!

Got to say I never thought I would see you put another crossover out especially one with a very rigid universe such as Bleach. I would’ve done something like this myself but the Bleach Universe doesn’t offer enough freedom in locations for the Straw Hats to reasonably go let alone the fact it’s a series based in the afterlife.
But that’s why I love it when Crossovers feature something like this, them being Hollows instead of regular soul reapers. The Straw Hats wouldn’t fit in a rigid or militarized environment such as Soul Society as I would seriously be disappointed if you don’t have Robin comment on the Soul Reaper’s atrocities to maintain the universal balance or Luffy comment on how Soul Society’s similarities with the Goa Kingdom with how the Rukongai where the normal souls end up is just a less trash filled version of the Gray Terminal.
I mean obviously Aizen and Ywhach are definitely worse in terms of evil but Soul Society aren’t saints themselves when you see the Rukongai as well as how some of their members act.
It’s this kind of culture clash I’ve grown to love whenever I actually find characters in crossovers interacting with each other.
Back to the main topic at hand, I agree Luffy wouldn’t aim to be King of the Hollows or fall in line as a mere Espada to and his crew are far too free spirited and and independent to fall into the same kind of Hive mentality that Arrancar fall into when they’re apart of Aizen’s army, at least the weaker ones. I would love to see how the Straw Hats would interact with the more benevolent members of Aizen’s army like Starrk or Harribel since I’ve always pictured the Straw Hats at least becoming friends with those two and their Fraccions due to their beliefs in Strong Bonds and caring for their friends. The rest would be interesting too due to the Hollow Mindset of following the Strongest is challenged by the Straw Hat Pirates Iron clad bonds despite their new Hollow natures. Not to mention the idea of the Crew running into Nel and her friends out in the desert near Las Noches...
I’ll keep an eye out for this story because I cannot wait to see the Straw Hats mess up whatever Long term plans that Aizen, Urahara, or Ywhach have been cooking with their mere presence.
See Ya!
8/25/2018 c1 nightmaster000
Great start i'm quite eager to see where you go with this, and how the Straw Hats will interact with the various Bleach characters, vice versa.
Great start i'm quite eager to see where you go with this, and how the Straw Hats will interact with the various Bleach characters, vice versa.
8/24/2018 c1 Guest
aaahh this is really cool! the characters seems pretty well done Go Strawhats
aaahh this is really cool! the characters seems pretty well done Go Strawhats
8/24/2018 c1 SilentXD7
Very interesting story. I hope you continue with the series in the future and I see great potential in this story. I actually wonder if Luffy and the crew will gain powers similar to their previous ones in their past life and will any of them are capable of developing a second release in their resurreccion form similar to Ulquiorra in the future? It would be awesome if Luffy some how combined it with his gears if they ever gain their old abilities as well as haki. I can honestly see Luffy, Sanji, Robin, and maybe Chopper have zanpakuto that are not swords like maybe gauntlets, brass knuckles, or a iron pipe (Luffy)... know that I think about it, Luffy zanpakuto and resurreccion could be based on Sun Wukong and Zoro's form can literally be Asura... my god.
Very interesting story. I hope you continue with the series in the future and I see great potential in this story. I actually wonder if Luffy and the crew will gain powers similar to their previous ones in their past life and will any of them are capable of developing a second release in their resurreccion form similar to Ulquiorra in the future? It would be awesome if Luffy some how combined it with his gears if they ever gain their old abilities as well as haki. I can honestly see Luffy, Sanji, Robin, and maybe Chopper have zanpakuto that are not swords like maybe gauntlets, brass knuckles, or a iron pipe (Luffy)... know that I think about it, Luffy zanpakuto and resurreccion could be based on Sun Wukong and Zoro's form can literally be Asura... my god.
8/24/2018 c1 Agent Frank
Thank you for being so creative. I am always lamenting the lack of amazing One piece fics and in the week and a half since I've discovered your page you've shown me 3. Granted this is only the first chapter, but I am already hooked to the story
ps. the art was really good so props to MasterQwertster
Thank you for being so creative. I am always lamenting the lack of amazing One piece fics and in the week and a half since I've discovered your page you've shown me 3. Granted this is only the first chapter, but I am already hooked to the story
ps. the art was really good so props to MasterQwertster
8/24/2018 c1 Guest
Hahahaha! I love this. I can't wait to see where this goes!
Hahahaha! I love this. I can't wait to see where this goes!