for Eventuality3/4/2021 c1 
3bikermo
Nice story with a rather disappointing end-actually no end at all. I wish you would reconsider and get them together. Poor Hermione deserves more.
3bikermoNice story with a rather disappointing end-actually no end at all. I wish you would reconsider and get them together. Poor Hermione deserves more.
2/12/2021 c1 bilenalebachew000
I LOVED THISS YOU SHOULDER MAKE MORE LIKE THIS UHHHHHHHH I JUST CAN'T IT IS AMAZING UHHHHHHHHH PLS MAKE MOREEEEEEE
I LOVED THISS YOU SHOULDER MAKE MORE LIKE THIS UHHHHHHHH I JUST CAN'T IT IS AMAZING UHHHHHHHHH PLS MAKE MOREEEEEEE
5/29/2020 c1 6cshen.julienne
Narration is really easy to read. It's enjoyable. But I really do hope it has a sequel. She deserves better than that.
6cshen.julienneNarration is really easy to read. It's enjoyable. But I really do hope it has a sequel. She deserves better than that.
12/12/2019 c1 5Crazily-Addicted
Wow...great story and really good writing! I love it...find myself coming back to it again and again! U really really should do a follow up story or maybe a chapter 2 from Harry’s POV where maybe he realizes that what he feels for Hermione is more than just physical...Hermione’s had to deal with a lot of jealousy in this one. Maybe it’s Harry’s turn...? Would be nice if they officially got together as a result of him getting jealous and demanding to be more serious, u know? The possibilities r endless! Please? Pretty please?
5Crazily-AddictedWow...great story and really good writing! I love it...find myself coming back to it again and again! U really really should do a follow up story or maybe a chapter 2 from Harry’s POV where maybe he realizes that what he feels for Hermione is more than just physical...Hermione’s had to deal with a lot of jealousy in this one. Maybe it’s Harry’s turn...? Would be nice if they officially got together as a result of him getting jealous and demanding to be more serious, u know? The possibilities r endless! Please? Pretty please?
11/10/2019 c1 Guest
Omg that was soo good! I esp laughed at the helicopter cocks haha! I really felt for Hermione tho, giving love advice to a boy you like? Yikes that hurts haha. The ending really didn’t really make it clear if they got together in the end but I ofc imagine that they did. Still a lovely read tho! xx Joie
Omg that was soo good! I esp laughed at the helicopter cocks haha! I really felt for Hermione tho, giving love advice to a boy you like? Yikes that hurts haha. The ending really didn’t really make it clear if they got together in the end but I ofc imagine that they did. Still a lovely read tho! xx Joie
3/6/2019 c1 daniella2cool
I really dont like giving bad reviews but this hermione is kinda pathetic as a women it just makes me cringe. You write really well though.
I really dont like giving bad reviews but this hermione is kinda pathetic as a women it just makes me cringe. You write really well though.
11/23/2018 c1 AnimePickles
I hope to see more Harmony stories from you in the future! You have excellent writing and had me engrossed from the beginning. Keep it up! :-)
I hope to see more Harmony stories from you in the future! You have excellent writing and had me engrossed from the beginning. Keep it up! :-)
11/4/2018 c1 31CrazyKitCat
I love this! It was really interesting to read this from the mindset that Voldemort was never in their lives. The qay their relationships changed was fascinating. Any chance you might write a sequel?
31CrazyKitCatI love this! It was really interesting to read this from the mindset that Voldemort was never in their lives. The qay their relationships changed was fascinating. Any chance you might write a sequel?
10/31/2018 c1 39StarlingChild4
I love the subtle yet distinct differences between canon and an AU without Voldemort, and how the characters are still (mostly) the same personalities. Great build-up of Hermione's feelings, and both of them dating other people, and how they remain best friends through it all before finally succumbing to their desires. A nice dosage of fluff, angst, feels, and smut. Well done!
39StarlingChild4I love the subtle yet distinct differences between canon and an AU without Voldemort, and how the characters are still (mostly) the same personalities. Great build-up of Hermione's feelings, and both of them dating other people, and how they remain best friends through it all before finally succumbing to their desires. A nice dosage of fluff, angst, feels, and smut. Well done!
10/20/2018 c1 4reeroy
I really enjoyed the messiness of their relationship. It's a bit unequal though, Hermione clearly understanding Harry but he doesn't understand her does he? Broke my heart a bit to see her let him get away with not putting in his share of work while he was dating Ginny. I know for the purpose of this story Hermione doesn't have any friends or a support system but it was still depressing haha.
Oh the smut may have made up for it! I like how Gryffindorish she was, asking him for sex. I love that she finally got to explore it with someone attentive. But! I'm sad that they never talked about what's going on between them. Does Harry like her a little more than a fuck buddy? I get Hermione's insecure and why she offered him to continue their fun after school but I wished she asked him for something meaningful. Maybe she understands him so well that she knows she has to be a bit Slytherin to get him to talk? Like he woukdn't realize until years into the relationship and Hermione would be so smug about it?
haha I'm left loving this story and praying you explore their dynamic after Hogwarts! sorry for the word vomit.
4reeroyI really enjoyed the messiness of their relationship. It's a bit unequal though, Hermione clearly understanding Harry but he doesn't understand her does he? Broke my heart a bit to see her let him get away with not putting in his share of work while he was dating Ginny. I know for the purpose of this story Hermione doesn't have any friends or a support system but it was still depressing haha.
Oh the smut may have made up for it! I like how Gryffindorish she was, asking him for sex. I love that she finally got to explore it with someone attentive. But! I'm sad that they never talked about what's going on between them. Does Harry like her a little more than a fuck buddy? I get Hermione's insecure and why she offered him to continue their fun after school but I wished she asked him for something meaningful. Maybe she understands him so well that she knows she has to be a bit Slytherin to get him to talk? Like he woukdn't realize until years into the relationship and Hermione would be so smug about it?
haha I'm left loving this story and praying you explore their dynamic after Hogwarts! sorry for the word vomit.
10/15/2018 c1 2EraticMind
That last part made me chuckle as my partners favourite tit is the left one
2EraticMindThat last part made me chuckle as my partners favourite tit is the left one
10/11/2018 c1 Ducky23
This was fantastic! I really enjoyed that is was from Hermione's pov. I am a huge Harry and Hermione shipper and it did not bother me at all that she did things with Krum and McLaggen. If anything it kind of builds the story up until she and Harry finally get together.
One thing that I definitely agree with, you have to do a follow up! Maybe have Harry finally use his Gryffindor courage and ask to be more than fwb with Hermoine?
This was fantastic! I really enjoyed that is was from Hermione's pov. I am a huge Harry and Hermione shipper and it did not bother me at all that she did things with Krum and McLaggen. If anything it kind of builds the story up until she and Harry finally get together.
One thing that I definitely agree with, you have to do a follow up! Maybe have Harry finally use his Gryffindor courage and ask to be more than fwb with Hermoine?
9/17/2018 c1 8Pentastic
This was very good. Very sexy. I am more of a relationship person myself, so I personally would like to imagine a sequel where they get together as adults later. The casual thing does make sense for this story though. Good job!
8PentasticThis was very good. Very sexy. I am more of a relationship person myself, so I personally would like to imagine a sequel where they get together as adults later. The casual thing does make sense for this story though. Good job!
9/15/2018 c1 2PursuitOfDreams
It was definitely a bit more realistic than I think most will appreciate and I loved that aspect. I enjoyed what you did with Hermione, although packing it all in a single chapter might have been a bit much considering the explicit material (not that I disliked that). I appreciate the way you approached their relationship, it was a solid slow burn that took me back to my teens. This was well written and you did a good job.
2PursuitOfDreamsIt was definitely a bit more realistic than I think most will appreciate and I loved that aspect. I enjoyed what you did with Hermione, although packing it all in a single chapter might have been a bit much considering the explicit material (not that I disliked that). I appreciate the way you approached their relationship, it was a solid slow burn that took me back to my teens. This was well written and you did a good job.