for A Paper-Tiger8/29/2018 c2 SoulAuron
it seems interesting i guess, even if only because of the way you write it, now is that platinum haired boy the same one referenced in the prologue? it sure doesnt sound like he is angry about his predicament, although that might just be because he is very shy or something, either way i will keep watch of this story, hadnt noticed you had started writing other stories besides professor pirate, i will give the one about rock lee a read as well (hopefully there will be plenty of tenten there, she is my favourite character, and she is rock lees sister, so there is a good excuse to feature her)
it seems interesting i guess, even if only because of the way you write it, now is that platinum haired boy the same one referenced in the prologue? it sure doesnt sound like he is angry about his predicament, although that might just be because he is very shy or something, either way i will keep watch of this story, hadnt noticed you had started writing other stories besides professor pirate, i will give the one about rock lee a read as well (hopefully there will be plenty of tenten there, she is my favourite character, and she is rock lees sister, so there is a good excuse to feature her)
8/26/2018 c2 STANDO POWAH
"...time seemed to stand still in The World."
IS THAT A FUCKING JOJO REFERENCE?!
Okay, all jokes aside, this was a very nice chapter. I must say that I really like your writing style, especially the way you describe things, people, the environment etc.
I'm also very interested in your character's Quirk. I mean, the ability to bring a drawn object to life has an absurd potential.
You could take over [The World] with it...okay I'll stop now.
Either way, I'm really enjoying this so far. I'll be eagerly waiting for chapter 3.
Until then, goodbye.
-Mr. POWAH
"...time seemed to stand still in The World."
IS THAT A FUCKING JOJO REFERENCE?!
Okay, all jokes aside, this was a very nice chapter. I must say that I really like your writing style, especially the way you describe things, people, the environment etc.
I'm also very interested in your character's Quirk. I mean, the ability to bring a drawn object to life has an absurd potential.
You could take over [The World] with it...okay I'll stop now.
Either way, I'm really enjoying this so far. I'll be eagerly waiting for chapter 3.
Until then, goodbye.
-Mr. POWAH