for To All the Boys I've Loved Before11/19/2021 c38 
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But is Tanya really so delusional? Because Edward totally planned on coming right back to her. That’s what he was hoping would happen initially.
1DMBSJB18But is Tanya really so delusional? Because Edward totally planned on coming right back to her. That’s what he was hoping would happen initially.
11/19/2021 c36 DMBSJB18
That was sweet and sexy and fun. But wouldn’t you feel kinda icky doing the exact same thing with Edward that he had done with Tanya the year before? Like, same thing different girl? So, really their first time wasn’t unique or special, at all. Which makes me sad.
Edward is sweet and cute when they’re together. And he says the right things. But, he dated a bully for two years. Fake dated the girl who was bullied by said girlfriend just to be able to get her back. Changed his mind about the fake dating but didn’t tell Bella until she had to ask. He hasn’t had to work for literally anything.
I know you don’t write angst. But I feel everything has been so easy for him. Like, rinse and repeat only with a new girl
That was sweet and sexy and fun. But wouldn’t you feel kinda icky doing the exact same thing with Edward that he had done with Tanya the year before? Like, same thing different girl? So, really their first time wasn’t unique or special, at all. Which makes me sad.
Edward is sweet and cute when they’re together. And he says the right things. But, he dated a bully for two years. Fake dated the girl who was bullied by said girlfriend just to be able to get her back. Changed his mind about the fake dating but didn’t tell Bella until she had to ask. He hasn’t had to work for literally anything.
I know you don’t write angst. But I feel everything has been so easy for him. Like, rinse and repeat only with a new girl
11/19/2021 c18 DMBSJB18
The thing that bugs is that Edward knew how Tanya treated Bella for so long and just stood by and watched. I’ve always told my kids that if they are I’m that situation, even if they aren’t saying the words they are complicit. So even though Edward didn’t necessarily bully Bella, he stood by and watched which is almost as bad
The thing that bugs is that Edward knew how Tanya treated Bella for so long and just stood by and watched. I’ve always told my kids that if they are I’m that situation, even if they aren’t saying the words they are complicit. So even though Edward didn’t necessarily bully Bella, he stood by and watched which is almost as bad
10/23/2021 c40 ToMyMuse
Thoroughly enjoyed this story. Very fun! I have to say my favorite LMAO moment was when Bella was “thinking out loud at Carlisle and Esme’s house. It’s been a while since I’ve read Twi-FF. This was the perfect way to revisit it. Thank you!
Thoroughly enjoyed this story. Very fun! I have to say my favorite LMAO moment was when Bella was “thinking out loud at Carlisle and Esme’s house. It’s been a while since I’ve read Twi-FF. This was the perfect way to revisit it. Thank you!
10/19/2021 c28 ToMyMuse
You’re so good at writing Bella! She and Edward are so young and in love, and you convey all of that so well. Thank you for another great chapter.
You’re so good at writing Bella! She and Edward are so young and in love, and you convey all of that so well. Thank you for another great chapter.
10/19/2021 c22 ToMyMuse
They are so stinkin’ cute!
PS. Ang’s mom’s comment made my eyes rain tears. I miss my mom.
They are so stinkin’ cute!
PS. Ang’s mom’s comment made my eyes rain tears. I miss my mom.
10/19/2021 c20 ToMyMuse
Ohmygod ohmygod ohmygod, amazing way to celebrate her birthday. Could picture it all in my head. And I agree about the movie— Watching it as a grown up is a very different and cringe-inducing experience in certain parts compared to when I first saw it as a fanciful* teenager dreaming about Jake Ryan. *Love your use of the word so had to throw that in there. ;)
Ohmygod ohmygod ohmygod, amazing way to celebrate her birthday. Could picture it all in my head. And I agree about the movie— Watching it as a grown up is a very different and cringe-inducing experience in certain parts compared to when I first saw it as a fanciful* teenager dreaming about Jake Ryan. *Love your use of the word so had to throw that in there. ;)
8/29/2021 c42 6Stazwrites
omg I loved this one so much! so so so much!
I love this Edward. I love this Bella. So perfect. I could just go on reading about them if you could have kept writing about them. It was so romantic, swoony and super cute. Maybe you could give us a future take about them attending their own kids football game or something? lol. But I do love where you ended, I'm just being greedy ;D.
Thank you so much sharing this. It was lovely, I had a great time reading it.
-stz
6Stazwritesomg I loved this one so much! so so so much!
I love this Edward. I love this Bella. So perfect. I could just go on reading about them if you could have kept writing about them. It was so romantic, swoony and super cute. Maybe you could give us a future take about them attending their own kids football game or something? lol. But I do love where you ended, I'm just being greedy ;D.
Thank you so much sharing this. It was lovely, I had a great time reading it.
-stz
8/12/2021 c37 sherryola
It was frustrating to have bella run away. But I have to put myself in the mind and heart and tender self-worth of a girl who is 17. I remember how hard those teenage years were and so many things could be blown into big.
It was frustrating to have bella run away. But I have to put myself in the mind and heart and tender self-worth of a girl who is 17. I remember how hard those teenage years were and so many things could be blown into big.
8/12/2021 c30 sherryola
So funny. I can't stop giggling! I love her getting Edward to hold his brother. It would be nice to have him bond more with his dad and that part of his family.
So funny. I can't stop giggling! I love her getting Edward to hold his brother. It would be nice to have him bond more with his dad and that part of his family.