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3Cyan Sung-Sun
That's actually pretty ingenious. I never considered performing a social experiment on the Grimm. I do think the "Sacred Sword release" bit was goofy and shouldn't be there but it's a great chapter otherwise.
3Cyan Sung-SunThat's actually pretty ingenious. I never considered performing a social experiment on the Grimm. I do think the "Sacred Sword release" bit was goofy and shouldn't be there but it's a great chapter otherwise.
3/11/2019 c7 Guest
Shirou not asking and Summer not telling about Sword of Remnant legend is edging quite a bit on suspension of disbelief for me.
Shirou not asking and Summer not telling about Sword of Remnant legend is edging quite a bit on suspension of disbelief for me.
3/11/2019 c7 READER1O1O
Ok this will definitely be my favorite chapter for the story. Also just love how you play out Shirou and summer interacting with each other. With summer giving the note and the scroll capturing Shirou actions like that it would defenitly capture everybody's attention.
Ok this will definitely be my favorite chapter for the story. Also just love how you play out Shirou and summer interacting with each other. With summer giving the note and the scroll capturing Shirou actions like that it would defenitly capture everybody's attention.
3/11/2019 c7 12Vahn C. Wyrd
HEEEEYYYY ITS THE ORIGIN STORY. I'm glad you decided to keep the town of Vermillion. That certain part of your story (from the previous and this one.) has a very rich area to write on. I hope you find some kind of way to write how it slowly flourishes.
12Vahn C. WyrdHEEEEYYYY ITS THE ORIGIN STORY. I'm glad you decided to keep the town of Vermillion. That certain part of your story (from the previous and this one.) has a very rich area to write on. I hope you find some kind of way to write how it slowly flourishes.
3/11/2019 c7 pltrgst
awesome! next please~
also, command seals should be explained to ruby right?
will she want a scythe that shoot beams now tho..?
awesome! next please~
also, command seals should be explained to ruby right?
will she want a scythe that shoot beams now tho..?
3/11/2019 c1 Guest
Not boring dude, it was amazing keep up the good work ;)
Not boring dude, it was amazing keep up the good work ;)
3/11/2019 c7 Guest
Epic~~~!
Epic~~~!