1/12/2019 c6 dragonngo
This is my review this latest update of Huntsman of Red V2:

In my honest of opinions, I like the fight scene that was left of from the previous chapter. Summer's monologue and the incredible feat that Shirou as the Nameless Hero has left a newfound impact that will be the staging ground of Vermillion. However, I must add my criticisms as well because the scene in which Shirou helping the Faunus villagers were quite underwhelming and doesn't cover my hopes of Shirou's impact towards them. Where are the worship, the admiration, and gratitude of Shirou's act of saving the village from certain doom that everyone thought would be the end of them? Top of that, what about the Faunus kids? You barely touch upon their existence as characters who I have no doubt will be integral to anything related to Vermillion later down the road. Like I said about making OC characters if you want to create a long lasting impression, you must invest on them to make it worthwhile. Top of that, and this have nothing to do with the current chapter but you GOT to change the NAME of those children's names. While Raymond Hail is a name I can go along with, I can really say the same of the OC children. The names have to be colour or folklore based because it a big part of RWBY lore to have people with such names. Top of that you need to consider the possibility that they may be going to be a future huntsman team, you need to be very careful in changing them.

Moving on, I like how you handle the drama between Summer and Shirou in which Summer's constant complaints are obviously like Ruby's tantrums but unfortunately, Shirou is the only one who can hear her. However, what really got me hooked was the ending scene in which Shirou somehow managed to allow Summer to preoccupy his servant body if not for a small amount of time. That reunion between daughter and mother was a touching and even hopeful thing that can in future chapters impact to the rest of the world. I can only hope that the "taint" drama and the "Elder Grimm" problem doesn't ruin that the very least.

All in all, I enjoyed the chapter. I know you have school once again and therefore was unable to work on this chapter without rushing it at the end part of the chapter which I kinda assume. There are a few problems but most of the chapter delivered what was promised toward your audience. Best of luck with your stories and the semester.

1/12/2019 c6 7ThatIdioticMelody
Thank you for your hard work!

The story is amazing so far, I look forward to what you write next!

Hopefully shirou can grow another body... maybe? Well magic, who knows!

1/12/2019 c6 8Jebest4781
this was rather nice

1/12/2019 c6 12Vahn C. Wyrd
As it stands things can go in different ways. One possibility is summer being a demi-servant in the case of Mashu. Shirou had a material body, Summer is a spirit. With that one can guess that Shirou likely stored his own soul inside his reality marble and made Summer's soul be the vessel. Therefore giving her the physical body of a servant but not really.

Also, I know you are busy with school and all so I hope you pace yourself. Nevertheless, great chapter as always Parcy!

PS: unexpected plot I always wanted to see where summer is alive and was found and got reunited with ruby was just HHHNNNGGGGG~

1/12/2019 c6 2DannyPhantom619
Did Summer just become a Demi-Servant like how Mashu Kyrielight did in FGO.

1/12/2019 c6 38kyugan
So did Summer Eat Shirou or what?

1/12/2019 c6 Guest
You really do make the best stories

1/12/2019 c6 Critique
Oh God I love this