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9/14/2018 c2 2Nihatclodra
"No matter what, he would have to thank the Huntsman that had saved his nephews," I do believe you mean "nieces".
9/14/2018 c2 5Spartastic 4
If shiro has his tanned skin, then he should also have white hair and steel eyes since his appearance is from overusing his magecraft and not from natural occurrence. Other than that, this was a great chapter
9/14/2018 c2 Shadowdragis
Are you referring to two boys at the end or two girls? Nephews are two or more boys and Nieces are two or more girls.
9/14/2018 c2 dan
i enjoyed the chapter. thank you.

in your second to last sentence you used nephews(male) instead of nieces(female),
i can't remember if you care about grammar being pointed out or if that was a different author.

9/14/2018 c2 MiniTeddyBear
Love the crossover! Can't wait to read more of this story! Looking forward to the next chapter.
9/14/2018 c2 TheTrueSonGoku
Keep the updates coming
9/14/2018 c2 1alexkellar
That was a good chapter, I liked the fact that Archer, Shirou hid in his spiritual form, it was not the time or place to talk to Qrow. It will also be a good weapon if nobody but rwby can actually see it hahaha. Keep up the great work!
9/14/2018 c2 Guest
9/14/2018 c2 HachiBee888
I thought Lancers title was the hound of Ulster, not the shield of Ulster. also great chapter, it was cool seeing Shirou's Reaction to Ruby.
9/14/2018 c2 1PanickingNoob
Hah well never jinx yourself u should know better than everyone Qrow lol. Though wonder how long can Archer hid himself lol
9/14/2018 c2 Stratos263
Good luck shirou and ruby
9/14/2018 c2 Guest
You do this a lot for crossovers, but to much basic info. This is fanfiction you got to assume the people checking and reading your stories know what they're getting into considering the tags and crossover. You'll just fill up word space with stuff that you literally know just from reading the synopsis of the visual novel or anime.
9/14/2018 c2 The Rupture
The old one is better.
9/14/2018 c2 1Drcaus
update Fate Kill next chapter fanfic
9/14/2018 c2 Guest
Not sure why you gave Archer an introduction at the start, but great chapter.
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