
5/24 c24 lilacwavee
I don't think I've ever been as mad as I was during my first read of this story and found out you didn't finish it. Heartbroken couldn't even begin to explain my state of mind.
I don't think I've ever been as mad as I was during my first read of this story and found out you didn't finish it. Heartbroken couldn't even begin to explain my state of mind.
5/13 c25 Guest
I remember reading this story ages ago when someone reposted it and I looked for the rest of the series for a couple weeks before a gave. Even if I don't get an ending I'm glad I atleast got to confirm that the story is over l.
I remember reading this story ages ago when someone reposted it and I looked for the rest of the series for a couple weeks before a gave. Even if I don't get an ending I'm glad I atleast got to confirm that the story is over l.
5/9 c25 thegrison
It is good you stopped and not force the rest. However if you went that route in the story i think a lot of people would dislike the ending.
It is good you stopped and not force the rest. However if you went that route in the story i think a lot of people would dislike the ending.
4/18 c11 BlazeStryker
Sai was right. Gai may have a youthfulness complex but Jiraiya needs to grow the Hell up.
Sai was right. Gai may have a youthfulness complex but Jiraiya needs to grow the Hell up.
3/25 c25 Rubberization
Coming from A Snake's Obsession to this was a major letdown. I didn't even read this because of it's high favorite count, I just wanted more storytelling with good romance. Unfortunately, I had to force myself to finish this. It's a cool storyline for the most part if you can get past the degenerate harem shit, and then it just cancels. Hilarious at it's best, with a good plot to give us an OP Naruto but I couldn't suspend my disbelief that an autistic Naruto would be pulling bitches left and right. The most interesting part of this story was the in depth writing you did on sealing. It made for unique fights as well, especially when battles involving seals are rare. But then it goes right back into building a harem for Naruto and the stupid "Chosen One" plot device that I'm grateful it ended where it did. Most of this is personal bias though, so objectively, what's here is phenomenal. If you like harem shit, 10/10.
Coming from A Snake's Obsession to this was a major letdown. I didn't even read this because of it's high favorite count, I just wanted more storytelling with good romance. Unfortunately, I had to force myself to finish this. It's a cool storyline for the most part if you can get past the degenerate harem shit, and then it just cancels. Hilarious at it's best, with a good plot to give us an OP Naruto but I couldn't suspend my disbelief that an autistic Naruto would be pulling bitches left and right. The most interesting part of this story was the in depth writing you did on sealing. It made for unique fights as well, especially when battles involving seals are rare. But then it goes right back into building a harem for Naruto and the stupid "Chosen One" plot device that I'm grateful it ended where it did. Most of this is personal bias though, so objectively, what's here is phenomenal. If you like harem shit, 10/10.
3/25 c25 BKTHEASSASIN
Reread everything, your ending you had planned seem kind of meh but the story itself was good so maybe i would have to see the finished product to see if i still think it is meh. It be cool of you ever came back to finish it but i get it when you gotta force yourself to do something its now a chore. Good luck with whatever you do next.
Reread everything, your ending you had planned seem kind of meh but the story itself was good so maybe i would have to see the finished product to see if i still think it is meh. It be cool of you ever came back to finish it but i get it when you gotta force yourself to do something its now a chore. Good luck with whatever you do next.
3/4 c25 Guest
that's a sad ending, never be hokage
that's a sad ending, never be hokage
3/1 c1 Guest
I’m only just starting but autistic naruto is already growing on me.
Also Hiruzen supporting my boys special interest is just peak as fuck.
Pure cinema
I’m only just starting but autistic naruto is already growing on me.
Also Hiruzen supporting my boys special interest is just peak as fuck.
Pure cinema