for Seals are Easy, People are Hard5/10 c9 TheLightYagami
Muahahahaha I love this part. So technically naruto don't nothing wrong since inoichi "request" naruto to help his wife right? Hahaha suck to be inoichi right now.
Muahahahaha I love this part. So technically naruto don't nothing wrong since inoichi "request" naruto to help his wife right? Hahaha suck to be inoichi right now.
5/8 c20 TheNightShinobi
This is super good. Well above standard fare. Congratulations on your achievement and many thanks for sharing.
This is super good. Well above standard fare. Congratulations on your achievement and many thanks for sharing.
5/8 c16 TheLightYagami
I can see potential harem like Haku, Hinata, Ino, Tenten, Temari. Hope you can add someone like yugito and samui
I can see potential harem like Haku, Hinata, Ino, Tenten, Temari. Hope you can add someone like yugito and samui
5/7 c23 Festus Krex
I like most of the chapter but the ANBU portions are kinda...meh. I dunno if it is intentional or not but Dragon is coming off as more and more of a douche and less like a proper ANBU Commander.
I like most of the chapter but the ANBU portions are kinda...meh. I dunno if it is intentional or not but Dragon is coming off as more and more of a douche and less like a proper ANBU Commander.
5/5 c1 Tyrese
Yoooooo hold on. this entire story. the very concept of its creation started from the idea of a shinobi fitbit?! Lmao
Yoooooo hold on. this entire story. the very concept of its creation started from the idea of a shinobi fitbit?! Lmao
5/4 c20 
5Planar-Walking-Entertainment
Daaaw. Yami, instead of being all of his negative emotions, is basically his childhood innocence that was in essence, repressed by what the village had done.
5Planar-Walking-EntertainmentDaaaw. Yami, instead of being all of his negative emotions, is basically his childhood innocence that was in essence, repressed by what the village had done.
5/2 c23 Jaacra
Not sure if 4 girls is still the max for your Harem, I do believe it was stated in chapter 1? Not sure.
But gentleman pervert Naruto is simply just... too good? Kinda hard to not see him with several girls, since I think he would be confused as to why he can't try and make several girls happy.
But that ain't gonna stop me from reading the rest, 4 girl harem or more!
And I actually like this Naruto more than Canon Naruto, still got that I will do anything for my precious people vibe and all that.
Simply amazing, one of the best FanFictions for me~
Not sure if 4 girls is still the max for your Harem, I do believe it was stated in chapter 1? Not sure.
But gentleman pervert Naruto is simply just... too good? Kinda hard to not see him with several girls, since I think he would be confused as to why he can't try and make several girls happy.
But that ain't gonna stop me from reading the rest, 4 girl harem or more!
And I actually like this Naruto more than Canon Naruto, still got that I will do anything for my precious people vibe and all that.
Simply amazing, one of the best FanFictions for me~
4/30 c23 FedeHarry97
okay this may be unnecessary but, i haven't had a new fic to read for the better part of the year, maybe is a diminishing quantity of quality fics with the end of the series, i almost uninstalled the app. and yet on a whim i choose to give a shoot to a short and unassuming fic, and found a some amazing unfinished work. you have an impressive talent, and i really hope you get to finish your fics, it really would be a shame to see them fade into nothingness.
okay this may be unnecessary but, i haven't had a new fic to read for the better part of the year, maybe is a diminishing quantity of quality fics with the end of the series, i almost uninstalled the app. and yet on a whim i choose to give a shoot to a short and unassuming fic, and found a some amazing unfinished work. you have an impressive talent, and i really hope you get to finish your fics, it really would be a shame to see them fade into nothingness.
4/24 c1 anom
this story is awesome. those peeps at reddit are fucking hypocritical reek elitists.
this story is awesome. those peeps at reddit are fucking hypocritical reek elitists.