for Naruto: The Vessel Of Darth Vader9/26 c4 Antianti12
I think your underestimating shinobi when it comes to force user's, plus why would Orichimaru care about helping the Akasuki with naruto? He hated them and left team 7 alive in shippuden so they could take out more of them.
I think your underestimating shinobi when it comes to force user's, plus why would Orichimaru care about helping the Akasuki with naruto? He hated them and left team 7 alive in shippuden so they could take out more of them.
9/7 c13 Animeworld2.0
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8/28 c14 Kitsune124
Man alive I’m just wow I feel like it was a long road and I still don’t blame him if he becomes evil it’s those villagers fault. They actually see a child instead of a so-called demon they could at least realize what they’re doing is wrong..
But it’s always too late. They should’ve started in the beginning and kept him away from that monster Palpatine.
Man alive I’m just wow I feel like it was a long road and I still don’t blame him if he becomes evil it’s those villagers fault. They actually see a child instead of a so-called demon they could at least realize what they’re doing is wrong..
But it’s always too late. They should’ve started in the beginning and kept him away from that monster Palpatine.
8/27 c7 Kitsune124
Bad man this is a twist most stories just have him with a bunch of women or make him into like a great Jedi. He doesn’t practice the dark or the light. He’s somewhere in the middle.
He’s like an ice cream cake, sweet on the outside cold on the inside and give you a brain freeze if you eat too much
Bad man this is a twist most stories just have him with a bunch of women or make him into like a great Jedi. He doesn’t practice the dark or the light. He’s somewhere in the middle.
He’s like an ice cream cake, sweet on the outside cold on the inside and give you a brain freeze if you eat too much
8/27 c7 Kitsune124
Whoa whoa they’re going to a huge pat on the back for you my friend now that’s a twist of the ages so he was looking for a new apprentice and just like the dark side we older he is he man you’re genius frankly I would just say that his rule is in the Star Wars world, but his planet is so far beyond the outer rim that you have to travel for a whole year just to get there even do three light speed jumps
Whoa whoa they’re going to a huge pat on the back for you my friend now that’s a twist of the ages so he was looking for a new apprentice and just like the dark side we older he is he man you’re genius frankly I would just say that his rule is in the Star Wars world, but his planet is so far beyond the outer rim that you have to travel for a whole year just to get there even do three light speed jumps
8/27 c4 Kitsune124
In this chapter, I’m just thinking he’s really don’t get it. Does she? You hurt him in the worst possible way and he could feel your emotions imagine how he feels and isn’t the nine tail festival is on the 10th. It’s his birthday and she doesn’t even know no cake no present even happy birthday. I’m sorry I treat you like garbage. It’s almost funny..
Frankly, if he becomes a monster or a sith Lord, I don’t even blame him out of everyone who been hurt who been ridiculed without a thank you or apologies. He deserve.
In this chapter, I’m just thinking he’s really don’t get it. Does she? You hurt him in the worst possible way and he could feel your emotions imagine how he feels and isn’t the nine tail festival is on the 10th. It’s his birthday and she doesn’t even know no cake no present even happy birthday. I’m sorry I treat you like garbage. It’s almost funny..
Frankly, if he becomes a monster or a sith Lord, I don’t even blame him out of everyone who been hurt who been ridiculed without a thank you or apologies. He deserve.
8/27 c1 Kitsune124
Haven’t read the story yet or listen to it, but still it’s fair killed by the man that was his brother left for dead now good job you power-hungry emo you released the biggest monster to this world. I hope you’re happy now he’s gonna slaughter everything.
But still, there is a very very 2% chance that his friends could save him and that’s only a very slim but still it’s disappointing.
Hope his little revenge was worth it. The world would be a lot better without.
Uchiha I wish tje uzmaki couldn’t awaken their eyes instead of them, but only to awaken the full power. They have to save someone or loves someone deeply.
Haven’t read the story yet or listen to it, but still it’s fair killed by the man that was his brother left for dead now good job you power-hungry emo you released the biggest monster to this world. I hope you’re happy now he’s gonna slaughter everything.
But still, there is a very very 2% chance that his friends could save him and that’s only a very slim but still it’s disappointing.
Hope his little revenge was worth it. The world would be a lot better without.
Uchiha I wish tje uzmaki couldn’t awaken their eyes instead of them, but only to awaken the full power. They have to save someone or loves someone deeply.
8/25 c14 Guest
The current situation of Chouji and Ino, reminds me to the consequences that suffered two friends and former companions Jin Sung in the beginning of Solo Leveling.
I mean, the guy, just like Chouji, ended losing one arm. While the gal, just like Ino, ended suffering a serious psychological trauma.
The current situation of Chouji and Ino, reminds me to the consequences that suffered two friends and former companions Jin Sung in the beginning of Solo Leveling.
I mean, the guy, just like Chouji, ended losing one arm. While the gal, just like Ino, ended suffering a serious psychological trauma.
8/19 c14 Guest
I wonder if Hinata will suffers the same fate like Padme; dies by heartbroken, as perhaps the fact of discover that her beloved Naruto, become a monster like Darth Vader, could certainly breaks her heart, that coupled with her past battle against Neji, it could means some great stress to her heart, making me wonder if Hinata could ends like Padme.
I wonder if Hinata will suffers the same fate like Padme; dies by heartbroken, as perhaps the fact of discover that her beloved Naruto, become a monster like Darth Vader, could certainly breaks her heart, that coupled with her past battle against Neji, it could means some great stress to her heart, making me wonder if Hinata could ends like Padme.
7/29 c9 Shadow
If Naruto now has the power like Darth Plagueis did to bring people back to life like he did with Gaara, then restoring his limbs and healing his damaged body should be an easy matter.
If Naruto now has the power like Darth Plagueis did to bring people back to life like he did with Gaara, then restoring his limbs and healing his damaged body should be an easy matter.
7/23 c14 Guest
Nice story so far, looking forward to the next chapter
Nice story so far, looking forward to the next chapter
7/6 c1 
1L0ot 09
Cool story. Naruto's fall to the dark side was done flawlessly and I can't really criticize anything there. I like how you skip unimportant events in order to get to the damn point and how you don't shorten your chapters allowing the story to flow. This story is a gem and honestly, it's better than 99.9% of fics in the site. Unlike other fics that don't want to go through something called character development simply bash konoha and make Naruto an edgelord for no reason you playing the characters flaws against them Hiruzen's inactivity, Kakashi's indifference, Jiraya's abandonment and Sakura's manipulation and abuse to turn Naruto from a sweet naive fool into a cold calculating and ruthless person more machine than man. And I appreciate keeping Naruto in character tiil his turn to Darth Vader. But the slight plot armor in latest chapters is becoming troubling. Yamato should be dead. See no use in keeping him, Sakura should have lost an arm challenging Darth Vader. Even if she heals it later she should have lost an arm or a leg or something important and I think that Kushina rather than Minato should have been the force sensitive one. Would give her character more relevance due to the lack of well written women n the series as well as being able to relate to Sakura's desire to save Naruto as his mother (since mother's in general are more emphatetic) and provide an explanation on why she allowed the sealing to take place.
1L0ot 09Cool story. Naruto's fall to the dark side was done flawlessly and I can't really criticize anything there. I like how you skip unimportant events in order to get to the damn point and how you don't shorten your chapters allowing the story to flow. This story is a gem and honestly, it's better than 99.9% of fics in the site. Unlike other fics that don't want to go through something called character development simply bash konoha and make Naruto an edgelord for no reason you playing the characters flaws against them Hiruzen's inactivity, Kakashi's indifference, Jiraya's abandonment and Sakura's manipulation and abuse to turn Naruto from a sweet naive fool into a cold calculating and ruthless person more machine than man. And I appreciate keeping Naruto in character tiil his turn to Darth Vader. But the slight plot armor in latest chapters is becoming troubling. Yamato should be dead. See no use in keeping him, Sakura should have lost an arm challenging Darth Vader. Even if she heals it later she should have lost an arm or a leg or something important and I think that Kushina rather than Minato should have been the force sensitive one. Would give her character more relevance due to the lack of well written women n the series as well as being able to relate to Sakura's desire to save Naruto as his mother (since mother's in general are more emphatetic) and provide an explanation on why she allowed the sealing to take place.
5/13 c14 Guest
Great chapter, looking forward to the next update!
Great chapter, looking forward to the next update!
4/27 c4 samurai seven
Doesn't the leaf have an Akatsuki double agent in the form of Itachi why don't they ask him on information concerning the Akatsuki?
Doesn't the leaf have an Akatsuki double agent in the form of Itachi why don't they ask him on information concerning the Akatsuki?