for New Blood
16/18 c575 JanuaryLestrange
Oooh…are we finally meeting Bellatrix Black? And will Sylvia turn out to be the mentally unstable daughter of Bella and Voldemort? Then she would be eligible for the Gaunt seat.
Oooh…are we finally meeting Bellatrix Black? And will Sylvia turn out to be the mentally unstable daughter of Bella and Voldemort? Then she would be eligible for the Gaunt seat.
6/16 c577 miriel.denedham
I hope your life issues sort out before much longer. This is probably my favorite piece of fanfiction and I want to find out what happens next! Well, okay, maybe in the top 5, since I also love Robb Returns... but that's a different fandom. I hope you and your family are well. I worry for you sometimes since you've gone quiet.
I hope your life issues sort out before much longer. This is probably my favorite piece of fanfiction and I want to find out what happens next! Well, okay, maybe in the top 5, since I also love Robb Returns... but that's a different fandom. I hope you and your family are well. I worry for you sometimes since you've gone quiet.
6/12 c574 Fast Frank
Very insightful chapter, except for the anachronism: PTSD is too modern a term for 'Voldemort' to know. Combat Stress Reaction (CSR) was the most 'scientific' term in use post WWII.
Very insightful chapter, except for the anachronism: PTSD is too modern a term for 'Voldemort' to know. Combat Stress Reaction (CSR) was the most 'scientific' term in use post WWII.
6/11 c551 Fast Frank
Darth Hermione vs Darth Willow (BtVS), who would win? :)
Darth Hermione vs Darth Willow (BtVS), who would win? :)
6/11 c535 Fast Frank
I was surprised by the 'freebie', but then I remembered Hermione did help them set up their makeup business.
I was surprised by the 'freebie', but then I remembered Hermione did help them set up their makeup business.
6/10 c577 Shipper Lover
Good day to you! I have thought about some more suggestions I could give from the ones I made several months ago to help keep the plot fresh and interesting in your story.
Hermione could set up a system where all Shadow members receive an equal amount of funds of gold from her vault at a certain pay time. The higher the rank in the organization the more they can receive, while the lower rank gets the least. This is to be used responsible for any missions given or for personal wellbeing. She also gives a massive amount of gold to each of her Umbra and some Penumbra to amass their fortune's to not rely on their families. Each vault made for a new Shadow member is tailored in a unique fashion befitting the organization.
I believe it would be cool if more Norse mythology could be used in The Shadows, since their leader is a Valkyrie. One such example could be Hermione's special imperial guard unit is called the Valgrind, after the ones who are maybe at the locked gates that only let in and provide judgement for those to Valhalla. They are chosen from the elite in The Shadows for their experience, rare wand type, innate magical talent, extensive knowledge, strong mental state, and unwavering devotion and undying loyalty to Hermione. Tom would think this is a great idea as set up to be a goal in The Shadows where they can work to become part of and protect Hermione when she gets in over head, as she's prone to do. But, it is not a way to have certain Shadow members over one another, just a different selected honor in the organization. The Umbra is the Government or right hand, while this part the Umbrakinesis is the strength or left hand.
There could be named multicolored divisions for the organization based off shadows from paintings or art types like Chiaroscuro, Sfumato, and a Sihouette. Or Ombromanie is the practice of hand shadows and could be for those who are spies like they are manipulating positions or movements of others. Maybe even Tenebrosity could be a division of The Shadows that focuses on people specialized in dark magic of certain spells, kind of like the Obliviators.
A scene where Hermione gives a class lecture to her Shadows about the nature and form of dark magic. How some use it in everyday life, in the for of hex and jinx's. She says it's all about intent and will of both the caster and the recipient. This would be interesting because it would challenge other's view on how dark magic is always there and you can't simple not use it despite what the Ministry and Hogwarts leads you to believe.
I know Hermione has her own tree house for use with her coven, but as more members start to join I would think she would look towards the future and think she needs to be prepared for the expansion to come. That starts her to set up desirable locations, sanctuaries, and buildings of power for The Shadows branches to use all across Europe.
What I would like to read about:
When they went to go get the Horcrux ring Tom was so distant when looking at both of his family houses. I wish to know what he was thinking and felt in your interpretation. Hermione could ask Tom, trying to better understand him and his deep past, what his emotional state was when he confronted and killed those on his father's side.
I kept thinking in Hogwarts Legacy how there seem to be a lot of ruins around and how fun it would be if Hermione and The Shadows investigate these ancient ruins where active magical rituals where done. Going off in the middle of the night to face the unknown brings a feeling of adventure and excitement to what they might find.
I think at the beginning of this new upcoming war, the lords and aristocrats could start to give Hermione (The Valkyrie) gifts of land, money, military, and supplies to be possibly deemed worthy to be brought under her protection and authority. This is when many notably show how they wish to be swearing Oaths of Fealty. A funny example could be Lucius Malfoy gives Hermione a 4 million dollar Minton Majolica Porcelain Peacock, the most expensive one ever found. Hermione ponders whats his final game plan.
Hermione and her fellows start to win awards and accolades to further their reputation. One of which, for Hermione, is the Barnabus Finkley Prize for Exceptional spell casting that she gains for her newly made spells and creating the idea of wand spell combination between two people. Previously, only ever won by Dumbledore.
Luna wins the Ravenclaw Medal of Excellence for her figuring out an answer to a problem that no one has ever found.
Neville wins the Hogwarts Herbology Award for inventing a new strain of some kind of plant with certain magical properties.
Hermione and Theo enter the Wizarding school's potion championship together by Snap's insistence endorsement to show off new never before seen potion creations they have made together.
Neville and Hermione find the spore scrolls and give the magical enhancer to the most loyal members of The Shadows after Neville cultivated them. Their idea is to make each high member as exceptional as possible to make it easier to further their plans to appear as a group with legendary power and used that power to insure safety against evil forces threatening to destroy them. Afterwards, to make sure the plant isn't used against them it's placed in Hermione's vault.
Neville gets the largest, brightest, and most powerful corporeal Patronus ever seen in the form of a blue whale. It's size and power make it similar to the legends of Andros the Invincible. Hermione thinks that this is because his happy memories with The Shadows are so strong and prevalent because of all the stress and ridicule he has had to experience in his life up till this point. He instead now feels worthy and ready to unleashed his innate talent.
Hermione brings back Regulus soul using the resurrection stone for a short time to give Sirius some closure. On finding out the truth of what happened he begs both Hermione and Kreacher to help him find his brother's body to give him a proper and heroic burial.
Hermione encourages Harry to take the Black family seat, to make sure the true magical power of the house isn't forgotten or misunderstood. Harry does this out of loyalty and a desire to help Hermione's goals in the future and a way to be close to the family he has never known. To start he reads all the books they stole from the Black's library.
Funny scenes that can be incorporated in the story:
1) A scene where the Valkyrie's followers put on a massive display for the anniversary of when she first debuted to the world. Kind of their version of a national holiday and Hermione is so embarrassed.
2) Gindelwald, unlike Tom and Voldemort, believes Hermione should learn verbalize skills. This leads to a funny scene with all three having a jealous argument between them about who can teach her better. Hermione finds it funny she was technically taught in school and out, by the four greatest wizards in the modern age, all with different values and beliefs.
Hermione hears about Obscurials from Gindlewald when he talks about how he tried to indirectly kill Dumbledore one time. She and Milan take it upon their hands to find a better way to manage if not cure this affliction.
Hermione takes the values and characteristics from enchanted portraits of certain powerful individuals who are already gone and gives them new bodies, lives, knowledge, and names to have strong magical members to serve and follow her in The Shadows.
Hermione starts a rumor that The Valkyrie is a descendant of Morgan La Fay as a way to further increase her reputation and the idea of a secret society on Avalon.
Hermione finds out from The Grey Lady that Rowan Ravenclaw made a prophecy about her a thousand years ago. This prophecy could be about how in the Wizarding World's most ignorant time and shinning fire is set ablaze and magic is spread throughout the land.
I thought it would be awesome if one of the beings that Hermione could encounter would be a Dullahan Knight. It's my favorite creature from Irish mythology.
Good day to you! I have thought about some more suggestions I could give from the ones I made several months ago to help keep the plot fresh and interesting in your story.
Hermione could set up a system where all Shadow members receive an equal amount of funds of gold from her vault at a certain pay time. The higher the rank in the organization the more they can receive, while the lower rank gets the least. This is to be used responsible for any missions given or for personal wellbeing. She also gives a massive amount of gold to each of her Umbra and some Penumbra to amass their fortune's to not rely on their families. Each vault made for a new Shadow member is tailored in a unique fashion befitting the organization.
I believe it would be cool if more Norse mythology could be used in The Shadows, since their leader is a Valkyrie. One such example could be Hermione's special imperial guard unit is called the Valgrind, after the ones who are maybe at the locked gates that only let in and provide judgement for those to Valhalla. They are chosen from the elite in The Shadows for their experience, rare wand type, innate magical talent, extensive knowledge, strong mental state, and unwavering devotion and undying loyalty to Hermione. Tom would think this is a great idea as set up to be a goal in The Shadows where they can work to become part of and protect Hermione when she gets in over head, as she's prone to do. But, it is not a way to have certain Shadow members over one another, just a different selected honor in the organization. The Umbra is the Government or right hand, while this part the Umbrakinesis is the strength or left hand.
There could be named multicolored divisions for the organization based off shadows from paintings or art types like Chiaroscuro, Sfumato, and a Sihouette. Or Ombromanie is the practice of hand shadows and could be for those who are spies like they are manipulating positions or movements of others. Maybe even Tenebrosity could be a division of The Shadows that focuses on people specialized in dark magic of certain spells, kind of like the Obliviators.
A scene where Hermione gives a class lecture to her Shadows about the nature and form of dark magic. How some use it in everyday life, in the for of hex and jinx's. She says it's all about intent and will of both the caster and the recipient. This would be interesting because it would challenge other's view on how dark magic is always there and you can't simple not use it despite what the Ministry and Hogwarts leads you to believe.
I know Hermione has her own tree house for use with her coven, but as more members start to join I would think she would look towards the future and think she needs to be prepared for the expansion to come. That starts her to set up desirable locations, sanctuaries, and buildings of power for The Shadows branches to use all across Europe.
What I would like to read about:
When they went to go get the Horcrux ring Tom was so distant when looking at both of his family houses. I wish to know what he was thinking and felt in your interpretation. Hermione could ask Tom, trying to better understand him and his deep past, what his emotional state was when he confronted and killed those on his father's side.
I kept thinking in Hogwarts Legacy how there seem to be a lot of ruins around and how fun it would be if Hermione and The Shadows investigate these ancient ruins where active magical rituals where done. Going off in the middle of the night to face the unknown brings a feeling of adventure and excitement to what they might find.
I think at the beginning of this new upcoming war, the lords and aristocrats could start to give Hermione (The Valkyrie) gifts of land, money, military, and supplies to be possibly deemed worthy to be brought under her protection and authority. This is when many notably show how they wish to be swearing Oaths of Fealty. A funny example could be Lucius Malfoy gives Hermione a 4 million dollar Minton Majolica Porcelain Peacock, the most expensive one ever found. Hermione ponders whats his final game plan.
Hermione and her fellows start to win awards and accolades to further their reputation. One of which, for Hermione, is the Barnabus Finkley Prize for Exceptional spell casting that she gains for her newly made spells and creating the idea of wand spell combination between two people. Previously, only ever won by Dumbledore.
Luna wins the Ravenclaw Medal of Excellence for her figuring out an answer to a problem that no one has ever found.
Neville wins the Hogwarts Herbology Award for inventing a new strain of some kind of plant with certain magical properties.
Hermione and Theo enter the Wizarding school's potion championship together by Snap's insistence endorsement to show off new never before seen potion creations they have made together.
Neville and Hermione find the spore scrolls and give the magical enhancer to the most loyal members of The Shadows after Neville cultivated them. Their idea is to make each high member as exceptional as possible to make it easier to further their plans to appear as a group with legendary power and used that power to insure safety against evil forces threatening to destroy them. Afterwards, to make sure the plant isn't used against them it's placed in Hermione's vault.
Neville gets the largest, brightest, and most powerful corporeal Patronus ever seen in the form of a blue whale. It's size and power make it similar to the legends of Andros the Invincible. Hermione thinks that this is because his happy memories with The Shadows are so strong and prevalent because of all the stress and ridicule he has had to experience in his life up till this point. He instead now feels worthy and ready to unleashed his innate talent.
Hermione brings back Regulus soul using the resurrection stone for a short time to give Sirius some closure. On finding out the truth of what happened he begs both Hermione and Kreacher to help him find his brother's body to give him a proper and heroic burial.
Hermione encourages Harry to take the Black family seat, to make sure the true magical power of the house isn't forgotten or misunderstood. Harry does this out of loyalty and a desire to help Hermione's goals in the future and a way to be close to the family he has never known. To start he reads all the books they stole from the Black's library.
Funny scenes that can be incorporated in the story:
1) A scene where the Valkyrie's followers put on a massive display for the anniversary of when she first debuted to the world. Kind of their version of a national holiday and Hermione is so embarrassed.
2) Gindelwald, unlike Tom and Voldemort, believes Hermione should learn verbalize skills. This leads to a funny scene with all three having a jealous argument between them about who can teach her better. Hermione finds it funny she was technically taught in school and out, by the four greatest wizards in the modern age, all with different values and beliefs.
Hermione hears about Obscurials from Gindlewald when he talks about how he tried to indirectly kill Dumbledore one time. She and Milan take it upon their hands to find a better way to manage if not cure this affliction.
Hermione takes the values and characteristics from enchanted portraits of certain powerful individuals who are already gone and gives them new bodies, lives, knowledge, and names to have strong magical members to serve and follow her in The Shadows.
Hermione starts a rumor that The Valkyrie is a descendant of Morgan La Fay as a way to further increase her reputation and the idea of a secret society on Avalon.
Hermione finds out from The Grey Lady that Rowan Ravenclaw made a prophecy about her a thousand years ago. This prophecy could be about how in the Wizarding World's most ignorant time and shinning fire is set ablaze and magic is spread throughout the land.
I thought it would be awesome if one of the beings that Hermione could encounter would be a Dullahan Knight. It's my favorite creature from Irish mythology.
6/9 c1 Juliasimon77
A quietly powerful work that unfolds with emotional resonance and narrative confidence, this story draws the reader into a world both fantastical and deeply personal. Its strength lies not only in the compelling plot but in its unflinching exploration of trauma, connection, and identity. The writing moves with the rhythm of memory and revelation , balancing lyrical introspection with moments of raw, visceral tension. Scenes shift seamlessly between tenderness and unease, capturing the delicate balance between light and darkness that defines so much of the human experience. It lingers not just as a narrative, but as an echo of something truer beneath the surface.
A quietly powerful work that unfolds with emotional resonance and narrative confidence, this story draws the reader into a world both fantastical and deeply personal. Its strength lies not only in the compelling plot but in its unflinching exploration of trauma, connection, and identity. The writing moves with the rhythm of memory and revelation , balancing lyrical introspection with moments of raw, visceral tension. Scenes shift seamlessly between tenderness and unease, capturing the delicate balance between light and darkness that defines so much of the human experience. It lingers not just as a narrative, but as an echo of something truer beneath the surface.
6/8 c432 Fast Frank
So, the Fae should not have trouble with Austenitic stainless steel.
So, the Fae should not have trouble with Austenitic stainless steel.
6/8 c424 Fast Frank
Too bad Hermione didn't have enough magic to morph the limestone into marble. I suppose the fire and earth elementals could have done it.
Too bad Hermione didn't have enough magic to morph the limestone into marble. I suppose the fire and earth elementals could have done it.
6/8 c412 Fast Frank
I'm not going to sift through the reviews to see if I mentioned it earlier, but it takes four shift sections to have 24/7 coverage, each section working 21 of every 28 days. It's arduous, but sustainable.
I'm not going to sift through the reviews to see if I mentioned it earlier, but it takes four shift sections to have 24/7 coverage, each section working 21 of every 28 days. It's arduous, but sustainable.
6/7 c403 Fast Frank
The 'DADA Curse' strikes again.
The 'DADA Curse' strikes again.