for The God of Light - An Adventure in the World of Dragon Ball3/24 c1 mst3ktoo
Unless you're going to Au freezes power level to ridiculous amounts then he's already won with this power level and he hasn't even trained in high gravity yet. He's got the Super Saiyan transformation already so by the time Vegeta shows up he could be sitting at 1 million base
Unless you're going to Au freezes power level to ridiculous amounts then he's already won with this power level and he hasn't even trained in high gravity yet. He's got the Super Saiyan transformation already so by the time Vegeta shows up he could be sitting at 1 million base
10/9/2023 c2 Guest
Immediately dropped when he introduces himself with his power level and two random pointless superpowers lol forced and pointless
Immediately dropped when he introduces himself with his power level and two random pointless superpowers lol forced and pointless
6/17/2022 c3 clinttraper
I’d give this a 5/10. There’s a lot of parts you just have to skim in order to get through this but at the end I was left wanting more. If you can get past some of the early dialogue and some of the stuff that doesn’t make sense, it’s a pretty decent story.
I’d give this a 5/10. There’s a lot of parts you just have to skim in order to get through this but at the end I was left wanting more. If you can get past some of the early dialogue and some of the stuff that doesn’t make sense, it’s a pretty decent story.
6/4/2021 c3 Guest
Some things I think are kinda dumb but you explained them enough and out enough to detail and depth into them that makes them not that dumb anymore like I hated the idea how him somehow making his own god form or merging his transformations to his base with his light abilities but you made it perfect having it be weaker than super saiyan god(red hair) but stronger than super saiyan 3 ... just perfect. Really enjoyed this and when he fights for universe 7 he should tell Vados/Champa/universe6 that he has family on both sides but the fighters on universe 7 are overall stronger and have a better chance but have him promise Vados that he will wish for their universe to comeback because if he tells the universe 6 fighters they will either not fight as hard and get stronger throughout the tournament OR you could have universe 6 and 7 team up... great fic!
Some things I think are kinda dumb but you explained them enough and out enough to detail and depth into them that makes them not that dumb anymore like I hated the idea how him somehow making his own god form or merging his transformations to his base with his light abilities but you made it perfect having it be weaker than super saiyan god(red hair) but stronger than super saiyan 3 ... just perfect. Really enjoyed this and when he fights for universe 7 he should tell Vados/Champa/universe6 that he has family on both sides but the fighters on universe 7 are overall stronger and have a better chance but have him promise Vados that he will wish for their universe to comeback because if he tells the universe 6 fighters they will either not fight as hard and get stronger throughout the tournament OR you could have universe 6 and 7 team up... great fic!
6/4/2021 c1 Guest
Finally lol so many fanfics don’t do this when they have the Mc be with bulma they should have vegeta be with Tights
Finally lol so many fanfics don’t do this when they have the Mc be with bulma they should have vegeta be with Tights
5/16/2021 c1 Guest
He’s just casually giving out his knowledge and no one gaf... Kami just like not notice he knew everyone’s name and gojis training?
He’s just casually giving out his knowledge and no one gaf... Kami just like not notice he knew everyone’s name and gojis training?
14/15/2020 c3 Guest
Please man I’m dying in suspense for the next chapter
And I want see the reactions of the z fighters when they find out what happened and see vegeta get even more mad.
Please man I’m dying in suspense for the next chapter
And I want see the reactions of the z fighters when they find out what happened and see vegeta get even more mad.
4/24/2019 c3 Alyx
I'm loving this story and can't wait for the next chapter to came out
I'm loving this story and can't wait for the next chapter to came out
4/9/2019 c3 Kciyf
Continue
Continue
4/3/2019 c3 Val'Hor
I would love to read more of this please ! Update soon and keep up the good work ! :D
I would love to read more of this please ! Update soon and keep up the good work ! :D