for The Time Strangers12/22/2018 c9 
11nightwind83
good chapter the other kids don't need to. endless u plan to drive the two acants nuts
11nightwind83good chapter the other kids don't need to. endless u plan to drive the two acants nuts
12/22/2018 c1 4Akaswag
i love it, could you please differentiate the teen naruhina and adult naruhina, cause it confusing when the change come suddenly
4Akaswagi love it, could you please differentiate the teen naruhina and adult naruhina, cause it confusing when the change come suddenly
12/22/2018 c9 KindnessGalore
I vote Nay for other kids to be involved in the time travel. I like how you keep the focus on Boruto and Himawari and are also incorporating future Naruto and Hinata in there too. Things could get a little messy if you start adding other children travelling into the mix, then their parents would have to be added then future parents and it'll probably be a lot to keep up with. Although you are an awesome writer so you can probably pull it off tastefully. But so far I am really enjoying seeing the Uzumaki family, past and future ones, and looking forward to seeing how they will end up back to were they belong in the future :)
I vote Nay for other kids to be involved in the time travel. I like how you keep the focus on Boruto and Himawari and are also incorporating future Naruto and Hinata in there too. Things could get a little messy if you start adding other children travelling into the mix, then their parents would have to be added then future parents and it'll probably be a lot to keep up with. Although you are an awesome writer so you can probably pull it off tastefully. But so far I am really enjoying seeing the Uzumaki family, past and future ones, and looking forward to seeing how they will end up back to were they belong in the future :)
12/22/2018 c9 Kushinka
I'm glat that Hiashi is supportive for Hinata and Naruto. That time police are morons. And I am confused, they refer Lord Seventh to Naruto from past or Naruto who is father of Bolt and Hima? I like that Kurotsuchi helps Naruto.
I don't like Sasuke and Sarada. Sakura was nice and supportive. Though what they said was stupid that Hinata and Naruto shouldn't come back in time for their children. If it would be Sarada they would sing differently. Uchiha are arrogant assholes. It would be nice if Hinata instead of being happy that Sarada is making fun of her son who disappeared and she could not see him again and Sasuke being his usual dick self to Naruto, would be worried for her child and supportive for Naruto. I thought that you would not trivialize Naruto being insulted. It seems that Naruto in fanfic has no backbone and Hinata is glad that someone is being dick to her husband.
Please, no more children going back in time, it would be stupid if someone would get their hands on timetravel scroll. Though it would be satisfying if Naruto would say to worried about Sarada Sasuke that it runs in Uchiha to cause others trouble. But since in fanfiction Naruto is humilitated and Sasuke always praised by everyone, no more kids in the past. Even in that chapter Sasuke is "cool" and Boruto wants to be trained by Sasuke and Naruto is jealous of Sasuke and is "worse" than Uchiha.
My rant doesn't apply necessarily to your fanfic, I am just fed up with reading story with Naruto as main character being bashed while Sasuke is treated like golden child who is never being made fun of. I read only stories where Naruto is butt of every joke. He never teases others though he is shown of doing that in anime and in fanfics he only teases Hinata. I hate that I can't sometimes see difference between fanfics of author who "like" Naruto and fanfics where sasuhina wankers who hate Naruto bash him.
In canon Naruto is and feels equal to Sasuke and isn't bothered by Sasuke training Boruto at all and when Sasuke says shit to him, Naruto fires back with the same strength. I really blame anime for dumbing down Naruto and taking away his backbone.
I'm glat that Hiashi is supportive for Hinata and Naruto. That time police are morons. And I am confused, they refer Lord Seventh to Naruto from past or Naruto who is father of Bolt and Hima? I like that Kurotsuchi helps Naruto.
I don't like Sasuke and Sarada. Sakura was nice and supportive. Though what they said was stupid that Hinata and Naruto shouldn't come back in time for their children. If it would be Sarada they would sing differently. Uchiha are arrogant assholes. It would be nice if Hinata instead of being happy that Sarada is making fun of her son who disappeared and she could not see him again and Sasuke being his usual dick self to Naruto, would be worried for her child and supportive for Naruto. I thought that you would not trivialize Naruto being insulted. It seems that Naruto in fanfic has no backbone and Hinata is glad that someone is being dick to her husband.
Please, no more children going back in time, it would be stupid if someone would get their hands on timetravel scroll. Though it would be satisfying if Naruto would say to worried about Sarada Sasuke that it runs in Uchiha to cause others trouble. But since in fanfiction Naruto is humilitated and Sasuke always praised by everyone, no more kids in the past. Even in that chapter Sasuke is "cool" and Boruto wants to be trained by Sasuke and Naruto is jealous of Sasuke and is "worse" than Uchiha.
My rant doesn't apply necessarily to your fanfic, I am just fed up with reading story with Naruto as main character being bashed while Sasuke is treated like golden child who is never being made fun of. I read only stories where Naruto is butt of every joke. He never teases others though he is shown of doing that in anime and in fanfics he only teases Hinata. I hate that I can't sometimes see difference between fanfics of author who "like" Naruto and fanfics where sasuhina wankers who hate Naruto bash him.
In canon Naruto is and feels equal to Sasuke and isn't bothered by Sasuke training Boruto at all and when Sasuke says shit to him, Naruto fires back with the same strength. I really blame anime for dumbing down Naruto and taking away his backbone.
12/22/2018 c9 1MrAwesome8
If time inspectors had made naruto & hinata realize the effects the children will have on their timeline then they might've helped them send the children back.
For example, had naruto & hinata been told that due to time travel butterfly effect, maybe boruto & hima will not born here or the original naruto & hinata will lose both their children to time travel which could eventually happen & other timelines etc.
Naruto & hinata would've tried to send them back to their original parents so as to not mess up the peaceful timeline & their future.
1MrAwesome8If time inspectors had made naruto & hinata realize the effects the children will have on their timeline then they might've helped them send the children back.
For example, had naruto & hinata been told that due to time travel butterfly effect, maybe boruto & hima will not born here or the original naruto & hinata will lose both their children to time travel which could eventually happen & other timelines etc.
Naruto & hinata would've tried to send them back to their original parents so as to not mess up the peaceful timeline & their future.
12/22/2018 c9 Yoko89
one thank you for the chapter amazing I cannot wait for the rest as for question I want to say Yay it would be nice how the other future parent would react to their future children but this is your story you get to decide.
one thank you for the chapter amazing I cannot wait for the rest as for question I want to say Yay it would be nice how the other future parent would react to their future children but this is your story you get to decide.
12/18/2018 c8 Bloom
Would love to see little Sarada’s curiousity mess with one of her Papa’s or the Hokage’s scrolls and land back in time with Boruto and Himawari! It would be so nice to see the kids have a sense of familiarity or see someone they know. In addition, it would also be interesting to see past Sasuke & Sakura’s reactions and NaruHina’s as well. Just a suggestion, but I’m loving this fic so far and have been imaging that happening haha :) continue the good work! Can’t wait for the next update
Would love to see little Sarada’s curiousity mess with one of her Papa’s or the Hokage’s scrolls and land back in time with Boruto and Himawari! It would be so nice to see the kids have a sense of familiarity or see someone they know. In addition, it would also be interesting to see past Sasuke & Sakura’s reactions and NaruHina’s as well. Just a suggestion, but I’m loving this fic so far and have been imaging that happening haha :) continue the good work! Can’t wait for the next update
12/8/2018 c8 3narutwo
Wait, was that their first?
This story is so good. Though I can't help but be anxious on how Boru and Hima are affecting the future. I also feel bad for older Naruhina, though I don't want Boru and Hima to go back to their orig time. I feel so confused. Lol.
3narutwoWait, was that their first?
This story is so good. Though I can't help but be anxious on how Boru and Hima are affecting the future. I also feel bad for older Naruhina, though I don't want Boru and Hima to go back to their orig time. I feel so confused. Lol.
12/8/2018 c8 Yoko89
They finally meet Sasuke I cannot wait what Boruto is going to say to him keep up the amazing work cannot wait for the rest of the chapters.
They finally meet Sasuke I cannot wait what Boruto is going to say to him keep up the amazing work cannot wait for the rest of the chapters.