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10/12 c1 Epicgamer2034
u know a story is gonna be good if they got quotes before the chapter starts
10/15/2018 c5 warlord007.js
Never seen the show but mind arts was fucking amazing so,I checked this out. Definitely gonna be stickin with this
10/13/2018 c4 Lilly
It's not a bit weird that Marco behaves like a 30-year-old man with his parents leaving the Earth and everything "hey I'm a man" but ... he still likes the 14-year-old LITTLE GIRL with whom I barely spend time I had an extremely childish love?
If this fic puts as a fact that he has 30 mentally and that matters (unlike the series where he forgets) the only acceptable match is Markapoo since Jarco, Starco or Kellco or whatever is pedophilia point. It's even creepy that Marco would like even Jackie or would like Star is for something that in the series they ignore that he's 30 and they treat that as unimportant.
Forgive but all the fics where they assume that Marco is 30 and loves Star or Jackie are ... pretty creepy.
10/12/2018 c3 3PrimordialGuardian
Very good story, but what are the pairings.
9/24/2018 c1 Ribombee
I could have sworn I've read this before.
9/18/2018 c2 Ninelotus
Promising so far.

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