for Into Darkness - SYOT Story9/13/2018 c1 Booklover1314
20 district four IS an optional volunteer district. Although they do not have volunteers every year, they are optional. Which means at times they volunteer.
20 district four IS an optional volunteer district. Although they do not have volunteers every year, they are optional. Which means at times they volunteer.
9/13/2018 c3 
6santiago.poncini20
This chapter was great. Though, why the district 4 doesn’t have volunteers tribute. And that they have too common names the side characters. But its okay. It’s all good. Vance seems like Chaff would be una more important district, and Aluna she is nice. I ship her and Sophie. I am big doof
I can proofread some chapters if you want. Is that checking out the spelling mistakes in the chapters? I will do so
6santiago.poncini20This chapter was great. Though, why the district 4 doesn’t have volunteers tribute. And that they have too common names the side characters. But its okay. It’s all good. Vance seems like Chaff would be una more important district, and Aluna she is nice. I ship her and Sophie. I am big doof
I can proofread some chapters if you want. Is that checking out the spelling mistakes in the chapters? I will do so
9/13/2018 c2 1666samvr
The relationship between Audri and her father intrigues me. Like, on one hand, she seems a bit scared of him. But on the other, he still treats her like his daughter. Can't wait to see how this goes!
1666samvrThe relationship between Audri and her father intrigues me. Like, on one hand, she seems a bit scared of him. But on the other, he still treats her like his daughter. Can't wait to see how this goes!
9/13/2018 c2 2call me calamity
Audri’s definitely an interesting character. A bit scandalous that the president’s daughter isn’t a fan of the Games, isn’t it? I wonder if that’ll have any relevance later on in the story. Anyway, this is already off to a great start; I really like your writing and they say you’ve set things up. Hopefully those tributes keep coming in!
2call me calamityAudri’s definitely an interesting character. A bit scandalous that the president’s daughter isn’t a fan of the Games, isn’t it? I wonder if that’ll have any relevance later on in the story. Anyway, this is already off to a great start; I really like your writing and they say you’ve set things up. Hopefully those tributes keep coming in!