for And Now Yet Again Still Even More Fragments7/17 c18 Innortal
I figure the fun part will be the Mayor showing up, talking about how he is glad to help support an art project-since no one let leak it was actually a porn. Succubi showing up to protest-unionized sex demons don't like scabs working their jobs. Spike-as a writer-would be upset and angry about the dialogue. If Tara showed up early, she'd show up at the picket line, believing these are her family.
I figure the fun part will be the Mayor showing up, talking about how he is glad to help support an art project-since no one let leak it was actually a porn. Succubi showing up to protest-unionized sex demons don't like scabs working their jobs. Spike-as a writer-would be upset and angry about the dialogue. If Tara showed up early, she'd show up at the picket line, believing these are her family.
6/19 c34 addicted2text
ROTFLMAO...Another one that I'd love to see more of even though I can probably imagine how it goes well enough without a continuation. Thanks! That last line was killer. Made me laugh out loud in public.
ROTFLMAO...Another one that I'd love to see more of even though I can probably imagine how it goes well enough without a continuation. Thanks! That last line was killer. Made me laugh out loud in public.
5/27 c41 addicted2text
Awww man...I just realized this is another one that hasn't been gotten back to yet. Great start. Very anvilicious. Still looking forward to whatever happens to Masque and hoping you'll turn it on its head to be something good but ironic.
Awww man...I just realized this is another one that hasn't been gotten back to yet. Great start. Very anvilicious. Still looking forward to whatever happens to Masque and hoping you'll turn it on its head to be something good but ironic.
5/5 c7 DarkBan
Okay, this one would be a VERY interesting story to read.
(7th chap in case it shows in general and nt in specific chapters)
Okay, this one would be a VERY interesting story to read.
(7th chap in case it shows in general and nt in specific chapters)
3/25 c24 
2SixFtWookie
It's worth noting that when Bruce was training in Escapology with Zatarra and discovered magic was real, he begged to learn and was told No quite forcefully. Zatarra said he wouldn't be able to avoid abusing magic in his pursuit of vengeance and justice.
2SixFtWookieIt's worth noting that when Bruce was training in Escapology with Zatarra and discovered magic was real, he begged to learn and was told No quite forcefully. Zatarra said he wouldn't be able to avoid abusing magic in his pursuit of vengeance and justice.
1/22 c75 23Facepalmistry
I'm sure there have been longer periods between Fragments chapters, but it still seems a bit weird.
Title suggestions:
"And Now Yet Again With Still Even More Fragments"
"And Now Yet Again Here With Still Even More Fragments"
"And Now Yet Again Here With Somehow Still Even More Fragments"
"And Now We're Yet Again Here With Somehow Still Even More Fragments"
"And Now We're All Yet Again Here With Somehow Still Even More Fragments"
That last one is 71 characters, which is probably about as long as you can get it in its current format. After which, if you (and/or FFN itself) are somehow STILL going... either drop the running gag ("Fragments X"), go with initials, or lampoon it ("Dead/Undead/Lich Horse Fragments").
23FacepalmistryI'm sure there have been longer periods between Fragments chapters, but it still seems a bit weird.
Title suggestions:
"And Now Yet Again With Still Even More Fragments"
"And Now Yet Again Here With Still Even More Fragments"
"And Now Yet Again Here With Somehow Still Even More Fragments"
"And Now We're Yet Again Here With Somehow Still Even More Fragments"
"And Now We're All Yet Again Here With Somehow Still Even More Fragments"
That last one is 71 characters, which is probably about as long as you can get it in its current format. After which, if you (and/or FFN itself) are somehow STILL going... either drop the running gag ("Fragments X"), go with initials, or lampoon it ("Dead/Undead/Lich Horse Fragments").
12/20/2023 c75 Craig N
Anybody have a good suggestion for the title of the next fragments thread? I've been trying to come up with a ninth word to add, and no good ideas. From comments over on his patreon, dbc can't recall what he had in mind, so I'm sure he's open to ideas.
Anybody have a good suggestion for the title of the next fragments thread? I've been trying to come up with a ninth word to add, and no good ideas. From comments over on his patreon, dbc can't recall what he had in mind, so I'm sure he's open to ideas.
11/8/2023 c75 1Wrin
Ah, I've read the longer version of this! Great story so far. I like that you include adult elements without being too explicit about it
1WrinAh, I've read the longer version of this! Great story so far. I like that you include adult elements without being too explicit about it
11/8/2023 c74 Wrin
No idea on the Canadian thing either. Maybe it was just an "criminals go over a border to be harder to catch" thing?
No idea on the Canadian thing either. Maybe it was just an "criminals go over a border to be harder to catch" thing?
11/8/2023 c73 Wrin
Don't know if I reviewed this yet so we'll see if it sticks. Been having a lot of trouble IRL recently so I haven't been reviewing, and I haven't seen a lot of chapters either so I wanted to check in. Hi. I like the chapter. Also "skunk and bacon" was brilliant
Don't know if I reviewed this yet so we'll see if it sticks. Been having a lot of trouble IRL recently so I haven't been reviewing, and I haven't seen a lot of chapters either so I wanted to check in. Hi. I like the chapter. Also "skunk and bacon" was brilliant
10/31/2023 c1 FriendlyFire59
Y'know, in the first one I think Xander could start calling for arbitration by 'The Creator' on grounds of "FREE WILL'! After all, if a lowly human could come up with an idea that up sets their oh so grandiose plans then the Powers that Be Pathetic Little Rule Mongers aren't doing their jobs and they need a 'spanking', unless he decides what's being offered is worth it.
Y'know, in the first one I think Xander could start calling for arbitration by 'The Creator' on grounds of "FREE WILL'! After all, if a lowly human could come up with an idea that up sets their oh so grandiose plans then the Powers that Be Pathetic Little Rule Mongers aren't doing their jobs and they need a 'spanking', unless he decides what's being offered is worth it.