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for The Chosen Ones And The Path To Truth Part II: The Shatter Point

5/19/2019 c1 1MrBogus
First of all, cudos for writing such a lengthy tale. That in itself is a accomplishment! This totally itself deserves a Review. But I have to admit, that I have some trouble reading this story. The first chapter was quite confusing for me somehow. The structure of your sentences was somewhat confusing. Maybe because I am no native speaker?
11/22/2018 c1 Guest
Thanks for thanksgiving update

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