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9/16/2018 c2 MarineRaider77
Okay mate 2 things
1. Please cut up the paragraphs, it makes it a lot more smoother to read.
2. Please fix up the grammar, no offence mate but just re-read it and fix it.
Besides those 2 points it was a good chapter also again maybe instead of the CZ 805 BREN Assault Rifle Ali could use a Shotgun like a SPAS Shotgun or something.
9/16/2018 c1 MarineRaider77
Cool bio's, gear special gadgets but just a suggestion, maybe instead of a CZ 805 BREN Assault Rifle for Alicia maybe a SPAS Shotgun.
9/16/2018 c2 Guest
looking good m8 cant wait for the next chapter

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