for My First Time9/28/2023 c3 WTF
Jesus Christ how old were you when you wrote this pile of garbage, I’m guessing 11.
Jesus Christ how old were you when you wrote this pile of garbage, I’m guessing 11.
11/25/2018 c3 CuteLemon
Warning to everyone: Don't read past the first chapter. Trust me, you'll regret it.
Warning to everyone: Don't read past the first chapter. Trust me, you'll regret it.
10/26/2018 c3 Ajfflady
Fantastic I loved the age gap and the crime of passion. Just a really great story. Thank you so very much for sharing.
Fantastic I loved the age gap and the crime of passion. Just a really great story. Thank you so very much for sharing.
10/25/2018 c3 frostedglaze
Kind of sucks that Renee and Phil survived. They were the catalyst for everything that went wrong.
Kind of sucks that Renee and Phil survived. They were the catalyst for everything that went wrong.
10/25/2018 c3 
1Azlady2003
Wow didn't see that coming. Surprised Bella didn't try to use the pregnancy to get Edward to stay
1Azlady2003Wow didn't see that coming. Surprised Bella didn't try to use the pregnancy to get Edward to stay
10/24/2018 c3 18maymay74
I didn't expect this. Wow! A perfect twist for this time of the year. Excellent.
18maymay74I didn't expect this. Wow! A perfect twist for this time of the year. Excellent.
10/24/2018 c3 sue1zide
Perfect story for this time of year.
For some reason "Lolita" kept running through my head.
Is this complete?
Perfect story for this time of year.
For some reason "Lolita" kept running through my head.
Is this complete?
10/24/2018 c3 4snoopylover60
Talk about good, and one heck of a twist!
I am applauding you! This is great!
4snoopylover60Talk about good, and one heck of a twist!
I am applauding you! This is great!
9/25/2018 c2 Guest
when are u going update it
when are u going update it