for Sarah vs the Kiss9/1/2024 c1 Richard76310
The show writers were quacks just collecting a pay check. This is a fitting scene for the show.
The show writers were quacks just collecting a pay check. This is a fitting scene for the show.
4/6/2021 c1 JHershey
I felt like the show hinted at a happy ending, but I personally would have appreciated a little more. This wraps things up much nicer for me. Thanks. Looking forward to reading Sarah vs the hello.
I felt like the show hinted at a happy ending, but I personally would have appreciated a little more. This wraps things up much nicer for me. Thanks. Looking forward to reading Sarah vs the hello.
4/1/2021 c1 Mike B
Great story, great job, and thank you for all your hard work.
Great story, great job, and thank you for all your hard work.
2/17/2021 c1 Soccerfan37
This was the much needed scene that would have made the finale tolerable.
It doesn't kill all of Sarah's growth as a character as the actual finale did.
Thank you for this story it is great!
This was the much needed scene that would have made the finale tolerable.
It doesn't kill all of Sarah's growth as a character as the actual finale did.
Thank you for this story it is great!
6/5/2020 c1 Harakan
So short but so much said in this one shot well done so heartwarming and adorable i cant say more with words you just intrigued me with continue this story of the second author.
So short but so much said in this one shot well done so heartwarming and adorable i cant say more with words you just intrigued me with continue this story of the second author.
6/4/2020 c1 
1Ancientgamer
Great post 5-13 story. The beginning of a happy ending for Charah. Thanks for posting this for us.
1AncientgamerGreat post 5-13 story. The beginning of a happy ending for Charah. Thanks for posting this for us.
3/22/2020 c1 Tigertod
Love it! Love it! Love it!
Love it! Love it! Love it!
1/2/2020 c1 1JohnnyRayChandlett
Sweet attempt at fixing what still today looks like unfinished business - and I am not one to complain so quickly about unusual finales (ST-VOY finale comes to mind, unusual for the franchise). This story could fill that gap, as it delivers what one previous review (by David Carner) said: "That beach scene...you just need 30 more seconds of something, and this is perfect." Seconded.
1JohnnyRayChandlettSweet attempt at fixing what still today looks like unfinished business - and I am not one to complain so quickly about unusual finales (ST-VOY finale comes to mind, unusual for the franchise). This story could fill that gap, as it delivers what one previous review (by David Carner) said: "That beach scene...you just need 30 more seconds of something, and this is perfect." Seconded.
6/22/2019 c1 82old2write
Thank you. So cathartic. I rarely watch the finale (I stop with “Baby” while all is right with the world) but when I do I know I will return to this drablet ( :-) ) to ease the pain (and anger).
Bravo!
82old2writeThank you. So cathartic. I rarely watch the finale (I stop with “Baby” while all is right with the world) but when I do I know I will return to this drablet ( :-) ) to ease the pain (and anger).
Bravo!
6/4/2019 c1 5LetsGoRed
Holy smokes! How is it that I never wrote a review for this story, WG? I came back to reread the story (something I've done many times) and decided to look at the reviews as I was curious to see what I had said… and I hadn't! We've discussed this story so much directly, I've even written about it in my own author notes and borrowed from it for my story, but I must add this here- This story calmed the storm that the series finale had left in me. Before, from time to time some odd or end would make me remember the finale and it would bring back the frustration and anguish that the finale had rained down upon me. This story helped to mostly wash that away; as I've said elsewhere, reading it the first time was therapeutic. Thank you.
5LetsGoRedHoly smokes! How is it that I never wrote a review for this story, WG? I came back to reread the story (something I've done many times) and decided to look at the reviews as I was curious to see what I had said… and I hadn't! We've discussed this story so much directly, I've even written about it in my own author notes and borrowed from it for my story, but I must add this here- This story calmed the storm that the series finale had left in me. Before, from time to time some odd or end would make me remember the finale and it would bring back the frustration and anguish that the finale had rained down upon me. This story helped to mostly wash that away; as I've said elsewhere, reading it the first time was therapeutic. Thank you.
5/10/2019 c1 michaelfmx72
I never tire of these types of stories. Thanks for giving us such a warm and fuzzy extension of that final scene. You managed to really get the emotions of the situation in such a short one shot. Well done.
I never tire of these types of stories. Thanks for giving us such a warm and fuzzy extension of that final scene. You managed to really get the emotions of the situation in such a short one shot. Well done.
9/25/2018 c1 devious418
Ok, Ok, so I'm an idiot. I reviewed Hail Mary before I found this one.
Well done. Thank you!
Ok, Ok, so I'm an idiot. I reviewed Hail Mary before I found this one.
Well done. Thank you!
9/20/2018 c1 JR69stang
Until you wrote this, I did not think that anyone
could fix that crap ending. I think that you did
an excellent job with this story. This posting made
my day in the Fan Fiction world. Thank You, JR
Until you wrote this, I did not think that anyone
could fix that crap ending. I think that you did
an excellent job with this story. This posting made
my day in the Fan Fiction world. Thank You, JR