for Unfit7/21/2024 c11 Freedmoon
Ironic, that in the end, the only one to still end in a sad ending thats not bittersweet is Kakashi, given the added trauma of seeing the very much trusted wife of the teacher he so loved try to kill the last direct link to his team besides herself. Dude lost the trust of his students, Naruto doesnt blame him but itll make all subsequent conversation that mjch awkward.
But then again, Kakashi's middle name may aswell be called Trauma since the only way he can forget and go past them is when he loses the Sharingan, whose very presence remains because of trauma (hell i noted the part where he states that both he and Kushina are pretty much trash dude actually managed to succesfully save Naruto but still sees it as a failure because Minato)
Nice story however.
Ps: Oh snap the fight between Mikoto and Kakashi would be amazing, hahaha
Ironic, that in the end, the only one to still end in a sad ending thats not bittersweet is Kakashi, given the added trauma of seeing the very much trusted wife of the teacher he so loved try to kill the last direct link to his team besides herself. Dude lost the trust of his students, Naruto doesnt blame him but itll make all subsequent conversation that mjch awkward.
But then again, Kakashi's middle name may aswell be called Trauma since the only way he can forget and go past them is when he loses the Sharingan, whose very presence remains because of trauma (hell i noted the part where he states that both he and Kushina are pretty much trash dude actually managed to succesfully save Naruto but still sees it as a failure because Minato)
Nice story however.
Ps: Oh snap the fight between Mikoto and Kakashi would be amazing, hahaha
4/2/2024 c1 DisruptiveHarmonies
People who leave awful comments that don’t even really pertain to the fic itself are stupid and should be ignored.
People who leave awful comments that don’t even really pertain to the fic itself are stupid and should be ignored.
5/27/2023 c1 Eterna Ordina
What sort of traumadesire for forced drama make Uzumaki Kushina a BAD MOTHER!?
What sort of traumadesire for forced drama make Uzumaki Kushina a BAD MOTHER!?
5/21/2023 c11 lordfyre94
This story was shit and u could have Naruto beat the shit out of them instead u r making him act like a retard like his canon counterpart and as for kushina she should not have any happiness or be with mikoto she she have been left to die in darknesss and loneliness for being a coward and I hope u do a rewrite of the ending cause it was confusing as hell
This story was shit and u could have Naruto beat the shit out of them instead u r making him act like a retard like his canon counterpart and as for kushina she should not have any happiness or be with mikoto she she have been left to die in darknesss and loneliness for being a coward and I hope u do a rewrite of the ending cause it was confusing as hell
2/26/2023 c11 Guest
Bastard how can you leave it behind just like that finish it do not leave us in the middle this is such a good story I am too anxious for the ending so complete it. The story is truly good
Bastard how can you leave it behind just like that finish it do not leave us in the middle this is such a good story I am too anxious for the ending so complete it. The story is truly good
2/25/2023 c11 Guest
Kill yourself
Kill yourself
2/24/2023 c10 DJzash
Damn man, I read this everytime I want to go on an emotional rollercoaster. Still hits the same after so many years. Hope you are doing well.
Damn man, I read this everytime I want to go on an emotional rollercoaster. Still hits the same after so many years. Hope you are doing well.
12/8/2022 c11 ForMyselfInTheFuture
Wow I dont think an interaction has ever frustrated me more than the one between Tsunade and Naruto in this chap. What an absolute c*** and Narutos reaction was beyond unsatisfying
Wow I dont think an interaction has ever frustrated me more than the one between Tsunade and Naruto in this chap. What an absolute c*** and Narutos reaction was beyond unsatisfying
12/7/2022 c11 donttellthem
some things are better uncompleted, and this fic is one of them. I can't recommend it enough, it's a heart ache to read, but those small jabs and lines are so well written you feel a certain satisfaction with it. even though it's heartwrenching, it is such an addictive fic. The dialogues given are well placed and the timing is perfect. All in all a worth read even if it's an au...
some things are better uncompleted, and this fic is one of them. I can't recommend it enough, it's a heart ache to read, but those small jabs and lines are so well written you feel a certain satisfaction with it. even though it's heartwrenching, it is such an addictive fic. The dialogues given are well placed and the timing is perfect. All in all a worth read even if it's an au...
7/17/2022 c10 Hyperman15
Reading this is like drinking poison. This is so sad man. Extremely entertaining. I couldn’t stop myself from continuing to read. After reading most of it, it went from drinking poison to eating extremely bitter dark chocolate. It’s well written, I don’t regret reading this.
Reading this is like drinking poison. This is so sad man. Extremely entertaining. I couldn’t stop myself from continuing to read. After reading most of it, it went from drinking poison to eating extremely bitter dark chocolate. It’s well written, I don’t regret reading this.
4/2/2022 c5 Guest
My opinion but I feel likee Kakashi can clap atleast half the Akatsuki and Guy definitely can destroy them 8 gates included.
My opinion but I feel likee Kakashi can clap atleast half the Akatsuki and Guy definitely can destroy them 8 gates included.