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33Tellemicus Sundance
Jeez. Thanks to that B!TCH, Jaune is gonna be utterly unrecognizable to the various ladies seeking him. Not sure I wanna continue this...
33Tellemicus SundanceJeez. Thanks to that B!TCH, Jaune is gonna be utterly unrecognizable to the various ladies seeking him. Not sure I wanna continue this...
4/8 c10 5GeraltRex
Finally it comes out that RWBY and NPR are time travelers and realize that everyone else is.
WHY is CINDER of all characters a time traveler too?!
5GeraltRexFinally it comes out that RWBY and NPR are time travelers and realize that everyone else is.
WHY is CINDER of all characters a time traveler too?!
3/20 c2 Shadowstorm-Vash
As a juvenile onset type 1 Diabetic I can assure you that butter does not cause diabetes as it has next to no impact on glucose levels. The popcorn could do it but you would need a to eat a loony toons level of it to have it cause damage enough to the average adult to cause diabetes. You are more likely to get it from years of abuse of high sugar and carb abuse like eating a full box of Oreo’s daily. Or from an auto immune issue, like I have, where parts of your own immune system attack your islet cells that produce insulin. Too much butter is going to lead to higher cholesterol levels though and bad heart health if eaten regularly in excess amounts. Butter does not cause diabetes.
As a juvenile onset type 1 Diabetic I can assure you that butter does not cause diabetes as it has next to no impact on glucose levels. The popcorn could do it but you would need a to eat a loony toons level of it to have it cause damage enough to the average adult to cause diabetes. You are more likely to get it from years of abuse of high sugar and carb abuse like eating a full box of Oreo’s daily. Or from an auto immune issue, like I have, where parts of your own immune system attack your islet cells that produce insulin. Too much butter is going to lead to higher cholesterol levels though and bad heart health if eaten regularly in excess amounts. Butter does not cause diabetes.
1/5 c10 HelpingHand
Haven’t read this in a while but I’m glad I caught up to the new chapters. Because of this I have a lot to say so sorry if this is a long comment. This is a great story. I’m glad they figured out that they aren’t the only ones in loops. If that had been dragged out it would have made them look dumb. I’m looking forward to them working together.
Pyrrha is my favorite character so it is a bit sad to see her like this but I guess someone had to break. Hopefully she gets better and gets with Jaune eventually. Maybe it will be one of those things where the more effort it takes the more satisfying it will be when it happens.
I feel like with everything people go through a lot of them would have gone to Ren for a shoulder to lean on. So he took a loop or two to learn psychology and one more loop of being a therapist. This would let him help Pyrrha in this loop. Though Nora may need to smack some sense into her if she says it is her destiny to become a maiden. Did she really become one every loop she was in? She never tried anything different? If she gets better then she could tell Jaune that he reminds her of someone she lost and she was projecting onto him. It’s not wrong as the Jaune she knew is gone. He might tell her he is sorry and he isn’t him but they can start over with a fresh start.
The main thing I don’t like about Pyrrha is she is thinking about what she wants, not what Jaune wants. And that is something all the girls seem to be doing. But above even that I’m most disappointed in Ren as he has a dick and doesn’t have the excuse of thinking with a pussy like the rest of them. Or no romantic feelings, whatever. Out of all of them he should be the most level headed. I can understand him trying to help Pyrrha get with Jaune as she is a friend too but pressuring Jaune makes it seem like Jaune is less important as a friend. I hope Ren says sorry and they have some bro moments together. Like … um … fishing? That is something guys do right? Ren would like it for being quiet and Jaune might like the challenge of trying to get a bigger fish.
I hope with everything Jaune went through he is more dominant than in other loops. Like sure there is nothing wrong with having a girl on top but he shouldn’t let himself be pushed into things. Even if the girls are used to doing things with him they shouldn’t expect him to. If anything things could flip. What did Ruby like? Jaune having a collar and leash on him. Maybe Ruby will wear it for once. If Yang wants to tie him up she should have to be tied up first.
Though, talking about relationships being equal I hope Nora isn’t selfish like a lot of stories make her. She’s been good in the story so far but I’ve read so many stories where Ren makes her pancakes but only one that she gets him something small and nice like that. With how many loops Nora has been through she should be at least able to make those health drinks he likes. It would be sweet if they both could make meals the other liked better than the ones they liked. Nora should give Ren his quiet time sometimes and … I guess Ren should do some crazy things sometimes too. Not just one of them. Though with how many loops Ren has been through he might have picked up a few things. Like him pouring syrup on his chest so Nora can lick it off. Maybe that’s a new one for Nora in this timeline.
The Die Hard chapter came a bit out of nowhere but I liked it. If Illi was embarrassed did her skin change color? Was she Christmas colored? I’m surprised she didn’t say she wanted to be a good girl after that so it doesn’t happen again. I hope Raven is proud of Jaune when she hears about this.
Roman as a teacher at Beacon? Did I read that right? Because I’m all for it. The looks on the others’ faces would be great. Would he teach stealth?
Velvet is my second favorite character so I hope she isn’t left out. I didn’t see her in Time Travelers Anonymous. Or Coco, I like her too. With Jaune trusting Cinder I think all of them are going to know that this Jaune hasn’t been looping.
Haven’t read this in a while but I’m glad I caught up to the new chapters. Because of this I have a lot to say so sorry if this is a long comment. This is a great story. I’m glad they figured out that they aren’t the only ones in loops. If that had been dragged out it would have made them look dumb. I’m looking forward to them working together.
Pyrrha is my favorite character so it is a bit sad to see her like this but I guess someone had to break. Hopefully she gets better and gets with Jaune eventually. Maybe it will be one of those things where the more effort it takes the more satisfying it will be when it happens.
I feel like with everything people go through a lot of them would have gone to Ren for a shoulder to lean on. So he took a loop or two to learn psychology and one more loop of being a therapist. This would let him help Pyrrha in this loop. Though Nora may need to smack some sense into her if she says it is her destiny to become a maiden. Did she really become one every loop she was in? She never tried anything different? If she gets better then she could tell Jaune that he reminds her of someone she lost and she was projecting onto him. It’s not wrong as the Jaune she knew is gone. He might tell her he is sorry and he isn’t him but they can start over with a fresh start.
The main thing I don’t like about Pyrrha is she is thinking about what she wants, not what Jaune wants. And that is something all the girls seem to be doing. But above even that I’m most disappointed in Ren as he has a dick and doesn’t have the excuse of thinking with a pussy like the rest of them. Or no romantic feelings, whatever. Out of all of them he should be the most level headed. I can understand him trying to help Pyrrha get with Jaune as she is a friend too but pressuring Jaune makes it seem like Jaune is less important as a friend. I hope Ren says sorry and they have some bro moments together. Like … um … fishing? That is something guys do right? Ren would like it for being quiet and Jaune might like the challenge of trying to get a bigger fish.
I hope with everything Jaune went through he is more dominant than in other loops. Like sure there is nothing wrong with having a girl on top but he shouldn’t let himself be pushed into things. Even if the girls are used to doing things with him they shouldn’t expect him to. If anything things could flip. What did Ruby like? Jaune having a collar and leash on him. Maybe Ruby will wear it for once. If Yang wants to tie him up she should have to be tied up first.
Though, talking about relationships being equal I hope Nora isn’t selfish like a lot of stories make her. She’s been good in the story so far but I’ve read so many stories where Ren makes her pancakes but only one that she gets him something small and nice like that. With how many loops Nora has been through she should be at least able to make those health drinks he likes. It would be sweet if they both could make meals the other liked better than the ones they liked. Nora should give Ren his quiet time sometimes and … I guess Ren should do some crazy things sometimes too. Not just one of them. Though with how many loops Ren has been through he might have picked up a few things. Like him pouring syrup on his chest so Nora can lick it off. Maybe that’s a new one for Nora in this timeline.
The Die Hard chapter came a bit out of nowhere but I liked it. If Illi was embarrassed did her skin change color? Was she Christmas colored? I’m surprised she didn’t say she wanted to be a good girl after that so it doesn’t happen again. I hope Raven is proud of Jaune when she hears about this.
Roman as a teacher at Beacon? Did I read that right? Because I’m all for it. The looks on the others’ faces would be great. Would he teach stealth?
Velvet is my second favorite character so I hope she isn’t left out. I didn’t see her in Time Travelers Anonymous. Or Coco, I like her too. With Jaune trusting Cinder I think all of them are going to know that this Jaune hasn’t been looping.
1/1 c10 Guest
It’s just showing display code.
It’s just showing display code.
1/1 c10 JackOhLantern
Ch 10 is a mess. Though I also wanted to say I am pretty surprised this is being updated.
Ch 10 is a mess. Though I also wanted to say I am pretty surprised this is being updated.