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15Zinnia99
Father is so mean! Why cant he leave Yato alone?!
Bringing up Hiyori is a surefire way to get a reaction out of Yato. It's so terrible that Father knows exactly how to push Yato's buttons, but Yato can't do the same. I wonder if Yato will take up some karaoke that weekend as well to keep an eye on things. Things are starting to pick up. The karaoke chapter is going to be so eventful.
15Zinnia99Father is so mean! Why cant he leave Yato alone?!
Bringing up Hiyori is a surefire way to get a reaction out of Yato. It's so terrible that Father knows exactly how to push Yato's buttons, but Yato can't do the same. I wonder if Yato will take up some karaoke that weekend as well to keep an eye on things. Things are starting to pick up. The karaoke chapter is going to be so eventful.
11/15/2019 c30 Zinnia99
What a rude wakeup call. It portrays Father perfectly though. I love the quick save Fujisaki used to explain why he's walking around with paintbrushes. I do feel bad that Hiyori hasn't been able to see her friends because of everything that has happened. Let's see how this karaoke thing works out.
This chapter was a bit slow to me, seeming to be more of a filler chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next.
What a rude wakeup call. It portrays Father perfectly though. I love the quick save Fujisaki used to explain why he's walking around with paintbrushes. I do feel bad that Hiyori hasn't been able to see her friends because of everything that has happened. Let's see how this karaoke thing works out.
This chapter was a bit slow to me, seeming to be more of a filler chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next.
11/15/2019 c29 Zinnia99
Kazuma has made his grand entrance; although, I was expecting it to be more grand. I do think Kazuma may be a lit OOC here. I consider Kazuma to be one of the most mature characters in the series, so I think he's losing his patience a little too quick and is being a bit childish throwing this tantrum of his.
I love when Kazuma asks Hiyori how does she know the baby is Yato's. It made me crack up.
Kazuma has made his grand entrance; although, I was expecting it to be more grand. I do think Kazuma may be a lit OOC here. I consider Kazuma to be one of the most mature characters in the series, so I think he's losing his patience a little too quick and is being a bit childish throwing this tantrum of his.
I love when Kazuma asks Hiyori how does she know the baby is Yato's. It made me crack up.
11/9/2019 c31 WhiteLilyPad101
I qould say the key word to describe this chapter is 'bittersweet'.
First, we see Yato with Father, in a somewhat sensitive situation and with Yato trying to kill him.
Then it's Hiyori, texting with her friends and thinking about them.
I like it! Everybody's in different moods. Hiyori's happy to be back with her friends, even if it's only one night. Yato's trying to stand his father. I wonder when will they be reunited? It's sad to see them like this. I'll be waitin!
I qould say the key word to describe this chapter is 'bittersweet'.
First, we see Yato with Father, in a somewhat sensitive situation and with Yato trying to kill him.
Then it's Hiyori, texting with her friends and thinking about them.
I like it! Everybody's in different moods. Hiyori's happy to be back with her friends, even if it's only one night. Yato's trying to stand his father. I wonder when will they be reunited? It's sad to see them like this. I'll be waitin!
11/2/2019 c4 1Sinner.0
Its just weird. Switching back and forth so often, and only using the most common words
1Sinner.0Its just weird. Switching back and forth so often, and only using the most common words
11/2/2019 c4 Sinner.0
If you’re gonna write Japanese words, might as well write the whole thing in Japanese
If you’re gonna write Japanese words, might as well write the whole thing in Japanese
10/28/2019 c29 WhiteLilyPad101
Lmao get rekt Kazuma. Died of laughter in this one jsjsjsjs (Yeah I read the 30th one before the 29th. Didn't notice it tho, haha)
Lmao get rekt Kazuma. Died of laughter in this one jsjsjsjs (Yeah I read the 30th one before the 29th. Didn't notice it tho, haha)
10/28/2019 c30 WhiteLilyPad101
Whaaaaa?! Awwwww! How could you do that to me?! Oh nooo... Kyaaa~ Do y'all think they might find out about Hiyori's current situation? Oh my goodness can't wait! Yet, I'll be waiting... impatiently lol
Whaaaaa?! Awwwww! How could you do that to me?! Oh nooo... Kyaaa~ Do y'all think they might find out about Hiyori's current situation? Oh my goodness can't wait! Yet, I'll be waiting... impatiently lol
10/20/2019 c28 WhiteLilyPad101
Oh my... Oh well. Guess Yukine did find out! I wonder what're you up to! As always, loved it, but specially the last part, and when Hiyori sniffs Yato's shirt. It's really like her Poor Yukine having to deal with so much things at the time. Please don't make it as bad as the manga, or make it worse! (If you read it, you know everything' pretty messed up) Hehe, read ya soon!
Oh my... Oh well. Guess Yukine did find out! I wonder what're you up to! As always, loved it, but specially the last part, and when Hiyori sniffs Yato's shirt. It's really like her Poor Yukine having to deal with so much things at the time. Please don't make it as bad as the manga, or make it worse! (If you read it, you know everything' pretty messed up) Hehe, read ya soon!
10/20/2019 c28 15Zinnia99
I'm wondering how soon after she discovered the text did she make this trip to Kofuku's place. Hiyori needs to stop making these trips to Kofuku's by herself. She always ends up a wreck by the time she arrives.
Kofuku's little stunt with her words was funny to me. At first I was like well if that's how you really feel, but then she explained herself which made things better.
For some reason I was expecting Kofuku to grab one of Daikoku's shirts not Yato's. We all know how much Hiyori loves that natural Yato scent.
I'm a bit confused with Hiyori's logic. Why did she expect to find answers at Kofuku's place when the people Yato's closest with (Hiyori and Yukine) don't know what's happening?
Also, poor Yukine busting through the door at the end. At this rate, Hiyori won't be the only one with high blood pressure.
15Zinnia99I'm wondering how soon after she discovered the text did she make this trip to Kofuku's place. Hiyori needs to stop making these trips to Kofuku's by herself. She always ends up a wreck by the time she arrives.
Kofuku's little stunt with her words was funny to me. At first I was like well if that's how you really feel, but then she explained herself which made things better.
For some reason I was expecting Kofuku to grab one of Daikoku's shirts not Yato's. We all know how much Hiyori loves that natural Yato scent.
I'm a bit confused with Hiyori's logic. Why did she expect to find answers at Kofuku's place when the people Yato's closest with (Hiyori and Yukine) don't know what's happening?
Also, poor Yukine busting through the door at the end. At this rate, Hiyori won't be the only one with high blood pressure.
10/20/2019 c27 Zinnia99
Hiyori's stalking Yato's social media is both hilarious and really sad. It's definitely something us readers can relate to whether it's been stalking a crush or looking at memories from a past relationship.
Well good job, Masaomi. You came up with a lie and blew it. I think he handled the situation a bit poorly and everything just spiraled out of control.
I love how insane everything is right now. Hiyori blaming Masaomi, Masaomi blaming Hiyori, Yukine just watching it all go down.
I think Hiyori and Yukine should just come clean about Yato at this point because they have no clue when and if he can come back to them. I also think it might be handy if they introduce Hiyori's brother to Daikoku and Kofuku since tensions are running high at his place.
Poor Hiyori and all this stress. Yukine is so cute and helpful. I do find it a bit odd that he couldn't work the stove or oven. He's a bit mature and has to fend for himself when Yato's not around, so I'm pretty sure he'd be able to figure it out. (Just a minor thing you may want to reconsider for the future).
I wonder why Hiyori didn't check Yato's phone first. It seems like it would be the first place to look. Hopefully she doesn't stress too much more after finding out why Yato left.
Hiyori's stalking Yato's social media is both hilarious and really sad. It's definitely something us readers can relate to whether it's been stalking a crush or looking at memories from a past relationship.
Well good job, Masaomi. You came up with a lie and blew it. I think he handled the situation a bit poorly and everything just spiraled out of control.
I love how insane everything is right now. Hiyori blaming Masaomi, Masaomi blaming Hiyori, Yukine just watching it all go down.
I think Hiyori and Yukine should just come clean about Yato at this point because they have no clue when and if he can come back to them. I also think it might be handy if they introduce Hiyori's brother to Daikoku and Kofuku since tensions are running high at his place.
Poor Hiyori and all this stress. Yukine is so cute and helpful. I do find it a bit odd that he couldn't work the stove or oven. He's a bit mature and has to fend for himself when Yato's not around, so I'm pretty sure he'd be able to figure it out. (Just a minor thing you may want to reconsider for the future).
I wonder why Hiyori didn't check Yato's phone first. It seems like it would be the first place to look. Hopefully she doesn't stress too much more after finding out why Yato left.
10/20/2019 c26 Zinnia99
I love the little domestic home life that's going on with Hiyori, Masaomi, and Yukine. I'd like to see some of Hiyori's future appointments in later chapters to add to the pregnancy experience. This chapter was a bit slower-paced and more simple than past ones.
I love the little domestic home life that's going on with Hiyori, Masaomi, and Yukine. I'd like to see some of Hiyori's future appointments in later chapters to add to the pregnancy experience. This chapter was a bit slower-paced and more simple than past ones.
10/20/2019 c25 Zinnia99
This chapter seemed a bit more dialogue heavy to me for some reason. Not that it's a bad thing, it might seem that way since I really focused on what was being said more so than what was happening in the background. I loved the interaction between Father and Yato; it was beautifully done. Maybe next time we see Yato, he'll have a list of potential names. I can't wait to see how the Father situation plays out.
This chapter seemed a bit more dialogue heavy to me for some reason. Not that it's a bad thing, it might seem that way since I really focused on what was being said more so than what was happening in the background. I loved the interaction between Father and Yato; it was beautifully done. Maybe next time we see Yato, he'll have a list of potential names. I can't wait to see how the Father situation plays out.
10/13/2019 c27 WhiteLilyPad101
Nooooo! Oh my goodness! What'll Hiyori think when she sees the pictures?! Oh my God I can't wait!
As always, good cliffhanger. You really have, actually you really always have me. It's just.. amazing. I'm speechless.
Keep up the good work!
Nooooo! Oh my goodness! What'll Hiyori think when she sees the pictures?! Oh my God I can't wait!
As always, good cliffhanger. You really have, actually you really always have me. It's just.. amazing. I'm speechless.
Keep up the good work!